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    Mr. Martian

    Otakuite | Posted 10/28/06 | Reply

    i agree w/ mah man kita this is a little confusing! well ok

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    Raynabee

    Senior Otaku | Posted 10/20/06 | Reply

    Sasukes hand is a little to big work on your sizeing the comic is vary confuzzleing Wolf =^^=

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    Chibi Artist Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/20/06 | Reply

    Your comic is very interesting, but some of the panels are confusing, and you should probably explain some of the things that the characters are talking about. That will help your reader to enjoy the comic more.