I got fascinated by the title and now the story XD I'm such a sucker for violence and profanities (which is a compliment O___o). More updates would be awesome. :3 pweaseeee~~~?
LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT
*3 hours later*
LUV IT LUV IT!!!!!! Phew finnaly.....CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Puppet-Chan
I love it so far! I believe its good enough to be a professional manga sold in stores! X3 Other than a few typos and anatomical things that seem off to me (some hands and profiles), its looking great. ^^ I can't wait for the next chapter!
oh and on the end of chapter one, u have a mistake. its the second to last dialogue where it says, "Good, Hah!! That bastard thinks he was the one who was sold, well in fact HER sister is our main target..."
its supposed to be his sister. just a little typo.
oh wowieee george is HOT!!! and so is whats his face. the main character *scrunches face thinking* uh... i cant believe i forgot his name!! wellz anyways great job!!
whaaa... change of plans... i'll make has a totall of maybe 4-5 volumes.. the story is finished.. this ain't gonna be a one shot manga...lol .. maybe i'll post the first volume here....
Gadriann
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/14/09 | Reply
I got fascinated by the title and now the story XD I'm such a sucker for violence and profanities (which is a compliment O___o). More updates would be awesome. :3 pweaseeee~~~?
Kazumi Saya
Otakuite++ | Posted 11/10/08 | Reply
I love this!
I recognize the name Lazarus from a book... 'The Most Dangerous Game' - Lazarus was a ferocious hunting dog I believe lol
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/09/08 | Reply
Keep Going!! This is awesome.
SailorJuipiterFF7
Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/09/08 | Reply
*squeal* More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kitty K.O.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/02/08 | Reply
@Heartless15:
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/02/08 | Reply
@X Saara Ann X:
tn!! glad you liked my work
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/02/08 | Reply
@Kitty K.O.:
lol..hehehe i'm just getting started on it.. hahaha stay updated lols...
Kitty K.O.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/02/08 | Reply
No, no, no, no, no! Not nearly flirty enough! *repeatedly smacks table with a fish* More flirtyness! XD lol
Thanks for the update. Look forward to more. =^_^=
X Saara Ann X
Otakuite+ | Posted 11/01/08 | Reply
you are such an awsome drawer , and that story is just fantastic !
:)
Keiyou
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/31/08 | Reply
Very neat plot you have going on ^^
I'm looking forawrd to reading more in the future!
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/31/08 | Reply
@:
uhmm... phtoshop.. downloaded some tones and brushes in the net then.... i traditionaly inked and sketch the pages
Kitty K.O.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/29/08 | Reply
Heh... Well isn't he the Cassanova. =^_^= Looking forward to more updates.
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/28/08 | Reply
This manga rocks!!!!
Keep it up!
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/28/08 | Reply
@Shadweh:
hahaha.. i remember that scene!!! lolzzz
Shadweh
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/27/08 | Reply
[Chapter 2, Page 10 response]
(*laughs*) Ouch! That had to hurt!
(Reminds me of the time when Hiei fell out of tree after listening to a demon whistle...
)
darkittylove
Grand Otaku | Posted 10/26/08 | Reply
This manga of yours is just too AWESOME! I'm in love!!!
Lissa2
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/26/08 | Reply
This is awesome!!!!!
Kitty K.O.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/26/08 | Reply
@Heartless15:
Yep, =^_^= Laza-kun is a-okay!
SailorJuipiterFF7
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/24/08 | Reply
more pages!!!!!!!!!!!
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/24/08 | Reply
@Kitty K.O.:
really, thanks i thought i messed up his face there... but come to think of it's still okie...
Ambermangalove
Otakuite | Posted 10/23/08 | Reply
i read this and fell in love hope u keep it up forever.
Kitty K.O.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
I don't think there's anything wrong with Lazarus in any of the panels. =^_^= Waiting to see what happens next. =^_^=
kumiko chan
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/20/08 | Reply
wow this is an this a cool story, and nice artwork by the way>_<
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/20/08 | Reply
@Karmira:
yeah!!! tnx.. i'm happy that i update whaaa pc fixed
Last edited by Heartless15 at 6:29:57 AM EDT on October 20, 2008.
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/20/08 | Reply
The plot's thickening! It's not that simple. Great Manga.
sasoriforever
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/19/08 | Reply
LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT
*3 hours later*
LUV IT LUV IT!!!!!! Phew finnaly.....CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Puppet-Chan
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/19/08 | Reply
@saiyukiluver:
heya!!! tnx for reading my manga lols.... hope you enjoyed readimg it
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/19/08 | Reply
@Tatsumafangirl411:
lol i love my avi too!!! *never changes avatar for a long time*
saiyukiluver
Senior Otaku | Posted 10/19/08 | Reply
Awwww This is so cute! I hope they get away safely ;w;
Tatsumafangirl411
Grand Otaku | Posted 10/19/08 | Reply
I LUV it so far! This is sooooo
awesome! Ur right the chibis r cute!
P.S
I Luv ur avatar! Its so cute!
Well, c ya!
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
@Heartless15:
Hey, don't cry. I meant "terrible" by horrible place to stop. I LOVE THE STORY!!!
asianprincess842
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/15/08 | Reply
@Heartless15:
np im like a grammar/ spelling freak. except when its like, casual typing. if u kno what i mean.
Kitty K.O.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/15/08 | Reply
Aw, well isn't that cute? =^_^= Well, intrigued to see where this is going. =^_^= I'll wait for the next page.
SaiKat
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/15/08 | Reply
I love this scene!! Sooo cute!!!!! More Pages!! You Rule!!!
YAYAH!!!
Shadweh
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/15/08 | Reply
[Chapter 2, page 1 response]
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! This scene is so cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute!!! X3 (*HUGS*--because lower-case doesn't quite express what I want XD)
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/15/08 | Reply
@:
aww....
wish you try to read it.... there a lot more to it that that lol....
tnx fr the comment!!!
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/15/08 | Reply
@Karmira:
whaaaaa
.. i really need to check (maybe 10 times) the page after i post it!!!
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/14/08 | Reply
Terrible WELL Awesome Cliffhanger into the next chapter! Except for the typo mistakes, the story's fabulous!!!
I can't wait until the next chapter. 
Have a great day!!
PoisonOnigiri
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/14/08 | Reply
@Heartless15:
Happy to try and help. ^^
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/14/08 | Reply
@PoisonOnigiri:
great!! i'll be working on my anatomy more and mybe seek help on my grammar problems..... thank you!!!
PoisonOnigiri
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/14/08 | Reply
I love it so far! I believe its good enough to be a professional manga sold in stores! X3 Other than a few typos and anatomical things that seem off to me (some hands and profiles), its looking great. ^^ I can't wait for the next chapter!
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/14/08 | Reply
@asianprincess842:
OMG thanks for ponting that out!! i always get that.. whaaa and i didn't notice it!!! thank you
*shots self*
btw the main character's name is Gail.. lolzzz
Last edited by Heartless15 at 4:19:45 AM EDT on October 15, 2008.
asianprincess842
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/14/08 | Reply
oh and on the end of chapter one, u have a mistake. its the second to last dialogue where it says, "Good, Hah!! That bastard thinks he was the one who was sold, well in fact HER sister is our main target..."
its supposed to be his sister. just a little typo.
asianprincess842
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/14/08 | Reply
oh wowieee george is HOT!!! and so is whats his face. the main character *scrunches face thinking* uh... i cant believe i forgot his name!! wellz anyways great job!!
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/14/08 | Reply
@Shadweh:
lol glad you like the story so far...
Shadweh
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/14/08 | Reply
[End of Chapter 1]
And the plot thickens! Great cliffhanger to get into the next chapter!
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/14/08 | Reply
@SaiKat:
me too.. lol...
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/14/08 | Reply
@Darkgoddess17:
Thank you!!!
i'm not much of a writer
.. but, i'm doing my best to make the story more interesting... hope you enjoy it...
SaiKat
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/13/08 | Reply
Awesome more pages!!!!! I'm o happy now!!
Great job!!!!!!
Darkgoddess17
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/13/08 | Reply
wow!You really captivate your audience.You must be a really good writer.
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/11/08 | Reply
whaaa... change of plans... i'll make has a totall of maybe 4-5 volumes.. the story is finished.. this ain't gonna be a one shot manga...lol .. maybe i'll post the first volume here....
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/11/08 | Reply
Brilliant story and characters. Keep it up!!
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/11/08 | Reply
@Heartless15:
yay basta maghanap kalang twins kami yub LOL
yay! nae-excite na ako X3
Vasto Lorde
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/11/08 | Reply
Brilliant stuff
,cant wait for some more!
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
@kinjiru:
cge ba!! lol....
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
@Heartless15:
awww pero kung pupunta ka sa komikon hanapin mo nalang ako sa REVEL sa tiange XDD
magbebenta ako dun, sana magkita tayu~ X3
Kaneya Uchiha
Senior Otaku | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
Oh! Come on! It was just getting good! Real good! Please submit more sometime soon! It's really great so far... Don't stop!
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
@Stocking:
thank you!!!!
i hope you like the story too!!!!
SaiKat
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
YAY!! u made more pages!!! XD I'm so happy! It looks sooo good ^_^
Stocking
Shadow (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
OH SHI-
The comments on this got so much in the matter of just one day. Wow.
I love your art. The cover is really nice.
RikuisHOT
RikuisHOT (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
@Heartless15:
ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY DO! xD
mimisun
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
@Heartless15:
Yaay good luck
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
@mimisun:
tnx!!! i'll do my best to update at least 2 page a day... hope i can maintain the phase...
mimisun
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
THis is really good and I like the art too its nicely drawn. When is it going to come out can't wait.
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
@RikuisHOT:
thank you!!!
hope you enjoy this manga so far....
RikuisHOT
RikuisHOT (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
This is going to be a good manga x3 can't wait till you finish it!
You are such an amazing drawer! xD
~*!Riku-sama
xxCamiKaosxx
Otakuite | Posted 10/09/08 | Reply
AH! It's so pretty!
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/09/08 | Reply
@Karmira:
lol, yeah... his sister is one of this mangas main character...
glad u'r liking the story....
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/09/08 | Reply
@:
tnx, glad u like it
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/09/08 | Reply
WOW! Now, he has a sister. And she's not allowed to come with him. Nice unexpected twist!
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/09/08 | Reply
@Heartless15:
Thanks, but don't push the story and give us less quality. Good Luck!!
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/09/08 | Reply
@Karmira:
sorry for the slow update, i'll do my very best to update at least 2 page or more...
Last edited by Heartless15 at 2:02:21 AM EDT on October 9, 2008.
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/09/08 | Reply
I'm hooked! Maybe put up more pages than one each time, please.
ShikamaruRocks
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
@Heartless15:
Great^^ I hope it works out for ya!
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
@ShikamaruRocks:
it really bugs me when that happends.. next time i'll make sure that the 3rd page will be okie...
SaiKat
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
YAY!! ANother page!! Nice job!! Make more okeeeeeeees!! XD
:)
LovelyRisa
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
Wow, AMAZING art and cover! Very artistic! Keep it up!
KoInu kyan
Grand Otaku | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
Yay! More! More! :3 Please keep it up! If you need help, just ask Rishi! :D
ShikamaruRocks
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
Still awesome.
And you're right. The link to the other picture is better. Too bad that the site has problems and stuff sometimes.
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
Definitely going to follow this one! Great beginning!!
nvalenc
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
@kinjiru:
hehehe maybalak sana.....kaso hnd p tpos.. hehehe
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
wahhh are you going to sell this at komikon?
SailorJuipiterFF7
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/07/08 | Reply
oooooooooo I like it!!!!
tishamatacoz
Senior Otaku | Posted 10/07/08 | Reply
awesome :] cant wait to see moree :3 ~Amp
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/06/08 | Reply
@SaiKat:
lol working on it....
SaiKat
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/06/08 | Reply
Pleeez make the next pages soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
XD
imouto chan
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/06/08 | Reply
Wowzers, this looks awesome beyond all reasoning ^_^ I really look forward to more :)
ShikamaruRocks
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
@Heartless15:
Okaaaaay. If you don't wanna, that's fine. Still, though, I'd love to read it and I'm not sure how I'd be able to buy it from you.....
toyotami kun
The Marker Maniac. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
this looks interesting ^_^i hope you can continue ^_^
kinjiru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
wow!! and detailed :o
bravo~
TwistedCyberChick
Grand Otaku | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
You have a really nice drawing style. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Update when you can. ^.^
Miss Anonymous: ARE YOU CALLING THE PLIGHT OF PIZZA EVERYWHERE STUPID?!?!? >:O
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
@KoInu kyan:
it'll be awhile......
Heartless15
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
@ShikamaruRocks:
yeah i'm thinking just the whole chapter1, but about posting it all??? well let me think about it...
Shadweh
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
Brilliant!!! I can't wait to read more!!!
SaiKat
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
oooooooooooo! I love the artwork. I hope you make more soon! Cuz now I'm interested in the story
KoInu kyan
Grand Otaku | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
Rishi ish waiting for more.
...
...is more done yet?
Now? Now?
C'mon, you're making Rishi wait forever!!! TT_TT
GodessOfMist
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
this looks AWSOME cant wait for more
ShikamaruRocks
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
Awesome. You'll sell this?
I'm hoping you'll be posting the whole thing on theO too, right? Cuz I wanna read it and don't know where I'd be able to buy it^^
He's really awesome looking. As always, love you're style, and you totally rock
XxAznSkillZXx
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
I love the art I wonder what is going to happen.