do you think the story is progressing too slowly? what could i do to speed it up? is there anything i could do to make the panels more interesting? how is the story overall so far? any questions?
Alchemic Mushroom (Fan Comic Portfolio) 
The Petite Affairs of Natalya!
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- 03/13/10
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- alchemic mushroom, alchemist, aristocrat, comedy, dreamland, duchess, fantasy, goth, gothic, knight, loli, lolita, punk, romance, steam, victorian, vintage, webcomic
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