Neko Kouhai (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
Tag~! X3 I know I've said this to you before, but he really is a cute and huggable character. XD
I love stories like this, where it's like an excerpt of a longer story, but isn't. Like a snippet into the lives of the characters, then leaves the reader imagining the rest. X3
I really enjoyed reading this. ^^ From start to finish, and even now, as I wonder about how Tag would spend the rest of his life. ^^
I can't believe I haven't replied to this comment yet! Been kind of crazy lately, guess it got lost in the mix.
Once again, thank you for the very thorough feedback, that kind of detail will help me improve my written style. I've got the notes written down, and I'm paying close attention to the points I need to work on.
Oh yeah, I've had writer's block a few times, I think all authors get that at one point or another. Try watching some cartoons (not anime, regular cartoons). Lately I've found sources of inspiration that have knocked writer's blocks away from something as simple as the way a character says a particular line.
I appreciate the feedback, and thank you for reading my story.
I really like your story. I can tell you put quite a bit of thought in it. I am in a writer's block stage, I am so annoyed with it lol. don't you just hate that?!
I finally finished the story is very good I liked the turn of the story I think you should continue it.I think maybe for my personal like if its half human half lion maybe you could picture it more like a human with pawns I really like the way you presented it thou.Great work keep writing like this.
Seems like a very good story Dragon seems you got me into it fron the start I dont know why.The star was very smooth and easy to adapt with.It´s very well writed Dragon I hope I can finish it tomora because my rest time is over and I have to get back to work.
Raina
Neko Kouhai (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
Tag~! X3 I know I've said this to you before, but he really is a cute and huggable character. XD
I love stories like this, where it's like an excerpt of a longer story, but isn't. Like a snippet into the lives of the characters, then leaves the reader imagining the rest. X3
I really enjoyed reading this. ^^ From start to finish, and even now, as I wonder about how Tag would spend the rest of his life. ^^
Love Bug =X3
CosmicSailor
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/25/08 | Reply
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I can't believe I haven't replied to this comment yet! Been kind of crazy lately, guess it got lost in the mix.
Once again, thank you for the very thorough feedback, that kind of detail will help me improve my written style. I've got the notes written down, and I'm paying close attention to the points I need to work on.
CosmicSailor
Otaku Eternal | Posted 03/06/08 | Reply
@Twists Of Rain:
Oh yeah, I've had writer's block a few times, I think all authors get that at one point or another. Try watching some cartoons (not anime, regular cartoons). Lately I've found sources of inspiration that have knocked writer's blocks away from something as simple as the way a character says a particular line.
I appreciate the feedback, and thank you for reading my story.
Twists Of Rain
Otakuite | Posted 03/06/08 | Reply
I really like your story. I can tell you put quite a bit of thought in it. I am in a writer's block stage, I am so annoyed with it lol. don't you just hate that?!
AngelBest Dream
Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/06/08 | Reply
I finally finished the story is very good I liked the turn of the story I think you should continue it.I think maybe for my personal like if its half human half lion maybe you could picture it more like a human with pawns I really like the way you presented it thou.Great work keep writing like this.
Angel
CosmicSailor
Otaku Eternal | Posted 03/05/08 | Reply
@AngelBest Dream:
I appreciate the comment, and the feedback. Thank you for reading.
AngelBest Dream
Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/05/08 | Reply
Seems like a very good story Dragon seems you got me into it fron the start I dont know why.The star was very smooth and easy to adapt with.It´s very well writed Dragon I hope I can finish it tomora because my rest time is over and I have to get back to work.
Angel