D: so cute....yet soooo sad TxT

Really, I did not know that and I am in love with pokemon although I wish they would stop with all the extra stuff.

@EmoSprinkles:

xD
No, it's because Pokemon is short for Pocket Monster. xD I've never heard of that story. o.O

You must update! XDDD I am so excited to read more. ^__^

@vampireknight:

x]
Alrightie~ I'll subscribe to you so I can see it when you put it up.
I don't go on very often, though, so don't take it personally if I don't reply to any messages or anything. x]

@Musikizmylife:

xDD That's really ironic.
I must be psychic. x]

you know what's so funny? i was just thinking how awesome this story would be if those two guys hooked up but im like, "she's probably not gonna make it shounen-ai" AND THEN YOU DID! I WAS LIKE, I LOVE YOU! LOOL!

@moonlit dream:

Huh.
Nahh. xD
I'll get to it laterr.

update fool. >:3
yeahh.
he-he-he... he's blind!! o_o

@fire.freak:

x]
Thank you and thanks again~

@imouto chan:

xD
I'm working on it~
Thanks for your support. C:

*scrmz* Kotosuke-kun?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? o_O?!?!?
*faints*
*revives*
Omg, Takara, you are so creative! o-o GO YOU~! =D I could never think of something like this x3 And you're so committed too =] You rock 8D
w00t~! Keep it up~!^ ^

Whoa my wittle Koto kun has turned to the dark side ToT Oh what ever shall I do? *whimper sniff sob*
Anyways~
I wanna see what happens next!

@sasoriforever:

xDD
Thank you~
*squirts Kotosuke with a water gun*
Baaad boyyy. *scold*
Kotosuke: D':

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Me luv the story and nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Ko-Kun dont shoot ur daddy nooooooooooooo and diffently not with a toy gun X3 ~Puppet-Chan

@xPocket monsteRx:

GASP I gotta go check your portfolio~ *runs to backroom* brb.

@imouto chan:

xDD
It's all good. C:

Did you see the Hatsuharu picture I drew for youu? .w.

@xPocket monsteRx:

*raises her hand guiltily* I fergot about the whole blind ordeal -_-; ROFL! That would be kinda sad if he just suddenly turned on his father like that XD

@imouto chan:

x]
It's because he's blind. o.o
Well, blind at the moment.
I wasn't sure if I made that obvious enough.. some people might just think he's shooting his daddy for no good reason. >__>;;

@xPocket monsteRx:

Not stupid! I just kinda wonder about him sometimes ^^; Though I have a feeling if the elements were right, I'd do the same thing XD

@imouto chan:

xDDD
It's okay.
I think it's sorta stupid how he's shooting his dad with a toy gun. o.O

Pffft Fu fu fu fu XD Semi hard styro foam caplets? Ouch, those sound kinda painful and kinda like you'd laugh if you got pelted in the face with one *can't stop laughing* Sorry, I dunno why I find this funneh XD

@imouto chan:

Kotosuke: D: Uhh.. sorry, girlie.
Bahaha.
x]

@Kaerlyn:

Hehe. Thanks. x]
She loves Kotosuke so much~ C:

@moonlit dream:

xDD
That's inaccurate.

Watch were you're shooting Koto kun!!! *gets all grumpy granny and nags him about proper gun care*

Thats cute how his sister pushes the knives back into the celing ^^

Kotosuke's dad: nooo kotosuke! just a little longer! PUH-LEEEZE!!

@NinjaTofu:

xDD Alright.
And thanks~ n_n

I really like your comic!! The silly sunglasses people can be in the Matrix!!

@imouto chan:

xD
Silly Kotosuke. *pats his head* You have fans.
Kotosuke: Pshh. I've always had fans. xP
...
I dunno. xD

@xPocket monsteRx:

I should! *pinches lil Koto kuns face*
Koto: What was that for??????
IC: *shurgs* Your so cuuuuute~ ^////^
Koto: *grumbles*

@imouto chan:

xDD
I dare you to do it.

Awwww Goatee Daddy ^_^ Koto kun looks so cute...I just wanna...pinch his wittle cheeks >_<

@xPocket monsteRx:

oh, the computer is re-starting in 30 seconds. x_X

@moonlit dream:

I KNOW, RIGHT??? xD
Yayy~

@xPocket monsteRx:

haw. .3. on deh compooter at the same time. x3

@moonlit dream:

Bahaha. I know. x]

you have so many views. .3. yey. x3

@xPocket monsteRx:

No worries ^_^ I dun want you to be stressed out or anything 0_0

@imouto chan:

Yay~ 8D
I haven't even started yours.. @_@;;
Sorry, sorry~ It'll be (one of the) first things I draw this weekend!! x.x

@xPocket monsteRx:

You bet it is >:D *tries to tie a tie but fails and hurls the tie into a hopeless heap on the ground* Btw! (Off topic:) I'm almost done with your request ^_^ Just need ta color it n all that good stuff :P

@imouto chan:

xD
That's a nice nickname for us middle classers who can't tie ties.

@xPocket monsteRx:

Yeah! Yay us! The middle classer can't tie a tie peoples XD

@imouto chan:

Yay, us~ x]

@xPocket monsteRx:

Meeeeee neither XD

@imouto chan:

I've worn a tie before. C:
But my daddy had to help me put it on. I can't tie a tie. x']

@xPocket monsteRx:

Lol, I agree. Converses look very informal with a suit -_-; All in all, the lil blue ties are the cutest :3 *tries to wear a tie like that*

@imouto chan:

I wouldn't wear those shoes, either. xD
But if I drew them in converses, it wouldn't look very formal. .o.

Thank you, though~ C:

Man the uniforms look cute ^_^ Only thing I'd hate would be the shoes. I'm such a converse grrl :P

@imouto chan:

xDDD Huhh. I actually don't like that picture. o.O But thanks. x]
And I'm almost finished with the first page of chapter 2. C:

Yay updates~ Can't wait to see Chapter 2 ^_^ Koto kun looks smexy in that picture!

oops. .3.

@moonlit dream:

xDDD
That's what it does.
Yup.
Oh, but you forgot the window breaking.

@xPocket monsteRx:

*woosh* EYEBALL!! *woosh* EVIL OPENING DOOR! *woosh* E=MC2!! 0_0

@moonlit dream:

Do do do do..
do do do do...
do do do do...
*twilight zone theme*
xDD

"How Ironic..." *Eats Kotosuke* LIKE IN DEH TWILIGHT ZONE!! (O_0 what the...?)

@xPocket monsteRx:

ROFL!!!
IC: *hurls another set of knives at ceiling*
the mom: What are you doing child?
IC: Fixing your experation date.
the mom: Come again?
IC: I mean...making your room look pretty ^^;

@imouto chan:

xDD You might get in trouble. o_O And Kotosuke's mind is messed up. Everyone in this comic has issues. x'D
And you can call him whatever you want~ ;]

Aw Koto kun ^///^ (hope it's ok if I call 'em that). I should start throwing knives at the ceiling above m'sisters bed >:D I'm kidding of course XD

@Shi Bum Bumm:

Hehe.. Thank you~ C:

OOooo so cryptic. I like the story so far too :]

OHH! WHAT NOW??! >:D i have EIGHT-TEEN pages, and you only have SEVEN-TEEN!! >D (sheesh. i make it sound like a contest. o_0) (dude!! yer glasses!! O_O)

@xPocket monsteRx:

Lol. Alright deary =]

@fire.freak:

.o.
I can't wait~ .w.

I'm gonna let my sister on the computer, now, so I'll talk to youu later. ;]

@xPocket monsteRx:

Yea XD It's like with their glasses they become like 100x cooler than they probably are XD OH, and I just about finished my half of the art trade :] When I scanned it, the colors were a bit too light so I'm gonna color it a bit darker and then rescan it =] You might be surprised by the pic >> I'll tell ya that right now 8D*continues to darken Koto-kun's hair*

@fire.freak:

xD Those glasses guys are so cool. I should get them to appear again sometime. o.o

XD Ya x3 *goes to Photobucket.com; types in 'anime guys'; stares at all those bishonen 8D*

Harharhar! Satoshi-kun[YES, kun :>]smacked the glasses offa that guy x3

"Dude! Your glasses!" XD :]

@fire.freak:

xD You might not want to fall for the characters in this comic. It's shounen-ai, remember? x]

@xPocket monsteRx:

A bit thinner than Kish's ears. Kish's ears are huge XD I'll draw Keiji and Kioko sometime for ya^3^

Satoshi is such an innocent, loving person. He reminds me of Keiji so much @///@ I'm just about ready to fall for Satoshi myself XD Lol

G'night Taka-chan^ ^

@imouto chan:

x] You think so? I thought he sounded sarcastic, even though I didn't mean for it to sound that way. xD

And nightie night to you, too~ I'm going to bed. ;]

@fire.freak:

xD Pointy elf ears, like Tokyo Mew Mew's Kish? ;] He's my favorite from that series. x3
Satoshi and Keiji haf stuff in common, then~ xD Satoshi's even got fair hair (it's silvery white. o.O) and light colored eyes (they're pale blue). x3

&& Goodnight, dearie~ I'm gonna sleep now. .o.

@xPocket monsteRx:

Lol maybe....*gets shot at with a gun* 0_0 I dun wanna risk it though XD
I'll tell you one thing though: Satoshi (hope I spelled that right >_< ) handles it very well. Extremely well ^_^

@imouto chan:

Awhh... ;A;
Are you for cereal?
Your mom probably doesn't mean it, though.. ;3;

Silly guy in sunglasses that ruin the mood XD Bah, they dun ruin the mood they create it!
I swear, his mom reminds me alot fo my mom 0_0 (I wish I were kidding).
Can't wait to see what happens next!

@xPocket monsteRx:

Keiji is a character in an Original Anime that me and my friend Joey made[Joey is a girl just to let you know^ ^;]

The story is basically about two twins. One is an alien and the other is half alien. Anyways, Keiji is my character's[Kioko---lol]crush.
Kioko is related to Hiroji, another alien from the Taki-bi[Fire]Planet/Race, making Kioko an alien as well. They all look like elves honestly lol. Pointy ears, human everything else x3

Kioko[--still lol]has a monster crush on the ningen, Keiji XD Keiji is an above average, soft spoken, mild boy. He has blonde hair and BEAUTIFUL green eyes *3* He's SO innocnet♥ Lol. Joey calls him my "Dream boy" lol ****long post lol****

@fire.freak:

x]
Kaiji...? Hm.. that doesn't ring a bell. .3.;;
EDIT:: Er.. Keiji. xD

I was just thinking about this manga since I needed Kotosuke's hair reference lol :3

When you said Satoshi's mom was crazy, you weren't kiddin' o-o I like the crazy jacket you put her in lol. Satoshi is such a sweet boy, visiting his mother every month although she wants to rip his organs out >> Satoshi reminds me of...of K-Keiji! o////o

@tsyou umbre:

x] Thank you very much~

@xPocket monsteRx:

Lol x3 Randomosity*if that's a word x3*is the key to all life :D Huzzah! Huzzah! Huzzaaaaaaaaaah~!

@fire.freak:

I dun like them, either. xD
I hate the word hate. Dx
Just kidding.
I dunno. o.o

@xPocket monsteRx:

I don't even know what I think sci-fi clothes look like XD The only thing I know about sci-fi clothes is that they're futuristic...ish x-x Gah, I hate sci-fi clothes! Aww, hate is such a strong word :o I just don't like sci-fi clothes XD

@fire.freak:

Ewww.. sci-fi clothes are so ugly. xD
They're like tights, but all over your body. o_O
And they're glowy and weird. xD
At least, that's how I think of futuristic clothes. x]

@xPocket monsteRx:

XD Alright x3 I have no idea how to draw futuristic clothes anyways XD They're so confusing ;~; Like sci-fi clothes lol x3

@fire.freak:

Please don't make the clothes futuristic. xDD
Um.. modern clothes of that time are modern clothes of this time, if that makes sense. .3. But you could make some super-cool costume on him, if you want~ ;D Just make it good-looking, pleasie. ;]

Hehehe.. I'll have fun drawing something for Arai~ >D

@xPocket monsteRx:

Sure!^w^ Kotosuke in an ordinary outfit :3 Ohwait, it's like 2411...do you want today's modern clothes or modern clothes in his own time? :o Or do they still wear today's modern clothes? x3

You can draw Arai however you want^ ^ Just make sure she has something orange on her XD *Example: her forehead protecter, a hat, a shirt, shoes, or even the scrunchies that hold her pigtails XD* She never goes anywhere without something orange on x3*except to a funeral ;~;*

@fire.freak:

xD
Ooh, I have a question for youu~
Can you draw Kotosuke in a different outfit? .o. I don't know if you're doing that already, but if you could, I'd appreciate it. .w.
And do you still want me to draw Arai in the same costume?

@xPocket monsteRx:

XD You never know :O This world is crazy and messed up as is x-x Animals have already started to mutate! Um...kinda. Imagine in another 400 years?...Ooo, we'll have flying cars! 8D *imagination runs off once again*

*grabs Kotosuke's arm*
Me: I'm gonna draw yew~!♥ :3
Kotosuke: ...Um...yay? o-o

Harharhar x3 Lalalala~~~

@fire.freak:

xD Thanks.
People tell me it's original, but I think it's kinda unreasonable. .3. Blind people will never develop a mutation in their brain, so this story will never be reality. *sadness*
Kotosuke: So you want blind homocidal maniacs running around the world killing people? o_O
Heh. YUSS. xD
Not really. .o.

@xPocket monsteRx:

I did read it all :] It wasn't that long^ ^ or boring o-o It was actually pretty interesting 8D It's not everyday that someone reads a prologue about blind people becoming mass-murderers :o That's totally original 8D

@fire.freak:

xD It's alright. I figured a lot of people skipped it, since it's so long and boring. ._.
xD

@xPocket monsteRx:

ZOMG I forgot about the prologue! XD I read everything there already :] I forgot about the whole blind-people-go-madly-insane part^ ^; I got too caught up with the lives of Kotosuke, Arime and Satoshi 8D

PEOPLE PEOPLE, READ THIS!!!
I changed the year from 2406 to 2411. It will help the story, so please deal with the change. xD
So sorry I had to change it. Sorry, sorry~

@fire.freak:

Oh, no, no, it's not because blind people in general are meanies, it's because the plot of this story is that blind people have become insane bloodthirsty freaks. xD I wrote it in the prologue, but there's a lot of words in the prologue, so I'm sure many people didn't understand it.. x3x

@xPocket monsteRx:

Oh lol XD ok :3 It's cause I had a blind friend and he was absolutely careless o-o Mmm, I see whacha mean. I have reflexes that go off when I feel someone near me or if someone touches me from behind 0:3 Imma good girl :D

@fire.freak:

Well, blind people sort of do that. xD
Er.. the stabbing. Not the eating. x3

@xPocket monsteRx:

o-O...she's under max security because she's blind? Yeowza. I thought it was cause she would kill and stab and eat everyone that was around her because she couldn't see owo;*imagination*

@imouto chan:

xD That's okay. Something you'll notice about my mangas is that the random characters who don't have names never have much thought put into them. They're usually stupid-looking and ruin the mood. xD

@fire.freak:

It's because.. she's BLIND! .o.

Whoa, maximum security o: I wonder what for x:

Oooh smart on the building! I about choked on my pocky when I saw the guards cute wittle sunglasses of doom XD Which is kinda stupid on my part since it's a sad page ;; Eh, g'job, can't wait for more ^_^

@imouto chan:

xD I know!! My sister was being stupid for a second there. xD
&& Thanks. n.n I was proud of myself for not making the girl's uniforms sailor suits. x3

Blind people do have eyes XD The skool uniform looks cute ^_^

@xPocket monsteRx:

Same here! XD Gay guys are such sweetheart~!♥ I had a gay friend once and he was my best friend EVER! He went shopping with me all the time when no one else would =D And he did my hair so cute this one time~! But he moved to California :[ I miss him :'[

Nice seating arrangement! 8D Muahaha :]

@Creascent Moon:

Yay~
Thankoo. .w.

@fire.freak:

xD
I'm glad someone thinks he's cute. ;3 I think gay guys are sweethearts. xD They're nice, and yaoi is pretty sexii, in my opinion. x3

Harharhar x3 I love this manga~!♥*throws this manga in "The Closet" :D Kotosuke's not mean. He's just a curious person with a somewhat sarcastic voice :] Ami should enjoy every second she talks to someone as cute as Koto-kun! I would :] Heck, I would even fall for Koto-kun XD Until I find out he's gay...then I'd be like his BEST FRIEND =D Hahaha :]*hugs*

@imouto chan:

Heke. Good. x3
I'm glad it makes sense to some people. o.O

Awww Ami~
I understand the seating arrangement ^_^

@imouto chan:

Yup~ I had some free time after we came back from the parks, so I drew 2 pages. ;]

Bwa hah ah XD Dun make that face before you turn around!
Lucky you drawing it in Disney World ^_^

@fire.freak:

Horray~ Thank you, too. xD

@imouto chan:

Yay~ Thank you. x3

Omgosh she pelted his head with a pencil o_o This is great so far ^_^

@xPocket monsteRx:

Lulz. You're welcome =] He's so awesome, I'm already addicted to this comic. Then again, I've been addicted to it since I first saw the cover! 8D
*glomps Kotosuke*
Kotosuke: O-O;? Um...hi girlie
Michka: *3* *swoons*
Kotosuke: O-O;? ...

XD

@fire.freak:

Horray~ Kotosuke's cute! 8D
Thank youu. .3.

Lol the girl's all like OwO and Kotosuke's all like "...hi Girlie" XD He's so cute~!♥

@xPocket monsteRx:

XD I speak very fluent English to the point where I've made my own new words XDDD Thanx for the offer though x3 *was born in Miami, Florida then moved up here because her mom wanted her younger brother to be born in Brooklyn, New York x3*

@fire.freak:

Good luck, then~ ;D
If you ever need help with english, you can ask me all you want. xD

@xPocket monsteRx:

Ya @-@ So many languages and all at the same time x-x I have to self teach as well as school taught and friends that are gonna tutor me!^ ^
My dear best friend, Khadijah[Kai0403]is gonna help me with Spanish
My dear friend Joey is gonna help me with Japanese
School is gonna help me with Italian
And I have to self teach myself French x-x Lol. It'll take years to master them all but I'll try my best!

@fire.freak:

Nope, Michelle is the only french one, and she has a japanese last name. xD But those other last names might come in handy. :] Thank you~
My sister is taking japanese next year. I chose spanish because it's the easiest. You're gonna have to study super-hard to learn all those languages! @A@

@xPocket monsteRx:

XD Lol. I was suppose to learn Spanish when I was younger, but never did x-x Now i'm learning 4 different languages at the same time XD Darn, I'm seriously cramming with the languages x3[Japanese, French, Italian and Spanish] And:
Yayz, I got courtesy given to me :D Lolz. I have a bunch more as well x3 I'll just give em to ya just in case x3
1. Mizuki
2. Nagata
3. Kuroda
4. Migoto
5. Kiromishi
6. Uotani
7. Tenskaya
Didja want more than just Japanese names though? x3 Because I saw a French surname :]

@fire.freak:

Horray, Cookie~ :D
I'm taking spanish, so I know how to pronounce all sorts of vowels. x3 I'm surprised no one else figured it out, though. xD

@xPocket monsteRx:

O-O...wow, you're good! XD You practically got it! Everyone else I tested called her Air-ee-uh or Uh-ray XD The way I spell the the pronounced version is Uh-rye/Uh-rai[XD] and you got Takameshi exactly right! Woot, go you~! :D Lol. Congrats, you're the first person to get her name mainly right without me having to tell you after 5 tries![Right Khadijah?!(Kai0403)*cough cough* >> Took you a long time now didn't it xD] For that, you get...a COOKIE! :D A box of Cookies~! Huzzah! XD

@:

Hehe. GOOD. x3

@fire.freak:

Um.. Ah-ra-ee Ta-ka-meh-shee? o.O I don't have a clue. xD

Lol ya XD So I'm guessing you pronounce her name Ah-rih-mei lol. No one knows how to pronounce my Naruto characters name except me though x3 and Kai0403 >>[my in real life best friend x3] Give it a shot :] Try to pronounce her name x3 Her name is Arai Takameshi~!

@fire.freak:

xD I didn't realize Arime's name was so close to Anime. xDD I kind of got her name from the manga artist Arina Tanemura. I switched the "n" with a "m" and the "a" with a "e" so the names didn't look so similar. xD But what a coincidence that is~

@xPocket monsteRx:

XD Alrighty. And I also noticed something while looking back at my first comment to you[in this comic's comments]. Arime; Anime Similar, ne? 8D

@fire.freak:

Thank you and thank you again~ n_n I'll be sure to use those last names! And Kotosuke does look like a girl on the cover. My sister told me that, too. xD Maybe I'll make a new cover when I introduce more characters. n_n

Oh and about the last name thing, here are three that i really love and have used:Wakamiya, Nakishiyo, Takameshi[this is my favorite one x3 lol] Yes they're all long last names >> I'm used to long last names. Gomen~!^ ^;

OH! The person on the cover is a guy? o-o...I knew that >>...Lol, it's just that Kotosuke looked so innocent and cute on the cover I thought it was a girl XD Sorry bout that^ ^; Arime kinda seems like me^ ^ All outgoing and cheerful and hyper :D It's just that I don't walk up to new cute guys saying "Hey cutie..." lol I would say hi though >> Annnnnnnnyways, This is coming along great! Very awesome with much awesomey awesomeness XD Cherrio~!

@:

Noo, I promise it won't be pervy. Maybe. xD

@moonlit dream:

Okay. But mine aren't. xD

@xPocket monsteRx:

Takara. Your weird. =_= all my relationships in my books are boy+girl.

@:

Yay~ Thank you. :3 I like girl+boy relationships, too (I'm straight! xD) but I also think yaoi is super cute. >D There are some potential girl+boy pairings in this one, though, and maybe even a girl+girl pairing. o.O I'll have to see what everyone thinks should happen...

*hugs all the pages* >:D

Commenting myself. xP
Thank you everyone~ I didn't think anyone would like it. .o.

^^ hi
I really like your comic soo far lol I can't wait to see more. you have a story going that makes me want to keep reading, i don't find original plots very often :]so YAY for you
~later

Yay! Awesomeness, mann. xD

wow, this is a VERY original story-line!! YAY!!GOOD JOB@!