It's cool, that messy style. I like Tohru X Yuki too! But Tohru x Kyo is ok too.

constructive...? you're still upset because of that comment, huh? don't worry! this drawing is far too cute for anyone to comment like that! ^o^ ^o^

It's cute^^ I think you did a good job on it! Hmm...the only thing I could see, ummm....might be something and Tohru's eyes. But that's all. Good job, RK!