LOng TIme FRnds!!Thnx A Lot For Ur COmments!!! but I Am Not GOing TO COntinue This MAnga NYmore, Not Because "THE PTAKU SAN" Is SAying, I am DOIn This, Cuz EM MAking Three More MAngas!! Actually I didnt Write the script Of the MAnga I was Just Drawing, Lol
but this Time I Am MAkin A MAnga Full!! :)
Srry!! But I think ill Continue THis MAnga LATer :(
Really didn't read it...I'm lazy... It looks pretty good though... But... 3 PARTS TO A LITTLE FAN THINGIE!!! YOU'RE OUT OF YOUR MIND KID!!! Or you were just realy bored, or you just love to get into your work. Like me!!! Oh yeah... Don't kill me for the "I didn't realy read it" part... Because if you're planing to... I'll get to you first. Just kidding! But seriously don't start over-reacting.
Yeah Ur Right, Lolx Actually I was Just Practicing, I didnt Write The Story Too, Its just In my Mind, Kind Ov stored In My Mind, Or wateve you GUys Wanaa Say, But Nowadays i am working On 2 mAngas, Well WAit For It too, They Are Really Great! I promise you! DAt Youll Like it!!
i like your manga but i think you should add "I'm" to some dialogue in place of using "i am" so much. it makes it seem robotic sort of. i like everything else though very good keep up the good work
Not bad! I like the front pages and the effects and background! I also like the main character; he's pretty handsome^^ I'll be waiting for the next one! GJ!
-Nana
hurki uchiha
Otakuite+ | Posted 07/21/12 | Reply
yo it's my ali14. your doing great with this story. keep it up pal.XD
wolf eye
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/11/10 | Reply
awwws ok ... CAN"T WAIT TO READ YOUR OTHERS!!!
Carbon Frost
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 05/23/10 | Reply
okay dude seriously i'm jealous right now o.O
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:P
ali14
Grand Otaku | Posted 02/02/10 | Reply
well it's coming along great. keep up the good work.
ali14
Grand Otaku | Posted 10/19/09 | Reply
@nadirrox:
hey when r u going to post more th of lost ghost on here lonewolf?
ali14
Grand Otaku | Posted 07/04/09 | Reply
@nadirrox:
ok lonewolf.
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 06/29/09 | Reply
@ All
LOng TIme FRnds!!Thnx A Lot For Ur COmments!!! but I Am Not GOing TO COntinue This MAnga NYmore, Not Because "THE PTAKU SAN" Is SAying, I am DOIn This, Cuz EM MAking Three More MAngas!! Actually I didnt Write the script Of the MAnga I was Just Drawing, Lol
but this Time I Am MAkin A MAnga Full!! :)
Srry!! But I think ill Continue THis MAnga LATer :(
OtakuSan85362
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 06/24/09 | Reply
Really didn't read it...I'm lazy... It looks pretty good though... But... 3 PARTS TO A LITTLE FAN THINGIE!!! YOU'RE OUT OF YOUR MIND KID!!! Or you were just realy bored, or you just love to get into your work. Like me!!! Oh yeah... Don't kill me for the "I didn't realy read it" part... Because if you're planing to... I'll get to you first. Just kidding! But seriously don't start over-reacting.
wolf eye
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/23/09 | Reply
this is crazy cool add more :3
wolf eye
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/23/09 | Reply
@ali14:
lol yeah
gunArt
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/16/09 | Reply
whehehe coOL!!
CREepy stuff luv it !!
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 06/13/09 | Reply
Lolx....
katy ls
Otakuite++ | Posted 06/12/09 | Reply
NM my comuter had a glitch
katy ls
Otakuite++ | Posted 06/12/09 | Reply
wow the comic is like shorter it is only 15 ages and when I saw it be4 it was more than 15 pages... Did you accidentally cut it off or what?
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 06/11/09 | Reply
@ali
yeah his Dad Is Not An Important Character, The MAin Characters Are hiroshi and The GHost
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 06/11/09 | Reply
Yeah Ur Right, Lolx Actually I was Just Practicing, I didnt Write The Story Too, Its just In my Mind, Kind Ov stored In My Mind, Or wateve you GUys Wanaa Say, But Nowadays i am working On 2 mAngas, Well WAit For It too, They Are Really Great! I promise you! DAt Youll Like it!!
Anyways Thnx For DA COmment!!
ali14
Grand Otaku | Posted 06/10/09 | Reply
@wolf eye:
i know . imean come on we don't even know his dad well enough.
mathewgreat
Otakuite | Posted 06/09/09 | Reply
awesome dude!!!! I liked the last page of PART 3!!
You are at the pro level!! keep up the gud work!!!
Your story is great too!!! :D
ali14
Grand Otaku | Posted 06/05/09 | Reply
@nadirrox:
ya know i have a week stomic but i'll deal with it.
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 06/04/09 | Reply
Thanx, i will Try TO DO IT Next Time
i Heart Waffles
Otakuite | Posted 06/03/09 | Reply
i like your manga but i think you should add "I'm" to some dialogue in place of using "i am" so much. it makes it seem robotic sort of. i like everything else though very good keep up the good work
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 06/03/09 | Reply
I Killed His DAD
!!!!!1
Muhaahhahahaahahahahahahaha
wolf eye
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/02/09 | Reply
you gotta write more or i will kill you jk jk jk wat you did with the dad was shocking you have to write more
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 06/02/09 | Reply
Lolx, just WAit For The NExt PAges :D
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 06/02/09 | Reply
Lolx, just WAit For The NExt PAges :D
ali14
Grand Otaku | Posted 06/02/09 | Reply
what is up with his dad getting killed lonewolf?
ali14
Grand Otaku | Posted 05/21/09 | Reply
your manga has come along way from what it use to be.
ayamesomething
Otakuite | Posted 05/18/09 | Reply
i really like ur comic I hope u keep going with it
ali14
Grand Otaku | Posted 05/18/09 | Reply
wow this awsome. it's really really comeing alone now.
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 05/17/09 | Reply
Thnx For The COmments!! ^^
wolf eye
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/17/09 | Reply
omg omg omg
wolf eye
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/13/09 | Reply
ahh i see youve been getting alot of comments this is a good i love how you draw
ali14
Grand Otaku | Posted 05/13/09 | Reply
it's really comeing along.
ikara-o-kage
Otakuite++ | Posted 05/11/09 | Reply
Wow! Nice job! I like it. ^^ It has a nice story line so far, so do keep going. I love your drawings as well, very detailed and neat. ^^
chemisis
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/11/09 | Reply
Your drawing style is really cool, keep it up
Narumaniac
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/08/09 | Reply
Not bad! I like the front pages and the effects and background! I also like the main character; he's pretty handsome^^ I'll be waiting for the next one! GJ!
-Nana
wolf eye
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/07/09 | Reply
ahh wats going to happen next im going to die with qustions
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 05/07/09 | Reply
thnk you!!! very mch! ^^
wolf eye
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/06/09 | Reply
hey i like your art work its pretty neat
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 05/05/09 | Reply
Yeah i made The Shirt and Gave It Detail!
And thnx for hug and fave!!
mathewgreat
Otakuite | Posted 05/05/09 | Reply
MAN!! I LIke The 9th Page!! The shirt is made cool
HUg ANd FAve!!!!!!
NOw m a Bigfan of YOurs!
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 05/05/09 | Reply
THNX A LOT!!!!!!!!
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 05/04/09 | Reply
Thx For The Hugs And Favs
Lone Wolf
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 05/04/09 | Reply
Thnx A Lot! I Worked HArd For The COver PAge, Thnx FOr Ur Comments!
SailorJuipiterFF7
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/04/09 | Reply
This is realy cool!!!! The cover is SUPER COOL!!!! lol,great job!!!
Arctic Summer
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/03/09 | Reply
whoa O_o Its like a crazy big picture, it took you a long time huh? Its great!
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 05/03/09 | Reply
OK, Frm NExt TIme , I will write "CUZ"... IS IT OKAY Now?? ^^
mathewgreat
Otakuite | Posted 05/03/09 | Reply
But Cuz Is not irritating! It loooks Cool !!
Anyways
U can ALso Put cause :P
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 05/03/09 | Reply
THNX A LOT!!!
mathewgreat
Otakuite | Posted 05/03/09 | Reply
and i liked the 7th page, lol it was funny!!
mathewgreat
Otakuite | Posted 05/03/09 | Reply
superb man!! I mean your age is only 17, you are very talented!!
mathewgreat
Otakuite | Posted 05/03/09 | Reply
man you are awsome!!
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 05/02/09 | Reply
Ur Welcome!!
Try TO BE regular :D
Hatake Yoshimi
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/02/09 | Reply
The story is good so far. It kept me reading. Very cool! Thanks for letting me know about it!
momo love
Grand Otaku | Posted 05/02/09 | Reply
lol... no undies..... hehehehehehehhehe *_______________*
mysteriousguy
Otakuite | Posted 05/02/09 | Reply
Ok
M waiting!!
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 05/02/09 | Reply
@MAYA
THNx ^^
@MYSTERIOUSGUy
yeah, thnx, i ll sooon upload another pages tooo
~LOnewoLF
mysteriousguy
Otakuite | Posted 05/02/09 | Reply
@NADIRROX
man you are awesome, this manga is sooooo ccoooooooooooool, and i like ghosts, especially the one you made in this mmanga, NADIR waitin for more!!!!
nightmaya
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/01/09 | Reply
Awesome job!I like the front page
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 04/29/09 | Reply
THNX AGAIn!!!!
LOVE TO SEE COMMENts!!
~LonEWolF
toyotami kun
The Marker Maniac. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/29/09 | Reply
looks really good so far, can't wait to read the rest. really good perspective too. ^_^ awesome job.
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 04/29/09 | Reply
OK, will ADd It Soon...... And Thnx For Da FAve!!
lunesoldier20
Otaku Legend | Posted 04/29/09 | Reply
Nice, it looks like it'll be good.
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 04/29/09 | Reply
THNX FOR THE FAVE!!!
gaaragirl911
Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/29/09 | Reply
Nice!!! I commented and faved teh other one! But whatever! ^_^
Loving it so far! Keep it up!!
Same as always,
gaaragirl911
Surprise me ;]
MandaNoel07
Grand Otaku | Posted 04/29/09 | Reply
This is really good. I like it.
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 04/29/09 | Reply
THAAANNX!
~lone Wolf
lil sakura89
Otakuite+ | Posted 04/29/09 | Reply
haha. it's pretty good ^^ ;D
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 04/29/09 | Reply
I Will Upload The Next PAge, soon
emeraldsky
Otaku Legend | Posted 04/29/09 | Reply
comic looks good so far ^^ lol Looks interesting lolz
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 04/29/09 | Reply
Thnx A lot!!
~loneWolf
momo love
Grand Otaku | Posted 04/29/09 | Reply
niiiice. cool art and tone. i will keep track
nadirrox
Otakuite | Posted 04/29/09 | Reply
Thnx A LOt!!!
tishamatacoz
Senior Otaku | Posted 04/28/09 | Reply
Haha looks interesting. =P I love the cover alot! Keep up the good work huh? ~Amp
littlepooch
Patchwork Rabbit (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/28/09 | Reply
This sounds like a very good comic! ^^ I can't wait unitl you post another page! *hug and fav* ;D
~LittlePooch~