There should be a comment page...err, comment box for each page!! Then we can keep commenting and not be obnoxious. XD This is so good, Steph!! I can't wait for more. you're getting so talented with shading and coloring...everything. Supaidas!!!!!

Your story is really interessting. And your artwork is unique. Keep it up!
Greetings,AnBu^^

I read through it all and this is great so far! I love the images you put with the words and your typography is very nice!! I can't wait to read more!

~*Elves

*on page 6* Looking great so far! Very interesting. :3 And wow...her skin is really pretty...you're getting good at shading and everything!! WOW!! :D Keep it up!

You've done a great job so far! Wow, I've never read a manga about the author him/herself before, that's a very unique and nice idea. Your mother was drawn beautifully at the last pg and you indeed look kawaii in the womb! X3 *hugs*

late comment but better late than never. XD *hugs* lol, i love that guys expression!!! priceless, the smile...ROFL!!it made me laugh instead. [don't think i was suppose to do that] and i think that your mom looks fine, a little skinny [T___T] but fine. great job on it and don't worry about not updating soon. ^^ it's ok.

You know,Im really enjoying this comic.Maybe it doest have the rain of hugs but belive me,people see it a lot.I like how your taking th comic like a book with ilustrations.It´s very original this is a fav of course!

Angel

Haha going out with the random traveler moment spurred the song "Animals" in my head! LE GASP! A NOAH?! O__o I really like this story =D

Ah, so this is the fabled manga I've heard so much about. =^_^= Your style is improving.

Boy, that random traveler sure is flippant! "Put it on my tab..." It seems like they were made for each other. You brought that out well. =^^=

As far as the horse thing goes, if you had put the legs on each side a little closer together, they would have looked more like horses' legs.

Keep up the good work. *thumbs up*

just read it all right now and rawr!!! cliffhanger!!! WT-!? i want more now. lol. first time i read one of these and i want more, i hope this makes you happy. lol. but i like the story so far.i should of probably waited longer to start this since i am impatient [plz don't rush, anyways i need to learn to be patient]
ROFL, i love his "put on the tab" line. made me laugh. really nice story you have going on here. i really like it so far. hope to see more. ^_^

"Put it on the tab!" Hahaha! Poor Allen...Awesome so far! Yay! Cross! XD I have some random stories set in Russia, so this was really well placed! =D

This is a really cool manga so far, Steph! You really put a lot of work into each page...I'm amazed at the details and how you actually colored and shaded a lot of them! I like the prologue page 2 with the mom and all that...she looks so smug, sitting on her throne. XD Definitely "go out with random traveler" type! And I like your newest page as well as the rest. It's so great!! The story is interesting so far, too. :D Keep up the awesome work! *hugs*

@Magnus Lensherr:

No. Not at all! :) I'm not one to stop you. *skips off in no apparent direction*

@lazyweird1:

Gomen, if I were to use him you wouldn't end up hating me forever would you? ~ Hides just in case lol ~

*spazz twitch* My...Cross-sama senses are tingling! I love this! XDDDDD I absolutely cannot wait for the next page!

Bravo!!!
Your face looks so different from the style I saw time ago.The pose looks lovely and you body structures are getting better and better.Cant wait to start seeing what you will do.

Angel

Hahaha. This reminds me I gotta get back to work on my manga! 0_o; I'd like to draw Dranzer interacting with Azzura (my OC). I wonder how'd they get along? *ponders blankly*

So u decided on a manga version, eh?^^ Alrighty then, lets see how it goes! And I agree, the exorcist outfit look pretty cool *nods* XD

The creepily awesome essence of this pic is enhanced since I'm listening to "Thriller"! XDDD This looks way too awesome, but I don't care! GO DRANZ-SAN!!! *snerts* I can't take the supaidas seriously with their silly faces! X3