Omgosh this is an awsome story! I love the use of language. It is a really deep emotional storyline in my opinion! Something I don't read that often! This is totally great. FANTASTIC :P
Well I'm not very observant... I just realized that you put this up! XD Anyway, I'm glad to see this here and I like how you've gone through and made it flow a little better. The ending still creeps me out though. XP Poor Lareth.
So this is finally up, nice. I really like how you re-wrote some of it. The story flows a lot better than it did before. I still like how you ended it. That fits so perfectly, an end that really isn't one. Poor Lareth, you can't help but feel sorry for the guy.
Dr. Mama Cat. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/17/08 | Reply
As the others already said, it's a very different take on the concept of the afterlife, one that was interesting to read. Also, you can't help but feel sorry for Lareth since he finally found out what happened to his daughter only to lose her again. It kind of makes you wonder if the family wil ever end up together again or not.
Well now, that was certainly an interesting read Beth, a very different take on the here-after than anything I've read. As Sabrina said it was quite sad for Lareth to find his daughter and lose her again, even if it was for his own good.
Wow... o_O That was very different and totally unexpected. It kind of reminded me of a Twilight Zone show with how it didn't really end. It was really sad how Lareth finally found out what happened to Christine only to lose her again.
I really enjoyed reading that, if you have other ideas based on dreams, write them up for us to read! ^_^
turtle chris
Otaku Legend | Posted 11/03/08 | Reply
Omgosh this is an awsome story! I love the use of language. It is a really deep emotional storyline in my opinion! Something I don't read that often! This is totally great. FANTASTIC :P
SunfallE
Nyaa~ (ZE MEANIE) | Posted 08/22/08 | Reply
@excalababe:
Nope that's all there is to the story. Thank you for the kind comment, I appreciate it. ^_~
In the name of the tune I will punish you!
SunfallE
Nyaa~ (ZE MEANIE) | Posted 08/22/08 | Reply
@twilight luna:
Sorry for the late reply. ^_~ I'm glad you enjoyed reading it though.
In the name of the tune I will punish you!
Aaryanna
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/18/08 | Reply
Well I'm not very observant... I just realized that you put this up! XD Anyway, I'm glad to see this here and I like how you've gone through and made it flow a little better. The ending still creeps me out though. XP Poor Lareth.
~*Aaryanna*~
excalababe
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/05/08 | Reply
Very well written, It seems kinda like, they were puting a puzzle together, and he fell in the missing piece's space. Are you going to continue it?
twilight luna
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/18/08 | Reply
This was so interesting to read! It's a concept I've never read about before and that's why I like it. ^^
Rachmaninoff
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/18/08 | Reply
So this is finally up, nice. I really like how you re-wrote some of it. The story flows a lot better than it did before. I still like how you ended it. That fits so perfectly, an end that really isn't one. Poor Lareth, you can't help but feel sorry for the guy.
-Darren
Indi
Dr. Mama Cat. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/17/08 | Reply
As the others already said, it's a very different take on the concept of the afterlife, one that was interesting to read. Also, you can't help but feel sorry for Lareth since he finally found out what happened to his daughter only to lose her again. It kind of makes you wonder if the family wil ever end up together again or not.
~Crystia
Gavin
Otakuite | Posted 07/17/08 | Reply
Well now, that was certainly an interesting read Beth, a very different take on the here-after than anything I've read. As Sabrina said it was quite sad for Lareth to find his daughter and lose her again, even if it was for his own good.
Sabrina
Otaku Archangel | Posted 07/17/08 | Reply
Wow... o_O That was very different and totally unexpected. It kind of reminded me of a Twilight Zone show with how it didn't really end. It was really sad how Lareth finally found out what happened to Christine only to lose her again.
I really enjoyed reading that, if you have other ideas based on dreams, write them up for us to read! ^_^
-Sabrina
gaaragirl911
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/16/08 | Reply
Whoa! I was going to name my new story series that. Well actually the first chapter. ^_^"
Surprise me ;]
Korey
Gambino (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/16/08 | Reply
Heh I really liked this story! Good work SunfallE ^_~