yipee last page of chapter 1... hope you like the story so far... hope i get feedbacks from you... i really wanna know if the story is good or need something in it or lacking something.... so i need your help...

next chapter: turn of destiny

P:S: i made a mistake in the last panel BTW "her sister is our main targe" well in fact it should be his.... sooorrrrryyyyy everyone!!!

thank to asianprincess842 for pointing that out...