Oh,wow!This is a beautiful story!I just stumbled across this yesterday,and I decided to read it.You have a writing talent,making the descriptive language and dialouge blend together beautifully.If I worked for a publishing company,I'd definetly make this into a book!Great job!Love it!
Thank you very much :3
I shall try to add more.
I'm currently writing another one.
And this and the other will be turned into manga as well.
Check for my manga once I get it up :3
I love this story! It's so well thought out! Your plot is intricate and unique, your wording and description is amazing, and simply your voice and dictation in your writing is tremendous! You know when to use dialogue and when to use more description, it's not just one over the other. To put it simply, you should be genuinely proud of this piece! It's evident that you put a great amount of effort into it, and it definitely shows. Honestly, I'm somewhat starstruck! The story in itself is amazing. I love the idea, and some of the names you used, if I might add, are very creative. I love that kind of touch in writing. Anyway, you did an amazing job on this. If you have anything else in this sort of genre I'd love to read any of it; I'm quite interested in your writing, you are very talented! ^_^
EnteiWolf
Otakuite++ | Posted 06/21/08 | Reply
@Summer Daydream:
Thanks :3
This is only a short version, and I'm writing the actual book in another of my Worlds :3
Summer Daydream
Mahou Shoujo (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/21/08 | Reply
Oh,wow!This is a beautiful story!I just stumbled across this yesterday,and I decided to read it.You have a writing talent,making the descriptive language and dialouge blend together beautifully.
If I worked for a publishing company,I'd definetly make this into a book!Great job!Love it!
EnteiWolf
Otakuite++ | Posted 03/31/08 | Reply
@Cosmic Rose:
Thank you very much :3
I shall try to add more.
I'm currently writing another one.
And this and the other will be turned into manga as well.
Check for my manga once I get it up :3
Cosmic Rose
Otakuite+ | Posted 03/31/08 | Reply
I love this story! It's so well thought out! Your plot is intricate and unique, your wording and description is amazing, and simply your voice and dictation in your writing is tremendous! You know when to use dialogue and when to use more description, it's not just one over the other. To put it simply, you should be genuinely proud of this piece! It's evident that you put a great amount of effort into it, and it definitely shows. Honestly, I'm somewhat starstruck! The story in itself is amazing. I love the idea, and some of the names you used, if I might add, are very creative. I love that kind of touch in writing. Anyway, you did an amazing job on this. If you have anything else in this sort of genre I'd love to read any of it; I'm quite interested in your writing, you are very talented! ^_^