What is wrong me recently I can't seem to draw DX

This is a gift I had promised to Chi a long time ago, it features Alice and all of the little gifts and trinkets she's collected and recived whilst interacting with my oc's. They trinkets are a water/snow globe of a dolphin she recived from Ozzy on the beach RP, Ozzy's big fluffeh jumper from when they had a water fight (PM RP), there's meant to be an astronamy book there (it's the blue book but I forgot to wright astronamy on it), shell she and Llew had collected together (can't remember from what Rp that's from), a painting of a watery/foresty/mountiny landscape from Mike, when she visited him (PM RP) and some dog chains, that say best friend, Llew wanted to give them to Alice but didn't get a chance to in an RP (Llew's never been very good with timing XD).

As for the keychains, sorry for not sending them, I will I just want to write/draw something to accompany it and I'mm bad at that sort of thing at the momment.

Alice belongs to Chipolvee.
okay no more bothering you

I hope you all like it :)