Amazing.
Your writing is on a higher scale than that of Digital.
I love it :3
And thank you for your comment on my story.
I'm hopefully going to get the original finished and submitted, but for now I must get my laptop fixed so I can.
It was intresting, but kinda jumpy. If you revise it editing out most of the Light's in one paragraph with smaller nouns it may seem less jumpy. However it did sound like Light.
lilykanna
Otakuite+ | Posted 11/23/09 | Reply
incredible; it almost made me cry <3
narutofangirl8
Otaku Legend | Posted 11/19/09 | Reply
WOW THIS IS GOOD ITS MORE THAN THAT ITS AMAZING!!! YOU SHOULD BECOME A WRITTER!!!
firestar99
Otakuite | Posted 11/10/08 | Reply
This was very good
Good work!
Madison2294
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/26/08 | Reply
*clao*clap*clap*
bravo!! excellent story, very enjoyable!!
EnteiWolf
Otakuite++ | Posted 05/24/08 | Reply
... If you remember my Time for Peace story, I've restarted it in one of my worlds, called Peace Series.
You should go check it out :3
SojiRem
Otaku Legend | Posted 04/08/08 | Reply
Ryuk or Rem should have been there! It was so funney, but at the same time it doesn't sound like a Light thing to do. ^_^
EnteiWolf
Otakuite++ | Posted 03/31/08 | Reply
Amazing.
Your writing is on a higher scale than that of Digital.
I love it :3
And thank you for your comment on my story.
I'm hopefully going to get the original finished and submitted, but for now I must get my laptop fixed so I can.
xChox
Otakuite+ | Posted 03/14/08 | Reply
It was intresting, but kinda jumpy. If you revise it editing out most of the Light's in one paragraph with smaller nouns it may seem less jumpy. However it did sound like Light.
Sesshomaru22
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 03/12/08 | Reply
Good story very interesting..