Grand Otaku | Posted 07/05/10 | Reply
AWESOME! I SO LOVED THIS! ^^
Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/18/08 | Reply
wow! this is so awesome! great job!!!!!!!
Internet Champion (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/27/08 | Reply
Could use some work in terms of punctuation. Your main character struck me as a bit of a Mary Sue. Not bad but could use some fleshing out, in my opinion.
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/24/08 | Reply
haha that would be fun :)
Ghostly girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
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The Insane Writer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
@Sakura Kokoro:
Thankies!
Keepsake<3 (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
Heey, this is pretty good~~ **hug** I want to read more~~ xD Great job and good luck ♥
@SaxGirl:
I need it too! XD lol!
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
@animelover7310:
thanks^_^ (I need itXD) lol.
Thank you! Good luck to you too!
-AL7310
'tis a cool story^____^ Good luck my fellow competitor! *hugs*
~SG
The Insane Writer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/20/08 | Reply
@harvestmoonluvr:
i just hopes it gets submitted into the fan words!
yeah... i did write it! he he..... thankies!
HARVEST GODDESS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/20/08 | Reply
whoooooaaaa did YOU write this??? its awesome!!! freaky!! but...awesome!! LOL you are soooo gunna win XD great job!!
vmpgrl
Grand Otaku | Posted 07/05/10 | Reply
AWESOME! I SO LOVED THIS!
^^
ponyochan
Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/18/08 | Reply
wow! this is so awesome! great job!!!!!!!
Anomaly
Internet Champion (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/27/08 | Reply
Could use some work in terms of punctuation. Your main character struck me as a bit of a Mary Sue. Not bad but could use some fleshing out, in my opinion.
Purple Rose
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/24/08 | Reply
haha that would be fun :)
KiraYagami100
Ghostly girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
.......
animelover7310
The Insane Writer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
@Sakura Kokoro:
Thankies!
Sakura Kokoro
Keepsake<3 (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
Heey, this is pretty good~~ **hug** I want to read more~~ xD
Great job and good luck ♥
Last edited by Sakura Kokoro at 4:30:44 PM EDT on October 22, 2008.
animelover7310
The Insane Writer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
@SaxGirl:
I need it too! XD lol!
SaxGirl
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
@animelover7310:
thanks^_^ (I need itXD) lol.
animelover7310
The Insane Writer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
@SaxGirl:
Thank you! Good luck to you too!
-AL7310
SaxGirl
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
'tis a cool story^____^
Good luck my fellow competitor!
*hugs*
~SG
animelover7310
The Insane Writer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/20/08 | Reply
@harvestmoonluvr:
i just hopes it gets submitted into the fan words!
animelover7310
The Insane Writer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/20/08 | Reply
@harvestmoonluvr:
yeah... i did write it! he he..... thankies!
harvestmoonluvr
HARVEST GODDESS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/20/08 | Reply
whoooooaaaa did YOU write this??? its awesome!!!
freaky!! but...awesome!! LOL
you are soooo gunna win XD
great job!!