LOL! That was hilarious. You draw really well, but I think you need to improve on your coloring. Your strokes seem so messy and rushed. I think it would've looked better in black and white na lang...
Call me "Obiri" (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/25/08 | Reply
Kinjiru keep out the good work! X3 I love it still!
...oh...and by the way...
I´ll tell you something. When I was finished reading the unread pages of your story, my dad announced to go the mall to buy whatever we wanted with the money we got for today. So we headed to the mall and seperated. I was alone. I thought: "Yay! Freedom!" but then...
Some of the girls there kept eyeballing me like if I was some kind of ...Luxury item *shivers*
You would think that my clothes would give it all away and tell them " HEEY!!! LOOOOK!!! I´m a GIRL!" but that day...
I decided to wear casual clothes [which are a girl´s brand but the style is sort of like a guys] proved to be a vital mistake
Luckly I saw my friend and I went with him...you should of seen the faces their faces! lol.
I wonder what ran in their minds as soon as I hugged my friend... XDDD
(Thanks to my friend I spend the rest of meh mall hours great! X3)
(We bumped with other friends as well...but...that´s about it for meh Xmas tale which happened today) XDDDDD
B.t.w. I think I´m still freaked out right now about that incident... ;-; me ish never ever gonna cut me hair or wear casual clothes again! ~ugu
Oh wow this story is amazing keep drawing u hav a great imagination..but i'm slightly confused could u message me and explain some things. on a scale of 1-10 one being the worst i rate u a ten!
Um... like what the heck is going on...? =o.O= No, j/k =^_^=
Um... basically, it's a little fast-paced, so it's easy to get lost. Like, why is the main character getting into fights, what's up with the servant thing, and all sorts of stuff.
I'm currently doing some info stuffs about the comics. and ohh please do tell me the part that you didn't get. I'm willing to add extra pages for the info stuffs.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
Finished reading... still confused. =TT^TT= But I like it and am waiting for clarification. =^_^= I like your style. Very nice facework. Your men are gorgeous! I'm waiting to see the next page. =^_^=
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
I've read up through chapter 1 so far and I have to say I'm a bit confused as to what's going on... I'll read more later I'm late for class! *dashes off*
Ooo--harsh! I have a friend of mine who suffers the same thing sometimes, but I don't think she's had that happen to her! Just keep your head high, okay? (at least you get gifts from someone who's interested in you... )
What can I say except that this is one awesome manga. (Sorry... I don't think awesome is a good enough word for it. T_T)
It's one of the best, in my opinion. For one thing, the artwork is mindblowingly incredible and the fact that you kept up with the series is great. (As in, it's not just 5 or 6 pretty pages.) The panels are well organized and flow very smoothly. Your coloring technique is wonderful, too, to say the least. Very awesome combination of media. I'm always looking for new ways to color, but this is one of the coolest combinations I've seen yet.
The characters are believable and deep which goes along with your artistic talent in keeping their expressions lively. (The backgrounds are neat as well...) So basically, the whole product is a success in my opinion and it'd be great to see this get published one day.
I'm working on a story (currently in novel form) but I'm trying to turn it into a manga. Sadly, I haven't had much success because every time I try to start drawing, my mind goes blank and I end up wasting a few hours doing nothing cause I don't know how to start. I've got plenty of character drawing and the story itself is coming along nicely, but when it comes to drawing out the panels... I get the worst case of artist's block. Xp
So how do you do it, is basically what I'm getting at. Do you reference stuff from various manga or does it all come from your mind? How do you plan out the panels and such? When I think about my story, I can see it as if it were an anime but I have a hard time trying to freeze the characters' movements when I try to put it in manga form and make it believable and flowing. ANY ADVICE WOULD HELP ME GREATLY!!
Thanks and keep up the awesome work!! *VOTE & FAVE*
This is in response to the main girl's profile: You're not kidding when you put down "constantly mistaken for a guy!" I honestly thought that she was a guy in the beginning... (good thing I usually look into a character a little while before I go all "fangirl" on them. No offense to anyone who swings that way. ^^;)
this comic is a remake because the first one that I made was given to a friend 5 years ago. and it more focuses on akane's life/love but later in the series we will come to that.
originally the story was for a friend in high school, which plays the role of akane, she just requested me to make a comic about her ragnarok online character crush (the archer) but it turned out to be a graphic novel, obviously I added more characters and a lot of twist and plots in the story. I think it has 400 pages that I drew for 2 weeks(I spend all my summer for this, I didn't sleep too. though its only pencil and rushed n_n;)
some of the events are also based from my personal experience and I was happy that I would share this in a comic form >w<~
there are 4 more major characters that will be discovered as we go~
hope that you'll enjoy the next chapters of it >3<
Last edited by kinjiru at 9:28:20 AM EDT on September 17, 2008.
Sweet merciful Jesus, this never stops being amazing. It's just perfect (also good to see it on the front page where it belongs XD). You said that you messed up the shading, you liar!! The black-and-white style fits this chapter very well. Full-color wouldn't have felt quite right. The best part, though, was that one panel with red blood in it. Very Sin City-ish.
All in all, you've inspired me. I'm going to make a manga. No clue what it's going to be about, but I hope it's as awesome as this. Keep it coming (maybe a little sooner next time though)
Ugh, how come this isn't on the top on the homepage?! D:
Your comic is way too cool XD
And you coloring on the cover of the second installment is awesome!
wow, this is utterly amazing. i could never do what u do in this manga (i'm throughly glad i decided to read this!), color pencils have never been my thing, and u do an excellent job with the colors, making characters stand out, setting the mood right, just everything!! it is great to see people not always going to the computer for everything (i'm breaking that habit as we speak ;P i'm trying to do more traditional inking and coloring w/color pencils and copics, i only use my computer now for tones, and occasional cell-shading ^^) but i must say once again. WOW. it's incredible. i can't wait to see more, and as many have said before, this manga deserves waaay more kudos than it gets. ^^
Wow. Full color, all traditional media, great character design, beautiful art (especially the backgrounds). All and all its an amazing manga, and a great break from the typical shiny-ness of photoshop colored art. The story was a little hard to follow, but its the first chapter, so what the heck. Hope you do more. Faves.
You have a very good art style--your pages look really good. And the story is very interesting so far, I'm looking forward to seeing where it ends up going.
Oh, wow! It's colored! xD
I love your story so far! The third panel on page 7 is my fave :D
And the different angles in this are awesome!
The way you bold and outline your characters is cool, too :)
Great job on the first chapter! :D
I'd love to see more!
LovablePanda
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/15/09 | Reply
*Faves*WONDERFUL!!!!!!I LOVE IT SO FAR!Your a fantastic artist!!!!!!!
blurredout
Otakuite++ | Posted 05/15/09 | Reply
2:4 LOL CRAYON SHIN CHAN!
you're my idol. haha
twinKS
Otakuite++ | Posted 02/01/09 | Reply
I looooooovvve this story!!!! Its like so cool, nevertheless this is so my fav...
detcidda0emina
Otakuite | Posted 01/09/09 | Reply
LOL! That was hilarious. You draw really well, but I think you need to improve on your coloring. Your strokes seem so messy and rushed. I think it would've looked better in black and white na lang...
Samedi-Mai
Call me "Obiri" (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/25/08 | Reply
Kinjiru keep out the good work! X3 I love it still!
...oh...and by the way...
I´ll tell you something. When I was finished reading the unread pages of your story, my dad announced to go the mall to buy whatever we wanted with the money we got for today. So we headed to the mall and seperated. I was alone. I thought: "Yay! Freedom!" but then...
Some of the girls there kept eyeballing me like if I was some kind of ...Luxury item *shivers*
You would think that my clothes would give it all away and tell them " HEEY!!! LOOOOK!!! I´m a GIRL!" but that day...
I decided to wear casual clothes [which are a girl´s brand but the style is sort of like a guys] proved to be a vital mistake
Luckly I saw my friend and I went with him...you should of seen the faces their faces! lol.
I wonder what ran in their minds as soon as I hugged my friend... XDDD
(Thanks to my friend I spend the rest of meh mall hours great! X3)
(We bumped with other friends as well...but...that´s about it for meh Xmas tale which happened today) XDDDDD
B.t.w. I think I´m still freaked out right now about that incident... ;-; me ish never ever gonna cut me hair or wear casual clothes again! ~ugu
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/09/08 | Reply
nice managa!!!! i enjoyed reading it!!! hope you update soon!!! keep up the good work!!!
mewmewangie
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/09/08 | Reply
@kinjiru:
don't worry i wont lol cuz then i can't see the ending!
shiraz03
Grand Otaku | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
Hi! Kuya? Pinoy ka! Astig! ^ _ ^
rosegardengrave
Otakuite | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
Oh wow this story is amazing keep drawing u hav a great imagination..but i'm slightly confused could u message me and explain some things. on a scale of 1-10 one being the worst i rate u a ten!
Kitty K.O.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
@kinjiru:
Yep. =^_^= Btw, did I mention the teacher's hot? =o.o= Cuz... he is. =^_^=
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
@Kitty K.O.:
ohh I see. I'll be doing that thanks for telling
Kitty K.O.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
@kinjiru:
Um... like what the heck is going on...? =o.O= No, j/k =^_^=
Um... basically, it's a little fast-paced, so it's easy to get lost. Like, why is the main character getting into fights, what's up with the servant thing, and all sorts of stuff.
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
@Kitty K.O.:
I'm currently doing some info stuffs about the comics. and ohh please do tell me the part that you didn't get. I'm willing to add extra pages for the info stuffs.
Kitty K.O.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
Finished reading... still confused. =TT^TT= But I like it and am waiting for clarification. =^_^= I like your style. Very nice facework. Your men are gorgeous! I'm waiting to see the next page. =^_^=
Kitty K.O.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
I've read up through chapter 1 so far and I have to say I'm a bit confused as to what's going on... I'll read more later I'm late for class! *dashes off*
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
@mewmewangie:
noooooooooo don't kill yourself LOL
thanks anyway *hugs*
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
@FunnyWaffle:
LOL yeah he's such a kill joy XD
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
@Cezieni:
yay! thank you >3<~<3
mewmewangie
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/07/08 | Reply
wow you can draw reallllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyy um........awesomely! and if you don;t make more i'll kill myself. O.o.....lol
FunnyWaffle
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/06/08 | Reply
*squeal*!!!!
tiny yashamaru is soooo cute!!!
LOL and kihei kinda ruin the moment with yasha and her mom :D
Your chibis are sooo cute!
Cezieni
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/06/08 | Reply
Still loving every second of this. Can't wait to see what happens next!!
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/06/08 | Reply
thanks everyone for reading this far, and yet another chapter has been finished. m(_ _)m hope that you guys enjoyed it.
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/06/08 | Reply
@:
uwahhh thanks TTwTT but I wish the best for you and your art! you're a great artist :D
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/04/08 | Reply
@dearzhardy:
TTwTT thanks
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/04/08 | Reply
@toyotami kun:
>w< thank you
dearzhardy
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/04/08 | Reply
it's good...
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/04/08 | Reply
@FunnyWaffle:
yesh yashamaru's cute when she was still young, now she doesn't suit in a skirt XD
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/04/08 | Reply
@toyotami kun:
awww thank you
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/04/08 | Reply
@:
whoah! thanks for reading, nah I like your story more! mines like junk compared to yours :D
toyotami kun
The Marker Maniac. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/01/08 | Reply
this is a really cool story!!! i really like all your character and the way you draw. ^_^ it's so cool ^_^
FunnyWaffle
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/29/08 | Reply
Oooh~!
Yashamaru in a dress! Super cute! xD
And that milk thing was a good excuse :D
DarkRose22
Otakuite | Posted 09/29/08 | Reply
I want to read more
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/28/08 | Reply
@xXNight-SkyXx:
yes bwahahahahahah!!!
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/28/08 | Reply
thank you everyone!!!! TTwTT
PitaMew
Grand Otaku | Posted 09/26/08 | Reply
Omg this is fudgin' awesome! Nice work on it and the coloring is awesome too! Aww I wish it was shojo tho, Its really good!
POP.is.DEAD
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/26/08 | Reply
I absolutely love your artwork!!!
LazieNinjaFrog
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/26/08 | Reply
XD good job! xD
Votes and Favs
Dame X
Senior Otaku | Posted 09/25/08 | Reply
This is fucking awesome! I like the way you color it and shade it........
I can't wait 'till more comes out!!!!!
xXNight-SkyXx
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/25/08 | Reply
this was fuckin hilarious!!!
and her evil laugh:
BUWAHAHAHAHAHHAHA.
=D
Cezieni
Otakuite++ | Posted 09/25/08 | Reply
This continues to be amazing. Though I wish the color was back...
Shadweh
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/25/08 | Reply
If they thought just running those laps was bad, they should try doing it with a full pack. (*evil grin*)
WRECKtangle
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/23/08 | Reply
@kinjiru:
wow!
'stig!
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/21/08 | Reply
@Samedi-Mai:
holy bacon! me too~!
especially when I cut may hair too short @_@!!
I have a friend, she got slapped inside the girls comfort room because this "annoying lady" thought that she's a guy!!!
Samedi-Mai
Call me "Obiri" (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/20/08 | Reply
@Shadweh:
...but...they´re girls... -3-;
Last edited by Samedi-Mai at 12:21:42 AM EDT on September 21, 2008.
Shadweh
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/20/08 | Reply
@Samedi-Mai:
Ooo--harsh! I have a friend of mine who suffers the same thing sometimes, but I don't think she's had that happen to her! Just keep your head high, okay? (at least you get gifts from someone who's interested in you... )
Samedi-Mai
Call me "Obiri" (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/20/08 | Reply
@Shadweh:
I agree with u. XD
I{m sometimes mistaken for a guy in rl. -.-
It doesn}t bother me alot but it sure bugs a bit.
I{ll tell u this, I receive so things from girls that I have to give back because I have to clearify my gender. lmao.
IT{S TRUE! O.O
Samedi-Mai
Call me "Obiri" (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/20/08 | Reply
Great job! It´s nicely done! X3
It´s light and hilarious
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/19/08 | Reply
@WRECKtangle:
hahah pinoy po ako :D
WRECKtangle
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/19/08 | Reply
wow!great art!
pinoy?
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/19/08 | Reply
thanks for supporting my comics!!! m(_ _)m
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/19/08 | Reply
@Shadweh:
ahahah yeah XD
yashamaru's looks are deceiving LOL!
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/19/08 | Reply
@FunnyWaffle:
thanks for liking yashamaru~
Kaijin Kinuma
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/18/08 | Reply
What can I say except that this is one awesome manga. (Sorry... I don't think awesome is a good enough word for it. T_T)
It's one of the best, in my opinion. For one thing, the artwork is mindblowingly incredible and the fact that you kept up with the series is great. (As in, it's not just 5 or 6 pretty pages.) The panels are well organized and flow very smoothly. Your coloring technique is wonderful, too, to say the least. Very awesome combination of media. I'm always looking for new ways to color, but this is one of the coolest combinations I've seen yet.
The characters are believable and deep which goes along with your artistic talent in keeping their expressions lively. (The backgrounds are neat as well...) So basically, the whole product is a success in my opinion and it'd be great to see this get published one day.
I'm working on a story (currently in novel form) but I'm trying to turn it into a manga. Sadly, I haven't had much success because every time I try to start drawing, my mind goes blank and I end up wasting a few hours doing nothing cause I don't know how to start. I've got plenty of character drawing and the story itself is coming along nicely, but when it comes to drawing out the panels... I get the worst case of artist's block. Xp
So how do you do it, is basically what I'm getting at. Do you reference stuff from various manga or does it all come from your mind? How do you plan out the panels and such? When I think about my story, I can see it as if it were an anime but I have a hard time trying to freeze the characters' movements when I try to put it in manga form and make it believable and flowing. ANY ADVICE WOULD HELP ME GREATLY!!
Thanks and keep up the awesome work!! *VOTE & FAVE*
Blubber Farts
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/18/08 | Reply
wow!this is rly good!i love your style!cool characters!!!!:D
FunnyWaffle
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/18/08 | Reply
Ah, I'm starting to think Yashamaru is my favorite comic heroine :D
I like her profile page :)
Shadweh
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/18/08 | Reply
This is in response to the main girl's profile: You're not kidding when you put down "constantly mistaken for a guy!" I honestly thought that she was a guy in the beginning... (good thing I usually look into a character a little while before I go all "fangirl" on them. No offense to anyone who swings that way. ^^;)
hokagegodessarya
Otakuite++ | Posted 09/18/08 | Reply
i love ur art style!!! and the story line's good so far toox3 woot, awesomely awesome awesomeness!!!
~arya minato and itachi
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/18/08 | Reply
thank you every one for the comments m(_ _)m
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/17/08 | Reply
@mskirbyrobot:
ahahah thank you~
this comic is a remake because the first one that I made was given to a friend 5 years ago. and it more focuses on akane's life/love but later in the series we will come to that.
originally the story was for a friend in high school, which plays the role of akane, she just requested me to make a comic about her ragnarok online character crush (the archer) but it turned out to be a graphic novel, obviously I added more characters and a lot of twist and plots in the story. I think it has 400 pages that I drew for 2 weeks(I spend all my summer for this, I didn't sleep too. though its only pencil and rushed n_n;)
some of the events are also based from my personal experience and I was happy that I would share this in a comic form >w<~
there are 4 more major characters that will be discovered as we go~
hope that you'll enjoy the next chapters of it >3<
Last edited by kinjiru at 9:28:20 AM EDT on September 17, 2008.
neko Misty kitten
Grand Otaku | Posted 09/16/08 | Reply
I love the pages that are in color! not that the rest isn't amazing too, but I always enjoy comics so much more when they're in color. thanks!!
Last edited by neko Misty kitten at 12:29:45 AM EDT on September 17, 2008.
Cezieni
Otakuite++ | Posted 09/16/08 | Reply
Sweet merciful Jesus, this never stops being amazing. It's just perfect (also good to see it on the front page where it belongs XD). You said that you messed up the shading, you liar!! The black-and-white style fits this chapter very well. Full-color wouldn't have felt quite right. The best part, though, was that one panel with red blood in it. Very Sin City-ish.
All in all, you've inspired me. I'm going to make a manga. No clue what it's going to be about, but I hope it's as awesome as this. Keep it coming (maybe a little sooner next time though)
FunnyWaffle
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/15/08 | Reply
LMAO How did Shin-Chan get into page 2:9?!
Great stuff! Keep it up!
Shadweh
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/15/08 | Reply
This is pretty cool! Keep them pages comming!
tishamatacoz
Senior Otaku | Posted 09/15/08 | Reply
Ahh I think I've gotten addicted X3 Lol very lovely I adore the story line as well. Keep up the good work luv, hoping to see more pages. ~Amp
mskirbyrobot
Otakuite | Posted 09/15/08 | Reply
Wonderful art... How'd you get so good? *pulls out notepad* I want to know EVERYTHING..... Well yeah, I love it. I love the art and the storyline.
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/15/08 | Reply
@:
ohh my thank you so much for the wonderful comment! *hugs!*
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/26/08 | Reply
thank you so much for the comments guys!!!
I really didn't expect that you'll like it TTwTT
そんなにありがとう! ありがとう 皆ーさん〈3 m(_ _)m
joeyrules
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/25/08 | Reply
This is awesome. Hope to read more. Good Jobs!
~Joeyrules~
FunnyWaffle
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/25/08 | Reply
Ugh, how come this isn't on the top on the homepage?! D:
Your comic is way too cool XD
And you coloring on the cover of the second installment is awesome!
haseo luver92
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/25/08 | Reply
wow, this is utterly amazing. i could never do what u do in this manga (i'm throughly glad i decided to read this!), color pencils have never been my thing, and u do an excellent job with the colors, making characters stand out, setting the mood right, just everything!! it is great to see people not always going to the computer for everything (i'm breaking that habit as we speak ;P i'm trying to do more traditional inking and coloring w/color pencils and copics, i only use my computer now for tones, and occasional cell-shading ^^) but i must say once again. WOW. it's incredible. i can't wait to see more, and as many have said before, this manga deserves waaay more kudos than it gets. ^^
haseo
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/25/08 | Reply
@Cezieni:
ahahha thanks! the second chapter is shaded with pencil, but I totally messed it becsuse I kinda ruched it, the 3rd is neatly inked :3
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
@tsyou umbre:
thank you so much!
Cezieni
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
Wow. Full color, all traditional media, great character design, beautiful art (especially the backgrounds). All and all its an amazing manga, and a great break from the typical shiny-ness of photoshop colored art. The story was a little hard to follow, but its the first chapter, so what the heck. Hope you do more. Faves.
tsyou umbre
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
i love your comic it's amazing keep it up!!!!!
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
@Rein Akira:
oooohhh thank you so much for the faves
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
@darKatana:
sure! thanks for the comment~
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
@White Witness:
thank you so much! I'll be updating as soon as I can
White Witness
Senior Otaku | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
You have a very good art style--your pages look really good. And the story is very interesting so far, I'm looking forward to seeing where it ends up going.
darKatana
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
Awesome job there!!!*thumbs up* The coloring is great and so the art. More pages soon please?
Rein Akira
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
Kyaaa! Awesome! So cool! I can't wait to read more! (*Faves*)
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
@FunnyWaffle:
thank you so much for the comment!
FunnyWaffle
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
Oh, wow! It's colored! xD
I love your story so far! The third panel on page 7 is my fave :D
And the different angles in this are awesome!
The way you bold and outline your characters is cool, too :)
Great job on the first chapter! :D
I'd love to see more!