Grah, I really need to reupload some of these pages. D:
Page 25:
Arabella: There's no way to cancel it, then? Hasn't anything like this happened before?
ThatOnePerson: Nope. These deals are made by willing humans, with angel supervision or consent.
Want to tell her how it's all your fault?
I love reading this. It's been so addicting; I can't stop. (...and I should've been doing school-related stuff.) & I love the art and how the story is going. I can't seem to read pg 25, though. Do you mind telling me what it says?
My handwriting isn't that great in the first place, and some of the photos are bad quality which makes it even worse; I definitely know what you're talking about. xD
I'll try to upload some better images and I might type out the text over the summer, if I have the time. I-I really need to stop putting this off... orz
Absentminded One (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/12/10 | Reply
Wow, this is a very intriguing story line. I like the your art style quite a bit. You're very good at drawing bodies and expressions. Good job.
The only thing I'd have to say about improvement on this fine manga is that you make the words a wee bit more legible. It's not so easy to follow at times.
Thank you!
And I'll try to work on the handwriting, thanks for letting me know. :D
Is there anything that you didn't understand that I can clear up for you? (Not that this manga makes any sense in the first place...)
The only thing that concerns me is it not fitting in with the English-y names I have going...
Maybe I'll Retzu someone else someday...
I actually do have a lot of characters lacking names. :)
I....I really, really like this :D
Your style is really...attractive? xD [is that the right word?]
Erm, anyway, I really like it. I love the comedy bits :)
And I am envious of your formatting! It seems to flow very naturally.
Wait, what?
God's locked away somewhere taking a nap.
Roswell is the one who's running heaven/doing stuff at the moment, and ....NamelessBlondeAngel is his younger brother.
D: I love this so muchhh!!
The art is both adorable and gorgeous *w*
I wanna do fanartsssss
Name the Angel like...
I dunno something girly xD or excessively manleh.
*fangirl hugs*
The Monkey King demands you make moar!
NOOO. NO SNARKY DEMON BUTLERS FOR YOU.
Lol, if there's any character who would run around in his (or someone else's...) underwear like it's nothing, it's him. (Which reminds me that I need to give him a name. .___. )
aww no kick ass butlers MAN THIS COMIC SUCKs!!! joking! i love this sooo muuuuuch lol he is just standing there in her underwere! lol i like the name you chose for the girl! it's pretty!
well the main girl is shouting to me "Hay you ya you! get the creater to name me Miki!and oh!! name the angle kid in my clothes Ritesu"(i think thats how you spell retesu.......well just trying to hlep but seriously thats what they're yelling at me!!!
The rating? Um...I'm not too sure. The weirdness in my head?
There's nothing specific, just I don't want to throw something in later that offends anyone.
I guess it's just a warning? The pages I have so far are pretty weird...
MaCheriexx
Grand Otaku | Posted 07/26/10 | Reply
@Allie Elric:
Thanks!
Grah, I really need to reupload some of these pages. D:
Page 25:
Arabella: There's no way to cancel it, then? Hasn't anything like this happened before?
ThatOnePerson: Nope. These deals are made by willing humans, with angel supervision or consent.
Want to tell her how it's all your fault?
Hope that was helpful, and good luck with school~
Allie Elric
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/26/10 | Reply
I love reading this. It's been so addicting; I can't stop. (...and I should've been doing school-related stuff.) & I love the art and how the story is going. I can't seem to read pg 25, though. Do you mind telling me what it says?
Driffter
Absentminded One (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/13/10 | Reply
@MaCheriexx:
Hahaha, yeah I know what you mean. I'm really lazy as well, and my hand writing sucks, so I never put my stories on here. xDD
MaCheriexx
Grand Otaku | Posted 03/13/10 | Reply
@Driffter:
Thanks for taking time to read and comment. :'D
My handwriting isn't that great in the first place, and some of the photos are bad quality which makes it even worse; I definitely know what you're talking about. xD
I'll try to upload some better images and I might type out the text over the summer, if I have the time. I-I really need to stop putting this off... orz
Driffter
Absentminded One (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/12/10 | Reply
Wow, this is a very intriguing story line. I like the your art style quite a bit. You're very good at drawing bodies and expressions. Good job.
The only thing I'd have to say about improvement on this fine manga is that you make the words a wee bit more legible. It's not so easy to follow at times.
Ryochi30
Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/26/09 | Reply
@MaCheriexx:
Oh-Shyeah.
I'd so be her best friend. xD
MaCheriexx
Grand Otaku | Posted 11/25/09 | Reply
@Ryochi30:
IT IS A BEAUTIFUL THING, IS IT NOT? <333
Ryochi30
Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/23/09 | Reply
HAHAHAHAHH!!! Her face!!!
*falls to floor laughing ass off*
cresendo pianist
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/29/09 | Reply
@MaCheriexx:
well,you deserved it......
lol,love your avatar too...!
MaCheriexx
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/29/09 | Reply
@cresendo pianist:
Thank you so much for the kind words. :'D
Nice avatar. <3
FunnyWaffle
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/27/09 | Reply
@MaCheriexx:
Oh, thank you!
Well, plot or no plot, I'm pretty sure it's gonna kick ass :D
cresendo pianist
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/25/09 | Reply
LOL!!!!!
your artwork is awesome.this is the best series i've ever read online!
i wish could draw like you...
MaCheriexx
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/22/09 | Reply
@:
Thank you!
And I'll try to work on the handwriting, thanks for letting me know. :D
Is there anything that you didn't understand that I can clear up for you? (Not that this manga makes any sense in the first place...)
Glad you like it, though. :)
MaCheriexx
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/21/09 | Reply
@FunnyWaffle:
Haha, I'm glad. (And I love your icon.)
Maybe someday I'll write a serious manga.
With a plot.
MaCheriexx
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/21/09 | Reply
@Cha Girl:
The only thing that concerns me is it not fitting in with the English-y names I have going...
Maybe I'll Retzu someone else someday...
I actually do have a lot of characters lacking names. :)
FunnyWaffle
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/20/09 | Reply
I....I really, really like this :D
Your style is really...attractive? xD [is that the right word?]
Erm, anyway, I really like it. I love the comedy bits :)
And I am envious of your formatting! It seems to flow very naturally.
Hope to see more of this entertaining comic! 8D
Cha Girl
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/20/09 | Reply
PLEASE LET'S NAME HIM RETZU!!!!
VAVKgirl
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/11/09 | Reply
its getting interresting!!!!
SinsofMidnight
A Diligent Sinner (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/02/09 | Reply
SO FUNNY! I thought I would die laughing in the first 11 pages! <3
You've done a great job making up a plot as you go along. I love the random stripping. XD
Last edited by SinsofMidnight at 3:21:35 PM EDT on August 2, 2009.
phosphorene
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/01/09 | Reply
Nah, I am an expert handwriting interpreter~! XD
I love your drawing style, by the way!
MaCheriexx
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/01/09 | Reply
@emmisu:
Yay~
Colors are coming up in a few pages, actually.
MaCheriexx
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/01/09 | Reply
@Grayfire:
Glad you like it. :D
And I love your avatar.
emmisu
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/01/09 | Reply
@MaCheriexx:
The kind of primates is pleased >D
Gimme the colors and I shall proceed;;
x3
Grayfire
Otakuite++ | Posted 07/30/09 | Reply
Wow your artwork is awesome, even if this is only a random summer project. Favorited.
MaCheriexx
Grand Otaku | Posted 07/30/09 | Reply
@Cha Girl:
Wait, what?
God's locked away somewhere taking a nap.
Roswell is the one who's running heaven/doing stuff at the moment, and ....NamelessBlondeAngel is his younger brother.
MaCheriexx
Grand Otaku | Posted 07/30/09 | Reply
@emmisu:
Thank you!!! :0
F-fanart, oh god, that's ridiculous. lololol I'd be flattered. <3
Yes, Monkey King-sama, right away. .___.
emmisu
Otakuite+ | Posted 07/30/09 | Reply
D: I love this so muchhh!!
The art is both adorable and gorgeous *w*
I wanna do fanartsssss
Name the Angel like...
I dunno something girly xD or excessively manleh.
*fangirl hugs*
The Monkey King demands you make moar!
Cha Girl
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/29/09 | Reply
wait god has a brother????o.0
MaCheriexx
Grand Otaku | Posted 07/29/09 | Reply
@ska8tergirl:
Thank you~!
x3
ska8tergirl
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/29/09 | Reply
I <3 this~! Your art is great and I just can't wait to see more x3
Cha Girl
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/29/09 | Reply
@MaCheriexx:
retzu retzu name him reztu!!!!! :D
MaCheriexx
Grand Otaku | Posted 07/29/09 | Reply
@Cha Girl:
NOOO. NO SNARKY DEMON BUTLERS FOR YOU.
Lol, if there's any character who would run around in his (or someone else's...) underwear like it's nothing, it's him. (Which reminds me that I need to give him a name. .___. )
Cha Girl
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/26/09 | Reply
aww no kick ass butlers MAN THIS COMIC SUCKs!!! joking! i love this sooo muuuuuch lol he is just standing there in her underwere! lol i like the name you chose for the girl! it's pretty!
karwa
Otakuite+ | Posted 07/25/09 | Reply
this is awesome!
love the way you draw
happy chaos
Otakuite | Posted 07/25/09 | Reply
This is GREAT! :3
MaCheriexx
Grand Otaku | Posted 07/23/09 | Reply
@Cha Girl:
Thanks so much for the suggestions!
I actually named the girl already (Miki does sound nice though), but I'll think about the guy's. :D
Cha Girl
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/22/09 | Reply
well the main girl is shouting to me "Hay you ya you! get the creater to name me Miki!and oh!! name the angle kid in my clothes Ritesu"(i think thats how you spell retesu.......well just trying to hlep but seriously thats what they're yelling at me!!!
Branett15
Otakuite+ | Posted 07/20/09 | Reply
hey,
you are good draw about your book and I'm like your book is good story.
xBerserkerage
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/20/09 | Reply
LOL - Very funny.. I like the facial expressions they are so crazeh! Keep goin' =)
healer94
The Skullboy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/15/09 | Reply
PANTIES.
pfft, this rulesXD
~Mell
beloved blood
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/14/09 | Reply
I really like the cover art!! lucky you, you get to go to AnimeExpo!!
MaCheriexx
Grand Otaku | Posted 07/13/09 | Reply
@:
Oh god, really? Haha, thanks. <3
I'm glad(?) to know that there are people out there who enjoy my random-art-spew. :D
roshni
Otakuite | Posted 07/11/09 | Reply
ahahah so funni wen c pulled d hair
MaCheriexx
Grand Otaku | Posted 06/28/09 | Reply
@Arctic Summer:
The rating? Um...I'm not too sure. The weirdness in my head?
There's nothing specific, just I don't want to throw something in later that offends anyone.
I guess it's just a warning? The pages I have so far are pretty weird...
And thank you!
Arctic Summer
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/27/09 | Reply
hmm... pretty cool. May I ask... Why is it rated PG-13? XD I donno, just wanted to know. BTW your coloring is really good!