Good job I fell in love with it already
I just gotta say one thing tho. Whenever I read manga, its usually the same story line as yours. I kind of wished something different but this is my opinion. Other than you, you are an excellent artist
It fell down when Tomoya tryed to kiss her..it's a remake of my old manga and the next page schould have been that Chizuru says that he should enjoy the pie (and a picture of the pie lying backwords on the floor) and then she leaves.....and Tomoya thinks that he is going to have a lot of fun with her xDD but i was so concentrated on drawing my bleach manga so that i dint have any time anymore for remember me :( also i had a lot of problems with this page...tryed a few times but i didnt like it
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For pages 12 and 13, I'm actually like "You go girl!" If only I could be like that in real life. Loved how she knocked his socks off.
Amazing art and story, keep up the good work.
Last edited by Judai Winchester at 12:06:57 PM EDT on April 17, 2016.
I love this manga so much! I'm literally reading this everytime I see a new post for it. It has such a good story line. Can't wait to see what happens next, your artwork is beautiful by the way.
yeah... i thought it would be only one page deleted, but i was wrong lol T.T maybe it's not such a bad idea to redraw it, but irt still suks to loose everything Q.Q
Maedabae
Otakuite | Posted 05/17/16 | Reply
Good job
I fell in love with it already
I just gotta say one thing tho. Whenever I read manga, its usually the same story line as yours. I kind of wished something different but this is my opinion. Other than you, you are an excellent artist
Shimozuku20
Grand Otaku | Posted 04/26/16 | Reply
@OoAnBuOo:
http://postimg.org/image/n5ev2boht/
Shimozuku20
Grand Otaku | Posted 04/26/16 | Reply
@OoAnBuOo:
It fell down when Tomoya tryed to kiss her..it's a remake of my old manga and the next page schould have been that Chizuru says that he should enjoy the pie (and a picture of the pie lying backwords on the floor) and then she leaves.....and Tomoya thinks that he is going to have a lot of fun with her xDD but i was so concentrated on drawing my bleach manga so that i dint have any time anymore for remember me :( also i had a lot of problems with this page...tryed a few times but i didnt like it
Last edited by Shimozuku20 at 5:59:39 PM EDT on April 27, 2016.
OoAnBuOo
Jabbawookie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/26/16 | Reply
What happened to the pie on page 11?
Rainbow Dragon
☠Eastsider✰Pirate☠ (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/17/16 | Reply
For pages 12 and 13, I'm actually like "You go girl!" If only I could be like that in real life. Loved how she knocked his socks off.
Amazing art and story, keep up the good work.
Last edited by Judai Winchester at 12:06:57 PM EDT on April 17, 2016.
Shimozuku20
Grand Otaku | Posted 04/16/16 | Reply
@Rainbow Dragon:
ill probably upload another one soon ^^im working on it right now :) thanks <33
Rainbow Dragon
☠Eastsider✰Pirate☠ (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/16/16 | Reply
Yay new page. It looks beautiful.
and he's cute too.loving this so far.Shimozuku20
Grand Otaku | Posted 04/15/16 | Reply
@Rainbow Dragon:
thank you so much ^^ im on vacation so u've drawen 4-5 pages in two days lol
Rainbow Dragon
☠Eastsider✰Pirate☠ (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/15/16 | Reply
I love this manga so much! I'm literally reading this everytime I see a new post for it. It has such a good story line. Can't wait to see what happens next, your artwork is beautiful by the way.
Shimozuku20
Grand Otaku | Posted 02/03/16 | Reply
@raeossom29:
i'm sooo happy to hear that! thanks!
raeossom29
Otakuite+ | Posted 02/03/16 | Reply
This looks great!!!
I'm sooo looking forward to more of this! Keep up the great work!!
I would have commented sooner but my laptop was dumb °^°
~Rae
Shimozuku20
Grand Otaku | Posted 01/24/16 | Reply
@ItachiSasuke:
thanks :DD
ItachiSasuke
Administrator | Posted 01/24/16 | Reply
It looks amazing so far! Really admire your mangaka skills! :D
Find a reason to smile
Shimozuku20
Grand Otaku | Posted 01/23/16 | Reply
@:
yeah... i thought it would be only one page deleted, but i was wrong lol T.T maybe it's not such a bad idea to redraw it, but irt still suks to loose everything Q.Q