....miwa looks really cool on page 18 panel 4 and page 19 panel 3....
i just thought i'd let you know...haha.....
who's odd? i wanna know *hint hint hint hint*
Awesome.
I love how one of the people are all "Go back to bed" and the others all "You can sleep with us tonight" Nice contrast between them, you know?
Process of thoughts while reading:
1. OHMIGOSH SHADING! *love love*
2. lawl, child birth
3. tests O.O
thoughts translated:
I thoroughly enjoy what ever medium you're using to shade this thing. It's very interesting. The one complaint I have though is that the pages are too small. Also, you might wanna consider more panel variation unless you're going for American comic book style.
Second, starting off with a childbirth struck me as funny for an odd reason. But it was cool.
Three, I am curious to see what they are doing. :3
Call me "Obiri" (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
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Twliwolf! I love how you did thish. O.O I´ll fav. and hug. ok!
SLEEPING IN FTW.
haha.
i really like this....especially cus its totally relatable*wen waking up around noon* awesome.
i guess only down side of it is that the pages are so small D:
ill comment mre wen mroe pages come :D
and if possible, can u make them bigger?
Last edited by Lizinator03 at 2:32:08 PM EST on January 11, 2009.
Oh! Awesome cover :3
I like how he's sort of coming out of the shadows, and I like the how you can see the strokes of paint on the outer part of the circle.
Good Job Twili-chan ^^
AnimeAngel993
Otaku Legend | Posted 04/21/09 | Reply
weee birthdays
Lizinator03
Otaku Legend | Posted 04/19/09 | Reply
....miwa looks really cool on page 18 panel 4 and page 19 panel 3....
i just thought i'd let you know...haha.....
who's odd? i wanna know *hint hint hint hint*
gaaragirl911
Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/10/09 | Reply
This is really good so far! I can't wait to read what happens next!!
*your new reader*
Gaaragirl911.
Surprise me ;]
AnimeAngel993
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/03/09 | Reply
Hiro's a man whore? wow that's just... wow. lol
AnimeAngel993
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/03/09 | Reply
his "girls"? what do you meanz???lol
AnimeAngel993
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/03/09 | Reply
wow jacob seems concerned (sarcasm)
themakita
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/02/09 | Reply
haha, it's looking really cool so far :D
XdrownXmeX
Otakuite+ | Posted 01/30/09 | Reply
i loves all the shading! i demand more pages cause it's that interesting ;)
Team Plasma N
Sinbad of Sindria (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/30/09 | Reply
This looks interesting, can't wait to see more!
AnimeAngel993
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/30/09 | Reply
"He wont just disappear like that.... will you?"
Nice, hope to see more ^_~
AnimeAngel993
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/30/09 | Reply
Awe, how sweet.
I love how he cares so much about Jacob :)
AnimeAngel993
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/30/09 | Reply
Awesome.
I love how one of the people are all "Go back to bed" and the others all "You can sleep with us tonight" Nice contrast between them, you know?
AnimeAngel993
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/30/09 | Reply
lol... Jacob.
ha ha ha TEAM EDWARD!
Nice job twili. Keep it up
AnimeAngel993
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/30/09 | Reply
lol I love that!
"AAAAAAAAAAAH!... Thud"
twiliwolf
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/13/09 | Reply
@AnimeAngel993:
I chose Hiro because it sounds like the english word Hero, but i think that in japanese its Kind, gentle or Horse..... lol
Last edited by twiliwolf at 8:26:12 PM EST on January 13, 2009.
twiliwolf
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply
@Sage of Magic:
the medium is basicly pencil sketches with water and ink shading
Sage of Magic
Moe Foxgirl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
Process of thoughts while reading:
1. OHMIGOSH SHADING! *love love*
2. lawl, child birth
3. tests O.O
thoughts translated:
I thoroughly enjoy what ever medium you're using to shade this thing. It's very interesting. The one complaint I have though is that the pages are too small. Also, you might wanna consider more panel variation unless you're going for American comic book style.
Second, starting off with a childbirth struck me as funny for an odd reason. But it was cool.
Three, I am curious to see what they are doing. :3
Samedi-Mai
Call me "Obiri" (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
HI
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AnimeAngel993
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
hmm what's going to be tested?
Is it like a cure for cancer (I Am Legend Stasis)
:P I look forward to more~
AnimeAngel993
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
ha ha ha ha ha
"I'm going to the back"
That could so be dirty.
(sorry pervert here :P)
AnimeAngel993
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
I agree that the pages are sort of small,
i love that name "Hiro"
does it mean something?
Lizinator03
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
SLEEPING IN FTW.
haha.
i really like this....especially cus its totally
relatable*wen waking up around noon*awesome.i guess only down side of it is that the pages are so small D:
ill comment mre wen mroe pages come :D
and if possible, can u make them bigger?
Last edited by Lizinator03 at 2:32:08 PM EST on January 11, 2009.
twiliwolf
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
@AnimeAngel993:
Lawl thank you XD
AnimeAngel993
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
Awe! I like that character already!!!!
"you can't die... you can't"
Awesome way to start off a story.
I look forward to more :P
(See?? I kept true to my word)
AnimeAngel993
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
Oh! Awesome cover :3
I like how he's sort of coming out of the shadows, and I like the how you can see the strokes of paint on the outer part of the circle.
Good Job Twili-chan ^^