KATIA!!!!! =3 =3 =3 It's us the twinz!!! ^_^ OMGAWD!!!! Thank you for posting the comic^^ Paurve Mark... OMG!! Linkin Park!?! You gotta be kidding me!!! Yeah.. Leah has issues... I mean even Token didn't look bad as much as we thought... compare to Leah... btw Hannah says HI^^ & hello from the sleepover gang =D SO gonna hug & fav this!!!
I can see that you´re talented. Your style is really fine.And for your first attempt nearly every pose came out good (I don´t wanna be rude, it´s just trying on refining poses is always a good thing to do. I´m doing it myself, too!)
I also agree and are the opinion you should use some ink, or black pencils to make it look deeper. Like that the pics are sometimes really light and it´s hard to see what´s what.
But all in all a really good first work. Keep doing your best! You´re on a good way.
~AnBu
I love your art style! It is really unique.^^
The story is really cute.^^ Poor Mark, I feel so bad for him.X3
For inprovement, I sugest getting a good inking pen so your comics dont look so rough. I dark line around a drawing can make a big difference.^^
Becuase of the english edits, at times I had a hard time understanding who was talking. In paint its really easy to make word bubbles using the oval tool.^^
Raiyu
Otakuite+ | Posted 01/23/10 | Reply
KATIA!!!!! =3 =3 =3 It's us the twinz!!! ^_^ OMGAWD!!!! Thank you for posting the comic^^ Paurve Mark... OMG!! Linkin Park!?! You gotta be kidding me!!! Yeah.. Leah has issues... I mean even Token didn't look bad as much as we thought... compare to Leah... btw Hannah says HI^^ & hello from the sleepover gang =D SO gonna hug & fav this!!!
OoAnBuOo
Jabbawookie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/18/10 | Reply
I can see that you´re talented. Your style is really fine.And for your first attempt nearly every pose came out good (I don´t wanna be rude, it´s just trying on refining poses is always a good thing to do. I´m doing it myself, too!)
I also agree and are the opinion you should use some ink, or black pencils to make it look deeper. Like that the pics are sometimes really light and it´s hard to see what´s what.
But all in all a really good first work. Keep doing your best! You´re on a good way.
~AnBu
Cari-chan
Senior Otaku | Posted 01/16/10 | Reply
Your comic is turning out really nice in plot and characters!
TheAngelRaine
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/16/10 | Reply
I love your art style! It is really unique.^^
The story is really cute.^^ Poor Mark, I feel so bad for him.X3
For inprovement, I sugest getting a good inking pen so your comics dont look so rough. I dark line around a drawing can make a big difference.^^
Becuase of the english edits, at times I had a hard time understanding who was talking. In paint its really easy to make word bubbles using the oval tool.^^
KungPowChicken
Old Chicken Nugget (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/16/10 | Reply
This is nice!
I like the styles
and the story is interesting.
great job!
keep it up!
LittleSecret
Otakuite+ | Posted 01/16/10 | Reply
nice comic... :D like the idea of bleinding two styles. Really, it is creative and such.