I don't know why I can't replay to the comments but thank you guys for the feed back. I promise the story will make sense later on I'm nearing the end of chapter one and I will soon be in chapter 2. Also I like that you pointed out that the cover is lacking with no background I will think of something to add on there to add more depth to it. As for the color to express the theme or emotion for the scenes I'm not really sure how to apply those colors without overshadowing the pictures but I will definately check out your work for advice. This is the prologue for the story I forgot the post it when I changed the cover but here it is.