This is the sorta story that only makes me hate Light more. I think Light really did miss L but he just refused to admit it. He kept saying things about how Near would never be as good as L and he was angry when Near was wearing the L mask. I think that shows that Light actually respected L. I don't believe he truly thought of him as a friend, just as a worthy opponent.
Wow! I just love it! That was very good SojiRem! You stuck that the characters personalities very well. I like the way you wrote it too. Are you going to make any more soon? I'd love to read them if you do! And again it was awesome!
Hey, sweet! This looks pretty good, so I'm saving it for later reading! (My computer doesn't have the internet - I'm always forced to use public computers :/)
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/28/08 | Reply
Wow! That was one of the best fiction stories I've read. You did a nice job on the writing. Did you put it for publication? If you did and it pends through, Im faving it. Nice job on the story again. Laterz~
shinigami117
Otakuite++ | Posted 09/20/10 | Reply
This is the sorta story that only makes me hate Light more. I think Light really did miss L but he just refused to admit it. He kept saying things about how Near would never be as good as L and he was angry when Near was wearing the L mask. I think that shows that Light actually respected L. I don't believe he truly thought of him as a friend, just as a worthy opponent.
VampireBat12
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 05/30/09 | Reply
i love it. You captured the caharacter's perfectly. this should be a book or an anime or something. all the same, you rock.
onlyoneonline
Otakuite++ | Posted 02/19/09 | Reply
Your a great writer you should get
a book published or something!!
KitKatKitty
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/04/08 | Reply
interesting story line, I like it. I haven't gotten to Mello yet, so I don't know what he's like...
Kyubi Elric
The Waffle (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/27/08 | Reply
This story was very good. You should write a novel. It would be a best seller for sure!!!^_^
XXXchad
Grand Otaku | Posted 09/16/08 | Reply
@SojiRem:
oh didnt hear bout tht but i know now
Last edited by XXXchad at 8:51:06 PM EDT on September 16, 2008.
SojiRem
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/16/08 | Reply
@XXXchad:
You have to blame SomeGuy-sama for that. He's the one that published it and changed it.
XXXchad
Grand Otaku | Posted 09/16/08 | Reply
dang!! u practice writing fan fics or something this is really good oh one more thing mellos name is spelled mello not mellow
zerofc187
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/28/08 | Reply
A very nice story!
Great job!
XxKiraxCookiexX
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
that was really good!! Keep up the good work!
Madison2294
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/21/08 | Reply
*clap clap clap*
bravo, an excellent read
keep it up!
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/02/08 | Reply
I see you were able to publish it. Glad you were able to. Can't wait until your next writing! ~Laterz
~Deidara
darkittylove
Grand Otaku | Posted 07/02/08 | Reply
Wow! I just love it! That was very good SojiRem! You stuck that the characters personalities very well. I like the way you wrote it too. Are you going to make any more soon? I'd love to read them if you do! And again it was awesome!
Shelke~
Kyrianne
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/29/08 | Reply
Hey, sweet! This looks pretty good, so I'm saving it for later reading! (My computer doesn't have the internet - I'm always forced to use public computers :/)
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/28/08 | Reply
Wow! That was one of the best fiction stories I've read. You did a nice job on the writing. Did you put it for publication? If you did and it pends through, Im faving it. Nice job on the story again. Laterz~