Ya agree on that. Dolls give me the creeps too esp those antique looking porcelain ones...feel like there's something in them somehow >< bjd are nice to look at but if placed at home, they re kinda like human sitting there so its bit scary too... anyways, thanks ya! Hope the next work wont disappoint you
Thanks for spending time for such detailed comment! Will look out on the stuff you mentioned for future works, a few longer ones are in the planning process^^ sorry that this one turned out quite confusing, wanted to submit it to mag which limit the pages to only 8 max so basically cut down a lot of stuff in order to fit everything...anyway, thanks! You ve been a great help!
Thank you! ^^ sorry, but for the meantime havent plan to make a 2nd one for this as it was meant as a one shot. In the process of making a longer piece now, hope you will like it too
Ruler of Hell (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/12/12 | Reply
this is awesome. the story of lilith and that she was first with adam! heheh i love it. also having an apple around eves neck perfict! the nicest lil touch i have seen! only thing i wish it was longer! thought you can awalys make a second volume and contuie it... *hopes*
hehe
keep up the lovely work
*fallows you*
:D take care
I'm not really sure what happened. How does Adam know that doll? Due to the names I thought of it as the devil for some reason, although that's me being weird. If that was the case then it would have to be more obvious so we don't get confused. Watch out for grammar also and the poses of the old man from earlier. Maybe if you made it slightly longer there would be more balance to it and it would be easier to understand. The average one shot has at least 30 pages so that an entire story can be fitted in. Why did the doll push her onto the road? Think about the whole purpose of the doll. It must have had a full reason to kill Adam's girlfriend. Maybe it was his ex-girlfriend once and she killed herself and to exact revenge possessed a doll and wanted to kill the person closest to Adam. Think about these things. You're art is brilliant, don't change it.
Whoa, I like it. I like creepy horror stuff. Dolls are indeed scary.... I like the Adam and Eve concept, very cool. Your style is so unique and elegant. Reminds me of Dolls, the manga (I don't read it, but seen it before)You drew it all well too, keep it up, can't wait for more
evageline143
Otakuite | Posted 02/11/13 | Reply
@HotRamen2Go009:
Ya agree on that. Dolls give me the creeps too esp those antique looking porcelain ones...feel like there's something in them somehow >< bjd are nice to look at but if placed at home, they re kinda like human sitting there so its bit scary too... anyways, thanks ya! Hope the next work wont disappoint you
evageline143
Otakuite | Posted 02/11/13 | Reply
@elementalprincess:
Thanks for spending time for such detailed comment! Will look out on the stuff you mentioned for future works, a few longer ones are in the planning process^^ sorry that this one turned out quite confusing, wanted to submit it to mag which limit the pages to only 8 max so basically cut down a lot of stuff in order to fit everything...anyway, thanks! You ve been a great help!
evageline143
Otakuite | Posted 02/11/13 | Reply
@luicifers wife:
Thank you! ^^ sorry, but for the meantime havent plan to make a 2nd one for this as it was meant as a one shot. In the process of making a longer piece now, hope you will like it too
luicifers wife
Ruler of Hell (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/12/12 | Reply
this is awesome. the story of lilith and that she was first with adam! heheh i love it. also having an apple around eves neck perfict! the nicest lil touch i have seen! only thing i wish it was longer! thought you can awalys make a second volume and contuie it... *hopes*
hehe
keep up the lovely work
*fallows you*
:D take care
elementalprincess
Otakuite++ | Posted 04/12/12 | Reply
I'm not really sure what happened. How does Adam know that doll? Due to the names I thought of it as the devil for some reason, although that's me being weird. If that was the case then it would have to be more obvious so we don't get confused. Watch out for grammar also and the poses of the old man from earlier. Maybe if you made it slightly longer there would be more balance to it and it would be easier to understand. The average one shot has at least 30 pages so that an entire story can be fitted in. Why did the doll push her onto the road? Think about the whole purpose of the doll. It must have had a full reason to kill Adam's girlfriend. Maybe it was his ex-girlfriend once and she killed herself and to exact revenge possessed a doll and wanted to kill the person closest to Adam. Think about these things. You're art is brilliant, don't change it.
HotRamen2Go009
Agent Ramen (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/11/12 | Reply
Whoa, I like it. I like creepy horror stuff. Dolls are indeed scary.... I like the Adam and Eve concept, very cool. Your style is so unique and elegant. Reminds me of Dolls, the manga (I don't read it, but seen it before)You drew it all well too, keep it up, can't wait for more