your drawing is brill ^^ but you colouring is apaulling o.0 no ofense, but the backround colouring is super but the other girl in the backround has woobbly legs and all the writing is kool but toooooooo messy. sos... i want u to cary on with these sort of drawing but make it more neat... i am quite good at drawing cause i drawn some characters in a movie once... but your on the way to do that too (i am so proud) T-T keep it up!