You have a very interesting style that I find very appealing.
However, I would suggest that you find a photo manipulation program that will allow you to do better things with text, i.e. Photoshop. Typically for comics, you want to work with DigitalStrip font for average panels, which can be found for free on various sites. Also, making things fit in the bubbles makes things look a lot neater. :)
Good luck and I hope to see more.
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