i've seen a lot of comics where people just thorw thier own character into a story and i have to say, i think your's is by far the best.

hehe she got him pregnant XD

OMG SHEEEEE HAS TO GET LONGER CLOTHSSS HAHAAA AWSOME MORE MORE ^O^

Fantastic. I really think I'm gonna start reading Yu Yu Hakusho now. I've thought about it before, but your manga is making me really want to^^

wooooo! go the chibis XD

your manga is really good! please continue to update regularly!! ^o^=

I love this ^^ You make me laugh everytime I read it, haha. Keep going! More updates! more updates! :)

Yay for Hiei! (even though I've never read more than a chapter or two of Yu Yu Hakusho in Shonen Jump and I've never seen any. heh heh) I sill think Hiei is teh bomb-ness. lol.

I love this story. Makes me want to watch/read Yu Yu Hakusho. Hrm.

This is awesome. I can't wait to see some more! That is Hiei's sword, yes yes....:3

This is so fun to read! I love Ayame's personality. Update more please!

this is awsome !
keep going !

OMG I LOVE THIS HAHAA AWSOME HOPE TO C MORE

Love the fire

The interaction between Ayame and Kaori is quite hilarious; they're so opposite. This is probably one of the best- quality fancomics on this site. Keep up the fantastic work! :D

Hmm... I just read through the archives when I should have been doing my Latin homework. XD It was quite abrupt when I reached the point where the was no more. I couldn't believe I'd just read 110 pages! Surprisingly entrancing storyline, I love this a lot. (And might I add how much I appreciate you for not having it be like "ZOMG KURAMA IS SOOO HAWT I WANT HIM *LUUUUST*" while he just goes head over heels for her? This is much, much better.) <3 You'll be submitting more this weekend? I'll most certainly be back! ^_^

woah . this is like , SUPER good . LUV it . TO THE MAX ! lol . this

it .

Rock on. I love this last page. Tis funny.

Rock on, my friend. I really like the new cover by the way. Pretty flippin' sweet.

Oh, wow, i have to agree with KMCM i mean completely agree. it's not that i don't love your story, which is awesome by the way, but i dont like some of the parts. i just thought ayame was some kind of gothic emo or angry angst kid but now she seems like a bi-polar perv to me. she tried to kiss him then hated him again then talked to another dude and then grabbed kurama's butt, it's like this is all wrong! i know i can't really say how easy it is to write manga because it's not of course and when i get my manga up i bet i'll have that kind of blind writer's block where i can't tell what im writing and just kind've weaving as i go along but what i've noticed is if you use a black ink pen instead of a cpu pen it helps the writer's block i have but anyways keep it up but i hope kurama can help get better

Wow, at first I thought I wouldn't bother with this story too much but you've made me very interested. I look forward to reading more

Wow! This manga is the awesomest! Can't wait for more XD

i think of it as quite amusing

I'm surprised no one has flamed this yet. Like those Mary Sue hunters that are prevalent everywhere else! I won't go into the inconsistencies unless you want to work to strengthen your story.

So I'm presuming this takes place after the series? Or is it during and there's a reason we don't hear of any of the ocs in the later sagas? (if so where in the series does this happen?)

I enjoy your artwork, a lot of it is really good! I wish I could draw that good to make my stories a reality

...although, I could have done with out reading the whole thing >~< It's sickening, but I could deal with everyone teasing Kurama suggesting to him that he likes her, but I have to stand up and say Ayame grabbing his rear was a bit inappropriate (and yes, I realize lots of mangas and stories will have things like that, but that does not make them right or acceptable) I just hope Kurama doesn't lower his standards to be with her but if it ends up he helps her become better (and he get better himself) that would be really cool to see)

Good luck with your stories!

yay for loads of pages! w00t! :3 Love it, as always.

i love you. you made my day! yes kinky stuff is much more intertaining! :3 its kinda weird though, she is really small and young looking compared to kurama, but what the hell why not! keep up the good work!

Omgshejustgrabbedhisrearwhatthehellareyoudoingpleasetellmethisisn'treal! Dude...dude..frickin'...omg...(if you cant tell, I'm really into the story ^.^;)

make more!!!

@NejixWrathLover:

He's not touching her at all. His hand is in front of her.

@shadow lugia:

This is the only time I've ever switched covers. >.

how many times have you switched covers now?

LOL i couldnt even picture her saying that.. i wonder why

Rock on. As I've said before, never seen or read Yu Yu Hakusho but this is pretty awesome. I love her hair at the top of this page^^

Okkayyy.... she really does despises him doesn't she
how many other girl could just faint from that... haha

I Love this Manga!! You do a very good job! Can't wait to read more!!

LOL "IT BURNS" IT SOUNDS LIKE SHE DESPISES HIM ALOT!! ;D

I lOve this comic!!
Keep up the good work
and I wonder who's that at the chapter 4 cover

YEA this story just keeps getting better and better!!

i love this comic. keep up the good work

Awesome. I haven't even watched Yu Yu Hakusho (I would like too, I just haven't had a chance) but I still really like this. Great job!

keep it up this stopry is awsome its in my top 5 list

this is awsome, will you upload some more? :3

0_o
harsh

>.< Why havn't i commented on this yet??!
Im shorry!
I do look for updates on this comic, i luv it =3
Keep it up!
Oh nice style btw ^^

YAY! I love it

Ok...I forgot....Is that dude ayame's dad?^-^Please continue 2,please!!

hhhhmmmmm....wanna read more now T_T again its awesome ^_^

love it and i love shuuichis character design ^_^

keep up the good work

u've been updating lots latley =D wheee I'm excited for wat comes next! wow only one person has commented from the last time I did......... grrrrrrrrrrrr read it ppl!!!!!!!!!!

LMFAO!!! "come on, Shuuichi! FOOD!!!" lol nice manga =D

Yum Yum Yum!!!!!!!!! Still lovin ur comic!!!!!! I'm, no I bet were all here giving u our support! Keep up the great work!!! Hugs to u, ayame, and kurama!!!!!!1

I so envy you for making it till page 28!!! And the story isn't bad! It's actually...well, i got hooked. CONTINUE!!!

I can't wait for you to update this comic, I loved it and your style. I wish I could draw like you, but mine truly suck.

awesomely awesome story!! update soon, please?
~arya minato and itachi