Very well done! I can tell you put a lot of work into this! It's tough to draw the same characters over and over again...the toughest being just keeping them looking the same!^^' But you did a very nice job with that! Keep it up!
Seems really dragonballyish...Which there is nothing wrong with it...just saying.
I think ur story also seems to be progressing extremly quickly, and i think it should slow down just a tad. And you should have less panels on a page even if they are just talking cuz it makes the page look a little crowded and the words are slightly hard to read.
Wow!! Good job! It's amazing you had the patience to redraw this! I can't stand looking at my older works. XD If I had to redo them, I'd die!! XD But you did great! And I like the story so far. ^^ The kick on page 5 looks fine!! I wouldn't know how to do that. *laugh* So you drew it wonderfully. :3 I like Miguel~~ he's HOT. <3333 Oh, another critique for page 5 though...for some reason...the guys being beaten up look really happy to me. It's like "YAY!! We love being beaten up buy these guys! :D" I don't know. Other than that, nicely done~ I always envy those that can draw manga. ^^ Drawing that same chara over and over, and making them look the same is tough stuff!
oh and trust me i know the pain of redrawing T.T
thats what im doing right now with soul ryuki i started to not like where it was going so i took it all off and im remaking it now
its ok if you wait to introduce ppl XD its action first and introductions latter some times XD
dude is your comic right or left? dont wory i understood it anyway
awww i never herd of that movie
dude you have an awesome last name!
the " he is still twiching" part made me laff!
i think your comic cover art is awesome!
xaos
Burning Spirit (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/18/09 | Reply
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That means a lot to me, thank you very much Pisha! *hugs*
ElvesAteMyRamen
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply
Very well done! I can tell you put a lot of work into this! It's tough to draw the same characters over and over again...the toughest being just keeping them looking the same!^^' But you did a very nice job with that! Keep it up!
~*Elves
C ko
Otakuite+ | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply
I know you put a lot of hard work in this son. My favorite thing in this comic is all the little jokes you put in.
Bulma
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
@xaos:
I do not have a paintbrush - I can not.. even draw..
He was so sweet and innocent. ^_^
Could you teach me some moves?!
If there's nothing wrong with me, then there must be something wrong with the universe!
TheAngelRaine
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
Seems really dragonballyish...Which there is nothing wrong with it...just saying.
I think ur story also seems to be progressing extremly quickly, and i think it should slow down just a tad. And you should have less panels on a page even if they are just talking cuz it makes the page look a little crowded and the words are slightly hard to read.
Rai-chan
xaos
Burning Spirit (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
@Bulma:
When you got the glow... LOVE that movie too!
I'm glad you liked the prologue
Angel Zakuro
bird nerd. (Otaku Angel) | Posted 01/10/09 | Reply
Wow!! Good job! It's amazing you had the patience to redraw this! I can't stand looking at my older works. XD If I had to redo them, I'd die!! XD But you did great! And I like the story so far. ^^ The kick on page 5 looks fine!! I wouldn't know how to do that. *laugh* So you drew it wonderfully. :3 I like Miguel~~ he's HOT. <3333 Oh, another critique for page 5 though...for some reason...the guys being beaten up look really happy to me. It's like "YAY!! We love being beaten up buy these guys! :D" I don't know. Other than that, nicely done~ I always envy those that can draw manga. ^^ Drawing that same chara over and over, and making them look the same is tough stuff!
red kie
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/10/09 | Reply
oh and trust me i know the pain of redrawing T.T
thats what im doing right now with soul ryuki i started to not like where it was going so i took it all off and im remaking it now
)Oo~ Black rabit ~oO(
red kie
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/10/09 | Reply
its ok if you wait to introduce ppl XD its action first and introductions latter some times XD
dude is your comic right or left? dont wory i understood it anyway
awww i never herd of that movie
dude you have an awesome last name!
the " he is still twiching" part made me laff!
i think your comic cover art is awesome!
)Oo~ Black rabit ~oO(
Bulma
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/10/09 | Reply
*hugs* As soon as I read Shogun I heard Sho in my head! That is one of my fav movies of all time ever!
Love the comic. The ending made me giggle.
If there's nothing wrong with me, then there must be something wrong with the universe!