Hey I think it's good o3o keep it comin!

OH Your newest pages *U* Brilliant!! I finally had some time to catch up on DB, and its super cool! I absolutely love the last page but the other pages are great too! Dont worry about being rough, thats where it starts and sometimes it slows you down too much to do everything neatly. I might end up doing draft work for LoveLocket, just to get it done xD haha But your story is looking awesome so far, its great that you have been working on this so hard and its all coming together now!! *GO BONNIE GO!!!* I'm gonna be cheering for you and more pages :D

@Keba Si Rota:

Yes :D I realized from your comment, I didn't add a summary on the front page *silly me xD* So thank you!
I'm guessing it was a slight surprise xD
Tis a fight between the modern and traditional!

So they're battling robots? Never would've expected that. Somehow I got this samurai vibe from the story before I knew about the robots.

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Thanks Vosh! I hope to update soon, I have three pages so far, so I'm going to mega update :) I'm so happy you're enjoying it so far!

@Aryia:

Awww thanks Aryia! I'm glad you're liking it so far too! :)
I was worried that I get into the story too fast, but my sister said it was good, and I'm relieved to hear from you that you like it as well! ^^
Yes, the title is my pride and joy! >3<

@MangaKid:

:D Yeah...I had these two pages redrawn so many times! This time I think it portrayed what I wanted it to :) Hopefully not too bloody! xD Glad you're liking it so far Jen! :D

@Keba Si Rota:

Yay! I'm happy my characters are interesting enough to perk your interest! :) You'll get to meet them soon ^^

WHOOOP YOU MADE A PIECE OF YOUR MANGA. Great! =^.^=

It looks fantastic, even the sketches. I love how you start with a piece of history of 'just' a set of blades. I just still love the text/title with the two characters integrated. Lovely work on perspective as well. Can't wait to see more!

WOW Pages 1 and 2... super epicness right there!!!! GAH he killed his sister o_O I love how you showed the power of the blades and then leave us all on a little cliff hanger XD

Adding to favorites for easy access later. I want to read it because being your SS got me interested in your characters.

@ItachiSasuke:

I'm gonna keep a close eye on it for all the new pages, but also no pressure on you! Sometimes its hard to keep up the work and post on schedule too... But this is just so awesome!!! I know you can do it!
sdhfjkalhf thankyou, I feel so special because of that ^///U///^

@Sakura Tachibana:

Thanks Sakura! Yes, my cover is now blown >3

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Aww thanks Ashia! :) I know, you helped vote for the title logo too! I can't believe that was almost a year ago xD I'm happy you're excited for it, I just hope it doesn't disappoint~

@MangaKid:

YES!! HAHA, I know you've waited a long time for this too! :) I'm working on the page I'm going to post today as well! ^O^ I'm glad you like the set up so far, I used your manga set up as reference actually x3 Thanks Jenn!

SHJKFLSHSAJFLHAJKL IT'S FINALLY ARRIVED!!!!!! Don't worry about the rough version, I think its gonna be amazing! I'm just on the cover and I'm spazzing xD Let me return when I look at the next pages ;D

GAH everything looks awesome so far!!
Lol I'm building up excitement right now XD Lol! I shall write you more comments when you get more pages up!

@Rainbow Dragon:

>3< Thank you for saying that Judai!! I'm happy you think so ^^ I'm hopefully going to post the first two pages tomorrow :)

This is going to be an epic story manga. I'm looking forward to this. The covers and the art look great. Its looks so good~<3
I look forward to reading more.
~Judai