That's one DRAMATIC page of doom, there. Her pose and the fact that she'd surrounded by a giant black hole/gate/thingy is pretty freaking dramatic to me. I would have been screaming my head off. :9
OMG its the best manga i have ever read XP you did so well fun!! now i want try to make one along the same lines! or try >.< only mine mabe for older viewers like 16+ lol omg so many ideas flooding in to my head !! the animes i want to include (none that you have inclued) SO MUCH FUN!!
whoa! a kool fan manga! yayness! its amazing!! i recognized the clown's features about a page be4 it was said thats who he was (or wasnt, since hes the clowns brother...)
i hav sumthin like this all in my head too actually... wat does that mean....? well i wanna c how this 1 goes instead
WOW this is REALLY good!!! *subscribes* only problem i have with it is... The Kingdom Hearts theme... not original enough for me But i love your idea and i can't wait to read the rest... Can i ask something though... Can you make the font a bit bigger.. if possible cause it's pretty small...
Great Manga keep it up!!!
FUN-chan??? will you plz plz plz plz plz write some more?!?!??!
I started reading it and now I want more DX
I hope you will write more, becasue it is a very good capturing story, I dont mind some cussing and violence, I hang out with a couple of guys who cuss sometimes and think that Duct Tape and Violence solve everyhitng, so..yeah
plz write more soon
^^ for digimon I'm using seasons 2 and 4~~
she goes to season 2 first and then season 4! ^^
I want to say more but it would spoil an important part! so ur just going to have to wait until I get there~ x3
sweet XD
i'd like to see how you work with naruto and digimon-any idea which season you'll use? oh well-i'm sure it'll look great no matter what season you choose.
:3 thanks!
well, I'm pretty much using any anime that I like and can fit a story in. it's cuz I'm uncreative with names and designs and it's soo hard keeping up with so many characters. xD
but so far the list consists of
Kingdom Hearts 2, digimon, naruto, soul eater, BLEACH, Pokemon(maybe. the time laspe is confusing. @_@), Ouran High School(another maybe), and I believe that's all(for now xD)
x3 and yus, as you can see, digimon is on the list~~
I absolutely love that anime! it's the first one I made an OC for which later devoloped to Rei Uruhara who became the rest of my OCs. C:
great job with the shading, it's an awesome style and nice job with the clown :)!! kinda curious here-how many worlds do you plan on using? is digimon on the list?
My god this is amazing... just all of it together, the art, teh orginality, I wouldn't be surprized if this becomes a hit manga ^o^ I look forward to reading more~
This is brilliant. I love the detail in your artwork and the concept itself. I am dying to see which other worlds she ends up in ~ Applauds you ~ Really, really well done ^_^
NOT THE COMPANY ;D (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/15/08 | Reply
@:
^^ well, you need to revert it to JPEG format. just go to file>save for the web and make sure to put it on JPEG. also make sure you put it on high, or 60 quality cuz you don't want the file size to be too big.
^^ I hope that helps! 8D and I'm glad you like my manga!
Last edited by FUNimation at 7:00:11 PM EDT on August 16, 2008.
Neko Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/15/08 | Reply
YES!!!! You updated!!!!! ^.^ I'm very happy now. Nice job! I cannot wait to see what happens next!!! I love her expression when the jester gets up in her face! lol
~Chero~
I love Riko's expression in the top left panel of page 12... XD XD And the jester guy amuses me... X3 Heh, smart girl, Riko, what a smart girl you are. XD *hugs* Can't wait for mooooorrrre..!!!!
zomg finally an update! ^-^ yay!
o nos! is she gunna say yes?! the tension is killing me! *not really i think i know whats gunna happen ;)
lol update soon~! cant wait to see more!
NOT THE COMPANY ;D (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/29/08 | Reply
@:
lol floaty head thingy actually isn't a KH character. he's my original character that is the brother of the Gate Keeper Clown from Marchen Awakens Romance(MAR) lol :3
Oh, yes! I'm favoriting this! It's like Disney's Kingdom Hearts, only it's all manga-ish. woot. I think I get it... I wanna continue reading! I loved MAR!!! Woot!
~Yosei (TheDarkAngel)
XD ya....Since Riko is the anime version of me, I decided to put someone calling Riko oyster. hmm....I should've changed her name so that her last name meant oyster, that would make more sense. XD lol o well.
oh, wow, i thot it was great b4, but this... this is FANTASTIC.
i love it so much! the art looks really good, and i love the dialogue.
and i love the pen spinning action. XD it did look great tho, seriously!
and i like how u changed the plot a lil' bit. like, how now her name changes cuz she forgets it, and that last page really sets the stage.
this rocks, Fun-chan!
I can't wait to see the next page!
WOOH!! NEW version of the previous one eh? I betcha this one is gonna be 10x better!! OH! Can't wait till you update some more of it! I find it really interesting so far!! YAY! GO bloody teen violence! *Highfives* Go us! Violent minors are awesome!
Yay!!!!!!!! i can't wait to see more Fun-chan!! X3 *hugs every page*
*fave*
btw, i noticed that there is a small error in the title, "rikuesto no shinzo" means "heart of the request" so you just need to switch it around, and ure good ^^; and also, just incase u didn;t know; shinzo means literaly the heart "organ" if u meant the OTHER "heart" it's "kokoro". But if u made it that way intentionally, ure okies XD
key2light
Otakuite | Posted 10/25/09 | Reply
awesome comic! did you draw it, or just come up with the story? drawings are great!
allycat2090
Senior Otaku | Posted 08/10/09 | Reply
Update this soon ne? it's sooooooooooooooooooooooooo interesting!
DanniDisaster
Otakuite | Posted 06/15/09 | Reply
Update D:
ohmigosh please!
i come like everyday just to see if you do D:
kimichirobo
Otakuite | Posted 03/22/09 | Reply
wow, this is really good!!
and Riko really reminds me of myself.. she even looks kinda like me ._. weirrddd~~ but very good anyway
FUNimation
NOT THE COMPANY ;D (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/22/09 | Reply
@Dill pickle:
ah thanks! ^^
The earlier manga pages were done last summer. once I get the chance I wanna re-do them
Dill pickle
Senior Otaku | Posted 03/22/09 | Reply
@FUNimation:
i think the later half actually looks much better, more professional
FUNimation
NOT THE COMPANY ;D (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/21/09 | Reply
@Dill pickle:
8D; probably
I'm really bad at keeping the exact same style since I like experimenting with different things
^^" sorry
Dill pickle
Senior Otaku | Posted 03/21/09 | Reply
did i see a style change on those last few pages?
MewChero
Neko Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/20/09 | Reply
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally!!! lol I think the last page was quite dramatic... lol
inuykisha
Otakuite+ | Posted 03/20/09 | Reply
I'm sorry can PLEASE
make more? I really love it!
SojiRem
Otaku Legend | Posted 03/19/09 | Reply
I would so play this game if it were real XD Nice work!
mewmewpudding
Otaku Eternal | Posted 03/19/09 | Reply
WTF YOU TALKING ABOUT, IMA-CHAN.
That's one DRAMATIC page of doom, there. Her pose and the fact that she'd surrounded by a giant black hole/gate/thingy is pretty freaking dramatic to me. I would have been screaming my head off. :9
moonlit dream
Supreme Individual (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/28/09 | Reply
w00t~ w00t~!! >w< Add more! I can't wait to read it. :]
sasukes1fan
Otakuite | Posted 01/03/09 | Reply
Yay! this looks like its gonna b a rly good series! i can't wait to read more!! XD
Remanic
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/22/08 | Reply
OMG its the best manga i have ever read XP you did so well fun!! now i want try to make one along the same lines! or try >.< only mine mabe for older viewers like 16+ lol omg so many ideas flooding in to my head !! the animes i want to include (none that you have inclued) SO MUCH FUN!!
PheonixFox
Awesomesauce (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/22/08 | Reply
i hav sumthin like this all in my head too actually...
wat does that mean....? 
well i wanna c how this 1 goes instead 
Rein Akira
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/22/08 | Reply
Yays! More pages! Lol! I love the story so far! I can't wait to read more! *FAVES!*
~Aki-chan
harvestmoonluvr
HARVEST GODDESS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/22/08 | Reply
yaaaay update!
*huggles
lol kanji is fun to use~ I'm starting to use it a lot more in my manga :D
keep it up fun-chan!
mewmewpudding
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/21/08 | Reply
THANK YOU, GUILT, FOR ALLOWING IMA-CHAN TO UPDATE. <3
Ehehehe, saying sound effects can be endlessly entertaining.
Kill Sasuke
Otaku Legend | Posted 12/21/08 | Reply
WOW this is REALLY good!!! *subscribes* only problem i have with it is... The Kingdom Hearts theme... not original enough for me But i love your idea and i can't wait to read the rest... Can i ask something though... Can you make the font a bit bigger.. if possible cause it's pretty small...
Great Manga keep it up!!!
lunesoldier20
Otaku Legend | Posted 12/21/08 | Reply
this is so cool, fun-san! please continue! :D
smartanimegirl
AngeliqueNade (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/21/08 | Reply
Yayz~! More pages! 8D
Coming along nicely so far, Fun-chan! ^^
Hahaha, Riko seems pretty confident to win this, doesn't she? ^^
You're almost done with the prologue! Hurry and get to chapter 1! XD
RikuisHOT
RikuisHOT (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/26/08 | Reply
Wooow this is AWESOME!! *favs*
!*~Riku-san
midnightqueen
Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/26/08 | Reply
What's-His-Name Clown Guy in confusing me!! D:
But anyways, great page, Mandi likes it! :D Keep up the great work!! ^_^ *hugs*
red kie
Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/26/08 | Reply
i love the pages you made!!!
great job!
)Oo~ Black rabit ~oO(
mewmewpudding
Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/26/08 | Reply
NEW PAGEEEEEEE. <3
*mauls it happily*
AND IT LOOKS LOVELY, SEXAH BEYOTCH.
DixieWings
Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/26/08 | Reply
Great comic FUN-chan! XD
I can't wait to read more!
halcyonlegendia
Otakuite++ | Posted 11/26/08 | Reply
Sweetness. L approves, and therefore Aurina a.k.a. "halcyon legendia" approves. Hope 2 see more.
zero guardian
Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/06/08 | Reply
FUN-chan??? will you plz plz plz plz plz write some more?!?!??!
I started reading it and now I want more DX
I hope you will write more, becasue it is a very good capturing story, I dont mind some cussing and violence, I hang out with a couple of guys who cuss sometimes and think that Duct Tape and Violence solve everyhitng, so..yeah
plz write more soon
Zeropage7
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 10/02/08 | Reply
hm-i wouldn't have thought of mixing them. I'd ask more but i can wait, hope you get more done soon:)
FUNimation
NOT THE COMPANY ;D (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/02/08 | Reply
@page7:
^^ for digimon I'm using seasons 2 and 4~~
she goes to season 2 first and then season 4! ^^
I want to say more but it would spoil an important part! so ur just going to have to wait until I get there~ x3
page7
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 10/02/08 | Reply
@FUNimation:
sweet XD
i'd like to see how you work with naruto and digimon-any idea which season you'll use? oh well-i'm sure it'll look great no matter what season you choose.
FUNimation
NOT THE COMPANY ;D (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/01/08 | Reply
@page7:
:3 thanks!
well, I'm pretty much using any anime that I like and can fit a story in. it's cuz I'm uncreative with names and designs and it's soo hard keeping up with so many characters. xD
but so far the list consists of
Kingdom Hearts 2, digimon, naruto, soul eater, BLEACH, Pokemon(maybe. the time laspe is confusing. @_@), Ouran High School(another maybe), and I believe that's all(for now xD)
x3 and yus, as you can see, digimon is on the list~~
I absolutely love that anime! it's the first one I made an OC for which later devoloped to Rei Uruhara who became the rest of my OCs. C:
page7
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 10/01/08 | Reply
great job with the shading, it's an awesome style and nice job with the clown :)!! kinda curious here-how many worlds do you plan on using? is digimon on the list?
IchigoShirayuki
Crazy Cat Lady (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/20/08 | Reply
wow this is really good!i love how you draw!it is amazing!i cannot wait for more!
mewmewpudding
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/11/08 | Reply
OMFG NEW PAGES AND I DIDN'T NOTICE. ;A; *stupid*
I LOVE THEM ALL SO MUCH. They're all so pretty.
I'm sure even Chu** Nor*** would find them AMAZINGLY FREAKIN' AWESOME. ;D
UltimateNejiFanG
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 08/26/08 | Reply
My god this is amazing... just all of it together, the art, teh orginality, I wouldn't be surprized if this becomes a hit manga ^o^ I look forward to reading more~
sanatonya
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/18/08 | Reply
im glad u made this- id feel preety stupid if no one else ever had the idea rei's got- cuz i've been doin that since, like, 6th grade.
i should probably mention how this is gonna be the wicked awesomest thing u've ever done, FUNimation!!
Last edited by sanatonya at 4:19:20 PM EDT on August 18, 2008.
smartanimegirl
AngeliqueNade (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/17/08 | Reply
This is a really interesting story. Can't wait to see what happens next. =)
fire.freak
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/16/08 | Reply
This looks interesting! =] And the cover is very nice^ ^ *hugs multiple times[on each page]and faves*
fma17
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/16/08 | Reply
it is awesomely awesome!!!!!!cant wait 2 see more
KumoriKappaTakai
Otakuite | Posted 08/16/08 | Reply
i loves this story very much
Magnus Lensherr
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/16/08 | Reply
This is brilliant. I love the detail in your artwork and the concept itself. I am dying to see which other worlds she ends up in ~ Applauds you ~ Really, really well done ^_^
Dranz
FUNimation
NOT THE COMPANY ;D (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/16/08 | Reply
^^ yea! Sure~!
karwa
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/16/08 | Reply
i just love it ^^
love the drawings and the cover
can't wait to read more ^^
*hugs +favs*
FUNimation
NOT THE COMPANY ;D (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/15/08 | Reply
@:
^^ well, you need to revert it to JPEG format. just go to file>save for the web and make sure to put it on JPEG. also make sure you put it on high, or 60 quality cuz you don't want the file size to be too big.
^^ I hope that helps! 8D and I'm glad you like my manga!
Last edited by FUNimation at 7:00:11 PM EDT on August 16, 2008.
MewChero
Neko Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/15/08 | Reply
YES!!!! You updated!!!!! ^.^ I'm very happy now. Nice job! I cannot wait to see what happens next!!! I love her expression when the jester gets up in her face! lol
~Chero~
midnightqueen
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/15/08 | Reply
I love Riko's expression in the top left panel of page 12... XD XD And the jester guy amuses me... X3 Heh, smart girl, Riko, what a smart girl you are. XD *hugs* Can't wait for mooooorrrre..!!!!
harvestmoonluvr
HARVEST GODDESS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/15/08 | Reply
zomg finally an update! ^-^ yay!
o nos! is she gunna say yes?! the tension is killing me! *not really i think i know whats gunna happen ;)
lol update soon~! cant wait to see more!
Jigoku Sakura
sourpatch kid (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/07/08 | Reply
AAHH~!! i LUVthis fun-chan~! *huggles* it's really good~! ^w^ cant wait for more!!! Bring me more amazing pages!!
=^._.^=JiSa wuvs joos~!
red kie
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/29/08 | Reply
lol procastination XD its fun to read what you wrote lol tis funy ^^
)Oo~ Black rabit ~oO(
FUNimation
NOT THE COMPANY ;D (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/29/08 | Reply
@:
lol floaty head thingy actually isn't a KH character. he's my original character that is the brother of the Gate Keeper Clown from Marchen Awakens Romance(MAR) lol :3
red kie
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/29/08 | Reply
yay new page new page!!! nice art fun chan!
)Oo~ Black rabit ~oO(
hackerblackrose
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/27/08 | Reply
i really really like this no wait i love it!!!! i want to read more of it plz con. it!!!!!
sasu+saku
Senior Otaku | Posted 06/25/08 | Reply
lol XD more more XD ( its awesome)
sasu+saku
Senior Otaku | Posted 06/24/08 | Reply
lol (reminds me of MAR some what)
harvestmoonluvr
HARVEST GODDESS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/22/08 | Reply
wow i really like the story so far!
awesome job! keep it up!
RSRKingdomStars
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/21/08 | Reply
yay!!!!!!!!! love it so far! X3 *hugs* keep up the great work!! need more!! >:D cool, u got manga studio?? XD
red kie
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/21/08 | Reply
yay neww page ness!!!
)Oo~ Black rabit ~oO(
TheDarkAngel
Pathetic Diabetic (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/17/08 | Reply
Oh, yes! I'm favoriting this! It's like Disney's Kingdom Hearts, only it's all manga-ish. woot. I think I get it... I wanna continue reading! I loved MAR!!! Woot!
~Yosei (TheDarkAngel)
And, then... I met you.
red kie
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/17/08 | Reply
cool i likey lol good work
)Oo~ Black rabit ~oO(
Mayumi94
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/14/08 | Reply
cisabdgbahghdfg OMG MOAR PLZ 8D
PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFTTTTTTTTTHIS IS AWEOSME 8D
KungPowChicken
Old Chicken Nugget (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/14/08 | Reply
wow..
this looks like an actual manga!
its just amazing!
XD
do you have like manga studios or some program?
and i like the story so far!
XD
rated T for teens..
well keep it up!
don't stop believing!
XD
mewmewpudding
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/13/08 | Reply
XD 'Rated T for Teen because of MAJOR ASS-KICKING' *dies laughing*
Wow, this seems really great (and the drama is so intense! C;) so far, and I really can't wait for more. It's gonna be GOOOOOOOOOOD!
FUNimation
NOT THE COMPANY ;D (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/13/08 | Reply
@MewChero:
XD ya....Since Riko is the anime version of me, I decided to put someone calling Riko oyster. hmm....I should've changed her name so that her last name meant oyster, that would make more sense. XD lol o well.
MewChero
Neko Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/13/08 | Reply
Next week?! O.O Why??????!!!!!! *pouts* and just when I was feeling better...... Nice job so far! The Oyster? Isn't that your nickname? lol
~Chero~
what the...
Senior Otaku | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply
oh, wow, i thot it was great b4, but this... this is FANTASTIC.
i love it so much! the art looks really good, and i love the dialogue.
and i love the pen spinning action. XD it did look great tho, seriously!
and i like how u changed the plot a lil' bit. like, how now her name changes cuz she forgets it, and that last page really sets the stage.
this rocks, Fun-chan!
I can't wait to see the next page!
what the...
Senior Otaku | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply
OH EM GE this looks amazing! *rushes to read*
MewChero
Neko Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply
Yay!!!!! I'm sooo happy! It's really good so far and I cannot wait for more
LunaLei
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/09/08 | Reply
WOOH!! NEW version of the previous one eh? I betcha this one is gonna be 10x better!! OH! Can't wait till you update some more of it! I find it really interesting so far!! YAY! GO bloody teen violence! *Highfives* Go us! Violent minors are awesome!
FUNimation
NOT THE COMPANY ;D (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/09/08 | Reply
@RSRKingdomStars:
:D ohhhh! Thanks very much Sayoko-chan! ^-^ I'll go change it now!*hugs*
RSRKingdomStars
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/09/08 | Reply
Yay!!!!!!!! i can't wait to see more Fun-chan!! X3 *hugs every page*
*fave*
btw, i noticed that there is a small error in the title, "rikuesto no shinzo" means "heart of the request" so you just need to switch it around, and ure good ^^; and also, just incase u didn;t know; shinzo means literaly the heart "organ" if u meant the OTHER "heart" it's "kokoro". But if u made it that way intentionally, ure okies XD
good luck on the story! X3 *hugglezz*
FUNimation
NOT THE COMPANY ;D (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/09/08 | Reply
@:
XD lol
Major blood loss starts when she enters Konoha, and that's probably going to take a while unless I update like, 20 pages each week. XD
Kami-chan.x3
Bubblegum'd! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/08/08 | Reply
YOU FINALLY SUBMITED IT! YAYZ!!
otakufangirl
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/08/08 | Reply
oh cool! neat coloring and cover!