Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/16/08 | Reply
Aww... I think this story is pretty sweet and it's also very descriptive with detail. I like how you made the story and that you made the story in the first place. Awesome job ^^
Itachi is 21, Noelle is 20, Deidara is 19, Saara is 18, Rose is 34 (but can make herself look young) and Sasori should also be in his 30's range but he's a puppet so he looks young.
this is really great! I was absolutely captivated. i DID notice the grammar mistakes, but i was just able to correct them in my mind. But this was WONDERFUL!! All three stories. super great! well, it reminded me of what seems to happen to me. how, when you try to get a guys attention, they dont seem to notice. but i really liked this.
btw, i posted CH.3 of MYSTERIOUS PAST and i pposted a new poem, VAMPIRE, on my poem world.
and ur welcome for wanting u to post the story. i am GLAD i requested it. it was well worth it.
what is the age range of these characters? it seems like they are in their 30's.
moka27
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/11/10 | Reply
awww!!!! the sasori story was so Kawii!
ManaTatsumiya
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/22/09 | Reply
Good story, I liked the way it was all joined together like that.
kwajchick
Otakuite | Posted 06/18/09 | Reply
LUV IT!!!!!!!
Shakirie
Otakuite++ | Posted 04/03/09 | Reply
This one is too sweet!!
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/16/08 | Reply
Aww... I think this story is pretty sweet and it's also very descriptive with detail. I like how you made the story and that you made the story in the first place. Awesome job ^^
twilight tiger
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/15/08 | Reply
@gaaragirl911:
thanks!!
give me ur opinion please??
gaaragirl911
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/15/08 | Reply
@twilight tiger:
Itachi is 21, Noelle is 20, Deidara is 19, Saara is 18, Rose is 34 (but can make herself look young) and Sasori should also be in his 30's range but he's a puppet so he looks young.
I'll read it now!!!
Thanks!!!!!!!
Surprise me ;]
twilight tiger
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/14/08 | Reply
this is really great! I was absolutely captivated. i DID notice the grammar mistakes, but i was just able to correct them in my mind. But this was WONDERFUL!! All three stories. super great! well, it reminded me of what seems to happen to me. how, when you try to get a guys attention, they dont seem to notice. but i really liked this.
btw, i posted CH.3 of MYSTERIOUS PAST and i pposted a new poem, VAMPIRE, on my poem world.
and ur welcome for wanting u to post the story. i am GLAD i requested it. it was well worth it.
what is the age range of these characters? it seems like they are in their 30's.
~Twilight Tiger~
X Saara Ann X
Otakuite+ | Posted 12/13/08 | Reply
Dei-Chan !!
I still love this story !
6th time , bahahaha .
I can still remember Julie's expression towards the towel part.
Huuuuh, funny times.
lol.