Oh yeah, I was wondering if people would go to that panel first. Maybe I should've put a little arrow there to direct them down first? Oh well, too late now. But then again, that happens a lot in manga and I get confused with it.
I think your drawings are really cute-- especially when Al is rolling around laughing. Ed as a stick figure falling off the roof was funny, too.
The part where Ed says, "Well, what about you?" confused me a little because my eyes wanted to go to the "I'd be a vet..." part first.
Other than what I mentioned above, your comic was easy to follow. It was easy to tell what Ed was thinking and feeling just by a simple mouth shape and the curve of his eyebrows.
Call it karma. Call it luck. Me, I just don't give a... BOUNCE!
elricbrothersfan
Otaku Legend | Posted 11/02/12 | Reply
@Natsumichan8:
Thanks! Yours was hilarious :)
Natsumichan8
Otakuite+ | Posted 11/02/12 | Reply
Congrats! I really enjoyed yours a lot, it made me laugh ^^
elricbrothersfan
Otaku Legend | Posted 11/01/12 | Reply
@Keba Si Rota:
Oh yeah, I was wondering if people would go to that panel first. Maybe I should've put a little arrow there to direct them down first? Oh well, too late now. But then again, that happens a lot in manga and I get confused with it.
*punches air, yells "SECOND PLACE!! WOO!"*
Thanks, Keba-san!
Keba Si Rota
Don't Forget 3 Oct (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/01/12 | Reply
I'm glad you made the Challenge just in time!
Congratulations! You won 2nd place!
I think your drawings are really cute-- especially when Al is rolling around laughing. Ed as a stick figure falling off the roof was funny, too.
The part where Ed says, "Well, what about you?" confused me a little because my eyes wanted to go to the "I'd be a vet..." part first.
Other than what I mentioned above, your comic was easy to follow. It was easy to tell what Ed was thinking and feeling just by a simple mouth shape and the curve of his eyebrows.
Call it karma. Call it luck. Me, I just don't give a... BOUNCE!
elricbrothersfan
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/31/12 | Reply
@Moka:
Glad you like it!
Moka
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/30/12 | Reply
YES ^(+.+)^