Your story seems interesting! Oh Noes! Poppy Seeds! Run while you can before you fall prey to the sweet seedy lullaby of them! AAAAAHHHHH! Your Ghost look cool like some one without a face. Or an Eye Doll... (Some weird doll with like, no pupils... I played the dressups at eyedoll.com)
You forget...if Pheonix has an evil twin then...Apollo must! ~hires Apollo's evil tiwn Ollopa as a prosecuter with Xin Oehp, Pheonix's evil twin as a coach THEN has Shadow Link to intimidate the judge and witnesses.~ Now who pwned who?
Rad Moogle (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/11/08 | Reply
~hires Pheonix's evil twin a prosecuter.~ Well this story looks interesting....very interesting indeed....I have learedn many things today. Like what an incubus is and how o defend oneself from a vampire now...to take over the world.
*still doesn't get the poppy seed thing* Hm... wait a sec... is that guy a vampire? If so, is this that thing that if you spill many small grain-like things (rice, sawdust, sand, salt, etc.) then the vampire will feel hopelessy compelled to count them all..? XD *is probably wrong*
Aaaaanywho, yay for new page!!! :3 *hugs* Keep up the great work.
XD Sorry, couldn't resist. XD Anywho, love the expressions on his (Seth's?) face on this page. ^_^ Keep up the excellent work!! I can't wait for more pages!!! X3 *hugs*
To be honest, I can't think of an intelligent comment to make right now but I'm commenting anyway to let you know you better continue this.
The first thing that popped into my mind was "it's the dude on the cover with the red eye! 8D" ...^^' but I see one part of the plot you mentioned. Now...was it the vampire dude who tries to kill him? *bad memory*
Oooh, looks awesome!!! I love the cover, it's amazing! ^_^ And the intro page looks really cool too. *nods* The demon is my favorite. X3 Yes, it should definately stay!!!!!!! *nods* *hugs**faves*
XdrownXmeX
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/13/09 | Reply
is that the little kid from the cover? still so cute even though they're crying. update plz!!!
EmoSprinkles
Otakuite+ | Posted 11/06/08 | Reply
Your story seems interesting! Oh Noes! Poppy Seeds
! Run while you can before you fall prey to the sweet seedy lullaby of them! AAAAAHHHHH! Your Ghost look cool like some one without a face. Or an Eye Doll... (Some weird doll with like, no pupils... I played the dressups at eyedoll.com)
GaarasEmoX3
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/12/08 | Reply
@:
I love your user picture. (whachamacalit pic) Lord Cain looks awesome! -
Idon't have one yet, obviously...
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GaarasEmoX3
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/12/08 | Reply
OOOoooo... O.o is he a vampie? I love vampires.
Linku-kun
Rad Moogle (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/11/08 | Reply
@twiliwolf:
...>D ~Hires...Chuck Norris to own them all~
twiliwolf
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/11/08 | Reply
@Linku-kun:
uhhhhh, *hires good Karma, Edgeworth, and Godot to help defend then Samus to own Darklink* what now?!
Linku-kun
Rad Moogle (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/11/08 | Reply
@twiliwolf:
You forget...if Pheonix has an evil twin then...Apollo must! ~hires Apollo's evil tiwn Ollopa as a prosecuter with Xin Oehp, Pheonix's evil twin as a coach THEN has Shadow Link to intimidate the judge and witnesses.~ Now who pwned who?
twiliwolf
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/11/08 | Reply
@Linku-kun:
lawl *hires Apollo with Pheonix coaching him* owned
Linku-kun
Rad Moogle (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/11/08 | Reply
~hires Pheonix's evil twin a prosecuter.~ Well this story looks interesting....very interesting indeed....I have learedn many things today. Like what an incubus is and how o defend oneself from a vampire now...to take over the world.
Sage of Magic
Moe Foxgirl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/09/08 | Reply
@twiliwolf:
Oh noez! D:
twiliwolf
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/09/08 | Reply
@Sage of Magic:
*hires Pheonix Wright as attorny* mwa ha!
Sage of Magic
Moe Foxgirl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/09/08 | Reply
*dramatic motion* Okay then twili, I'll see you in court...haha, jk. Great page. Very dramatic and looks good.
twiliwolf
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/09/08 | Reply
@midnightqueen:
In old legends there are several things that can stop vampires:
wild Rosebushes
Fishing nets
Poppy seeds
the poppy seeds were said to cause the vampire to go to sleep
and also i heard the reason for the fishing net is the vampire feels cumpulsed to count and untie all the knots XP
Last edited by twiliwolf at 6:43:20 PM EDT on September 10, 2008.
midnightqueen
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/09/08 | Reply
*still doesn't get the poppy seed thing* Hm... wait a sec... is that guy a vampire? If so, is this that thing that if you spill many small grain-like things (rice, sawdust, sand, salt, etc.) then the vampire will feel hopelessy compelled to count them all..? XD *is probably wrong*
Aaaaanywho, yay for new page!!! :3 *hugs* Keep up the great work.
tishamatacoz
Senior Otaku | Posted 09/02/08 | Reply
Looks like you will have an ammusing story :] ~amp
midnightqueen
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/01/08 | Reply
Poppy seeds!!!! OH NOEZ!!! D: ...Wait, what?
XD Sorry, couldn't resist. XD Anywho, love the expressions on his (Seth's?) face on this page. ^_^ Keep up the excellent work!! I can't wait for more pages!!! X3 *hugs*
XdrownXmeX
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/01/08 | Reply
i like the intro thus far,i still like the cover art though^^
twiliwolf
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/01/08 | Reply
@themakita:
an Incubus is a creature who makes people fall in love with them and then they take the persons soul ^_^
midnightqueen
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/01/08 | Reply
Oooh, ominous. ^_^ Love it so far!! Keep up the great work. I love the high contrast shading, too. *hugs*
themakita
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/01/08 | Reply
wait, is an incubus a soul collector?....i dont remeber.....interesting story by the way, can't wait to read the rest XD
Sage of Magic
Moe Foxgirl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/01/08 | Reply
To be honest, I can't think of an intelligent comment to make right now but I'm commenting anyway to let you know you better continue this.
The first thing that popped into my mind was "it's the dude on the cover with the red eye! 8D" ...^^' but I see one part of the plot you mentioned. Now...was it the vampire dude who tries to kill him? *bad memory*
AnimeAngel993
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/31/08 | Reply
AWESOME COVER!!!!
I like the ghosts :3
and there is TOTALLY a Yoai couple in there!!!
midnightqueen
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/31/08 | Reply
Oooh, looks awesome!!!
I love the cover, it's amazing! ^_^ And the intro page looks really cool too. *nods* The demon is my favorite. X3 Yes, it should definately stay!!!!!!! *nods* *hugs**faves*
Sage of Magic
Moe Foxgirl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/31/08 | Reply
Awesome. Just awesome. The characters look cool and it's a good start to ease people in. d^^b I wait for more.