@SolemnSerpent:

You do? Thanks XD
I've always found it easy to get into a character's head... I just pray that I could get across the sense of arrogance and need that Mello has.

Very nice work: poor Mello! You did a great job portraying Mello’s inner struggles with Near as the successor. I admire your wording...

@Coopy:

Thanks:)
They have a point with his hair, though his body shape does make it difficult. It does refer to him as a "He" though, so...
And yeah, I was aiming for something sad but... self-confident. Like a traditional mindset: The weakness, then the confidence, then the defiance.

@Gildas Magnus:

oh,.i never noticed that. but yea, peeps keep attacking me for my chocolate card. i made Mello a girl and since then, i have been getting comments sayoing that i was wrong. oh well. my bad

@kaory93:

Thanks. And yes, Mello is a boy. Unless something has gone TERRIBLY wrong and for some reason my basic instincts and copies of Death Note manga have been misprinted... In which case... O.O XD

@twilight tiger:

Yup, Mello's a boy. Despite that overly-feminine haircut, look at his... *coughs* lack of chest and the way he sits. Bltantly full of testosterone. XD

It was great :D
lol i didnt even know that mello was a boy ^_^" but now i know XD

nice letter. i didnt know mello was a boy. he looked like a girl. i finished book 7 and is waiting on 8. but mello looks like a grl. hmmmm......but good writing