pfft. So I finally had the time to submit this. Long story short I've had a lot of crazy unexpected things happen. Some just odd and others heartbreaking. But this isn't a biography of my life so on to the picture.

this is as stated the second design I had for the Pokemon Rival in my eventually upcoming fan comic. I would REALLY like anyone who looks at this and the other design to tell me which one they like better, or what things they like from each of them, or even a suggestion on what I could do instead. Any feedback will be much appreciated.

BTW the other picture is "Rival (Version 1)"