Lol, "Wait... Hes back that way..." hahaha

@EmoVampireRiska:

thanks... Hope you enjoy the rest of the series

pg 33... Ellen..Ellen...Ellen...Ellen...KEVIN?!?!
xDD i love that page...
anyway this is really cool
(and i also love your random little notes after each page xDD)

@artypants1017:

Wow that is pretty lucky.=3

@TheAngelRaine:

:D Thank you, .... I was only 13 when I found out about it, and it was a couple of days after my birthday too, I felt luckY

@artypants1017:

Well good for you for not breaking theo rules.^^

@TheAngelRaine:

:D I'm 13, I'm just old enough to be able to have an O account. :D

@artypants1017:

Me too^^ Id really love to be a manga-ka=3
Just wondering though, how old are you? I'm 17, I'm thinking you are younger than that and have more time to practice.><
Thats ok=3 ill subscribe to you so it will appear in my back room.^^

@TheAngelRaine:

:D My life is to draw, I want to be an artist when I grow up!
I posted book 2's cover, I don't know when it's going to come though. :3 :1 <smrick

@artypants1017:

Wow thats pretty good=3 I wish i had the determination to get comics down that quicklyXD, life gets in the way i guess.^^

Cant wait to see volume 2 then^^

@TheAngelRaine:

I'm not sure- I think mouths... yeah mouths because I started drawng book 1 about 2 years ago, and finished it in about a year, and then I starts the second one, 2 mouths after...

@artypants1017:

I think its best to draw the face first.Oo
Ok there is a very big difference between years and months.X3 was it years ago, or months ago?

@TheAngelRaine:

I've working on that, and the noses I always laugh at... I always darw the nose first, I don't know why, i just do, then i draw the face, and the nose always ends up of the person head, lol But now, I have this box person thingy that i learned how to use out of a "how to draw" book, and everything.. so I've gotten better, and I actly started the second book about after 2 or 3 mouths or years I'm not sure, and my drawly skills change so muched, i even suprized my self.

@artypants1017:

You're welome^^

May i give you some helpful advice?
You have odviously gotten better over the course of this comic but i believe you should work on a few things. such with the face=3 try to make the heads smaller to the porportions of the body and move the nose down closer to the mouth. And with your girls, try to give them larger hips=3 hips should be larger than the breasts.=3

@TheAngelRaine:

Alright! You got it! a light blue dress it is! thank you!

@artypants1017:

I think it should be....hmmmm....a light blue?=3

@TheAngelRaine:

oK! well, in the second book, Ellen wears a dress, what color do you want the dress to be?

@artypants1017:

Oh ok...Sure go a head=3

@TheAngelRaine:

it's ok, don't worry about it ... so ... can I ask you something?

@artypants1017:

Oh um...thanks^^' though i still feel kinda bad.

@TheAngelRaine:

ok! your a great person

@artypants1017:

Whoah whoah whoah! its really not up to me! Its your art and your story! If you want to draw it go a head and draw it! Id feel like crap if it were my fault that you quit halfway through! So please continue to post! Seriously! It is not my decision to make.

@TheAngelRaine:

... I should have, shouldn't I? but would still alright with you, if I finished the second book, I pormise in the second book, that the story, and chacters a going to change, alot ... At lease I think it will, I can't remember what I have so far, ... but still, would it be okay with you, I don't want to keep going on with it if it's not ok with you .

@artypants1017:

Oh i dont hate you.Oo
But if you love Zelda so much you should have made a fan comic.

@TheAngelRaine:

Yeah i was... I didn't want people to hate me... I guess that didn't go very well ... I'm just to ... adicted to Zelda, and it's stroy, I guess

@artypants1017:

Aww now i feel bad.
No i dont want you to do that, i was just wondering if you were aware of what you were doing.

@TheAngelRaine:

...Your right, but what can I say, I'm a huge Zelda girl ... can I add other page and say most things were Zelda, or something, will that make you happy?

@artypants1017:

But its more than just the positions. I understand needing references with the positions, but you dont just use their poses you use the same expressions.
Some of the pages are almost just like the ones in the manga.
The three special powers that sparated and given to three different people...thats just like the triforce and how it was given to 3 different people, and then her being locked away for several years until she was stong enough? And even a little fairy friend to follow her around. And among other things that wernt as close so i wont bring them up.=/

@TheAngelRaine:

I didnt rip it off, I just use some of the postions of people... I'm trying to see if I can use anything use, I have that little stink person thingy and eveything but it doesn't work,... turst me, my second book, you'll see I'm not useing them to much

Congrades on finishing the first volume!....but is there a reason why you ripped so many things off of the legend of zelda ocarina of time manga?

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thank you, so you under stand my porblem?

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I know, it's akward but it's the turth... I'm really serously stupid, .... I blam the school I went to... They would past you no matter what .... so I never pasted any thing, but math (math is my best subjet) but not reading .... I'm sorry I'm so stupid -_-'

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.... um .... I can tell you right now, that i'm stupid . -_-' so I don't know what brutally means, but I'll pretend.... LOL? (I'll really stupid)

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Thank you! I most say, for some one I don't know, you'll really nice

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I'm aloud on week ends now, so I posting as much as I can, and This is almost the end of this whole thing. There's two book on the Secrest power, and I am going ot post teh 2nd one too. But Like I said, I'm only aloud on weekend,
(I'm writeing right now because I have to smeek on)
and thank you for your comment

For any one who reads this.
I not allowed on my computer because of my school grade.
So I wont be able to post any pages for this in a awhale.
and I still drawing new pictues for this, and pages of the 2nd book.
So please wait, I'm not allowed to have the computer until I get my report card.
I'm getting my porgess reprot card sometime this weak.
so .... enjoy the art I have now, and I'll be back on soon.

@TheAngelRaine:

Thank you!
I'll try and keep that in mind, next time I summit a page

@artypants1017:

There are really easy solutions for this.
1. even if you type fast, read over what you just typed, so you can fix them, dont be in such a rush to submit pages.
2. theo gives you a list of your page numbers on the submit page. its not that hard just too look.

@TheAngelRaine:

Thanks, Spelling and grammer was never my best subject. I type to fast and sometime it does get the numbers right, and it's hard becasue I have to remember what the last page I submented was. and my scanner is being very mean, and want scan my pictures the right way.

Wow, i think it is amazing that you have the dedication to stick to a comic so long,=3 so good job!
However, there are things you should work on for the next volume.
1. Work on spelling and grammar! Sometimes i had to read over things several times to understand it. Use spell check and read over what you write.
2. Watch your page numbers you go from pg 32 to 23 and go up again.
3. no matter how hard something is dont trace/ copy parts from someone elses manga.-_- the page 33 at the begining of chapter 4 comes from the LoZ Oot manga.
http://www.onemanga.com/The_Legend_of_Zelda_-_Ocarina_of_Time/5/02/

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I know! I feel your pain. I hate school, It's to long, and no free time!

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oh wow, really 2 months? Thanks for being my friend. oh and if you really like my manga, I simbit as much pages as i can, everyday. sometimes, i put a hole chapter or 2.

@greenLeAfe:

Thank you, every one who posting

i luv the way u draw!!!!!!!^_____________^

This manga is really cool I like it so far and I can't wait to read more!