@Naomi Bear:

thank you for reading!

This comic... Is just... Adorable!!!
<333333

@toyotami kun:

:D Yeah, I don't like to use sketchbooks either cuz I feel restricted....

Have a good one

@HotRamen2Go009:

my drawing are everywhere, inside folders, inside boxes..... XD I really need to use a sketchbook, but I don't like them.

and thank you! I'll see if I do more that are not pokemon related. XD

Cool, It's nice to see more comics from you :) Where do you keep your drawing? In a box?

Have a good one Toya

@Pennguin:

nah it's fine! and I am feeling okay. XD which is why I want to redo them! XD

@toyotami kun:

oh i see , sorry about that ^^; well i hope that you get well soon and don't criticize your self too much !

@Pennguin:

I'm not redoing the comic, just the last 5-6 pages. They need to be redone, they are horrible.oTL plusiwasstressedthetimeidrewthemcausejunk.

wwaahhhh bu tthese are really nice !!! don't re do them ;A; <33

@NamiSu:

ah it's alright! XD I'm really glad you enjoyed the comic! and I'm a girl! lol

erp.. i just realized that i typed comment and not comic...SORRY!

WOW!!! This comment is totally cool! I wish I could do that! You got skills mister or....erm.... it's hard to simply say things when you don't know one's gender.... Oh! I know! Person you got some mad skills!

Omigoodness, the two new pages!!! Again, too cute, I love this so much!! I'm gonna get my sisters to read it too <3 I love Rai being a dork XD Amazing work, Toya!!!!

@DeathSeraph:

Raimundo: Eh? I'm not cute at all...*pouts*
(he totally wags that tail when someone calls him "cool" lol)

lol don't listen to him! XD Thank you Sera!!! XD I'm very glad you're enjoying this! XD I look forward to finishing it soon!

OMG Rai wagging his tail is so CUTE!! X3 I love his expression in there!!!
you're really doing an awesome work here ;D

@toyotami kun:

He can't resist the kawaii!! You're welcome! ^^

@kita mikichi:

Ah Kita! thank you!!! XD He would probably never tell her what he's thinking, but her Kaiwaii will get to him. XD

Haha, I love Rai's thinking and saying different things. XD And I love Kiiro's kawaii attack.

@MangaKid:

Yay, I'm glad you'll consider it! I will look forward to it if you get the chance! it'll be fun to see what you bring!
I just can't believe I'm almost done!!! XD I have to ink about 5 pages right now and draw out maybe 5 more pages and I'll be done! It's just so close I can't believe it and I'm really excited! XD

I'm having a lot of fun with this project and I can't wait to do more as long as I know everyone is enjoying them. X 3
It's really fun!

@toyotami kun:

Yay!! You're welcome, Toya <3 I just love your work so much!

I will then, when I can! Yeah I feel like it would be good practice and a bit better to work from an RP too.
I love that you're almost done this, its so inspiring that you worked on it so hard and have almost finished this project!! You must be really proud, you should be :D

Oh thats awesome!! You're on a roll, Toya! ;)

@MangaKid:

Thank You Jen! you're making me very happy! XD

Oh you should try making a short comic out of your RP if you can! I think it will be very good practice and help out with planning out a comic.
It'd be pretty fun and interesting to do.

Oh you saw them? I'm glad! XD I'm going to see if I tackle that story next and finish it so then I can work on that other project I'm planning out.

@toyotami kun:

^_^ I'm glad, cuz u deserve it!! I'm really loving this comic!
Thats so awesome!! I'm so happy for you <3 And I'm excited to see more work from you! I've also wanted to make a comic based on the RP I'm doing with Chi and Live, like the Rain one Chi is doing... I think having the story planned out in RP really helps!

No problem, thankyou for taing the time to create it cuz everyone is enjoying it lots!! And I saw your other two pages from If We Ever Meet Again, I'm glad u found those and posted the up too! ^_^

@toyotami kun:

OH, it must be that, then.

@Kazamas-Keyblade:

no they don't, they have just have like a fin thing on the top of it's head?
nah it's fine, I'm not to sharp on them either. XD

@toyotami kun:

Buisels don't have ears? Maybe its something else.
(My Pokémon knowledge is way off, sorry about that.)

@Kazamas-Keyblade:

lol really? I guess the do. XD
but I don't think Buizels have ears, I was thinking more that hair, but that's an interesting observation. XD

@MangaKid:

JEN! Thank you very much! Your comment is super nice and made me smile! I'm really happy that you are liking all the pages and I'm really excited too!
This will be the first time I complete something that has so many pages! I'm really glad I was able to bring the rp to life, it really helped me figure out how to plan out everything and draw it.
I'm really hoping I can apply this to future comics!

Thank you very much for taking time to read this! : )

@ChiPolVee:

thank you Chi! I'm working on pages and hopefully have some up later or tomorrow! XD

I will try to keep a tag what happens then! X 3

@toyotami kun:

IDK, its just the ears say "Buizel."

OH So many more pages, I'm so surprised and proud of you, Toya!!! <3 This one shot is so amazing, I really love your work here!
You are so good at doing comics, and characters!! Rai is awesome! Moe Kiiro is just the cutest, I really love her face in the bottom left panel of page 13 too!! I think you are doing a super job on this whole thing, I can't believe how awesome this is!! and you're almost done!! Keep up the great work <3 The way you're inking these pages and drawing them, just genius and brilliant! I love love love ur handwriting too <3

@toyotami kun:

You did a wonderful job on this! I think it's amazing and I'm super excited for a new page~ <3
Keep us up to date with them please~ <3

@ChiPolVee:

lol I'm glad those little interactions caused an effect. X 3 makes me feel like I accomplished something with simple material! XD
we'll see what happens. XD

@Kazamas-Keyblade:

Oh no it's fine Dark, he actually reminds me of one too for some reason? XD

@toyotami kun:

I ship ship ship it!! I've only seen them interact this little bit and I already ship the heck out of them!! <3 <3 I hope it grows to something more~

Don't take this the wrong way
Every time I see Rai I think he looks like a Buisel.

@ChiPolVee:

oh gosh Chi, you're making me giggle too much!!!!! XD they kind of do have a budding relationship

I SHIP IT!!! Sorry had to~ <3

@CelestialSushi:

I will if I can come around to doodling that! it should be fun! XD

@toyotami kun:

Glad to hear it :D Isn't he adorkable, though? XD But due to that choking hazard, someone else should call him that. I'd like to see his reaction :D

@CelestialSushi:

omg Sushi!!!! your comment made my day!!! XD it's just so clever! and yes that would be so weird if he said that!!! he'll probably choke trying to say it! XD

@Pennguin:

lol he blindly ran into that one. XD

@Kazamas-Keyblade:

thank you Dark! I just feel like I take to long, but that's reassuring. : )

I thought he was about to say he's "adorkable" XD But that would sound weird coming from him.

processing data omg !! xD <3

Good job, man!
You're coming out with pages like rapid-fire!

@ChiPolVee:

thank you Chi! I really appreciate it! : )

@toyotami kun:

Thank you so so much! You're a wonderful artist and super sweet too! I'm pretty sure I'm going to spam all of your work with love and adoration because you deserve that~ You are amazing~ <3

@ChiPolVee:

you're too sweet Chi. : ) that really means a lot! I'm trying my best to construct a good comic and I'm really happy that I inspired you to work on your own.
Your current comic is going by really well and I like how you're telling the story too.
Keep up the awesome work too!

@toyotami kun:

You know Toyo, this comic and a few of your others are the entire reason I'm trying to make a comic of my own~ I look up to you and admire your work so much! You're amazing! Please keep making this and being awesome!!

@ChiPolVee:

Thank you very much CHI! I don't mind if you spam me! I really enjoy reading comments on the story, cause I really like to know what people think so far! XD
I'm really happy that you are enjoying this a lot! It means a lot to me!
Thank very much for taking time to read this!

This is so wonderful!! I just want to spam you with all the love I feel for this!! This is wonderful!! I love your art style so much!!! This is so cute~ I love the new pages~ You're so good at telling a story through your art!! Rai's smile makes me so happy!! It's so beautiful!! <3 <3

@Dragoncia:

Thank You very much! XD

@Pennguin:

she is Moe queen after all. XD

THIS IS SO CUTE!!!! <333333

But it is a serious conversation at the same time! Just awesome! :D

SCREECHES/ SHREIKS
THE MOEEHEHHEEEEE---
I CAN'T

@Pennguin:

lol things I come up with when I'm bored at work....oTL

@MangaKid:

I can understand about being lazy! but you really need to continue your manga!!!! I really look forward to seeing the start of it at least!!! XD

and thank you very much for taking time to read this!!! I'm really happy that I went through with making the rp a comic! though this is really sketchy.
I really miss making comics and the other comic project is going to take a while before I start drawing it. so this will do for now!

@ChiPolVee:

Thank you very much chi!

ashfjkaslhfjdkalhfjalkhfjakl Toya, amazing awesome incredible work!!! I love this comic, its super to see u posting a comic again, you are so good at drawing out stories!! I love your style and the way u present this, it's drawing me right in!! It is almost enough to inspire me to get back to drawing my own comic!!.. Wait, it IS enough to inspire me, I'm just too lazy xP I absolutely love this tho, I can't say enough good things about it! Looks like it was a fun RP too!
Kyaaaaa ur style and drawings of Kiiro and Rai are just the cutest and so perfect!! <3<3<3<3<3

@toyotami kun:

I certainly am~ I love this! I'm looking forward to the rest of it~ Your drawing style is so cute~

@toyotami kun:

*SNORTS AND CHOKES* OMGFODM THAT MADE MY DAY.

@Pennguin:

lol they are also dorky quacks.

@ChiPolVee:

Thank You very much Chi! XD I'm glad you are enjoying this so far! XD

@DeathSeraph:

Thank You Sera! I'm having fun drawing Kiiro's expressions! XD I just hope I'm not butchering her design or personality! oTL

AWKWARD CHICKENS!!

This is so cute! I love the story! Very well done! I can't wait to see what happens next~ <3

aw, this is so adorable!! I love how you drew Kiiro, so cute!! ^^
I can't wait to see the next pages :3

@toyotami kun:

Of course!

@Kaerlyn:

Thank you!

@Pennguin:

Thanks yumei! I can't wait to keep adding pages. XD

@clueless101:

Thank you very much clue!

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Lol thank you red!!! Just wait til the end! XD

This really is cute! <3

OMG THIS IS SO CUTE SO FRAR

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This is so cute so far Toyo!

@toyotami kun:

i did one last night becuaswe
I HAD NO INTERNET OMG ;AAAAAAAAAA;

@Pennguin:

lol something to look forward too! stupid stuff! XD lol now you got me excited! XD

@toyotami kun:

cant wait!!
NOW I WILL GO MAKE STUPID STUFF OUT OF THIS BECUASE kai is.
kai

@Pennguin:

lol thanks! XD just wait until I start posting the actual pages!!!! but I need to adjust junk. = ^ = *

OMGMOGFFFG
WHY
IS
THIS ADORABLE OMG
IM LAUGHING AT THESE TWO . THEY ARE SO CUTE ;;;;;;;<3