WOW! It's AMAZING! I absolutely love it and it explains so much more! It actually helps you figure out some of the book too! You did an amazing job!
~bookworm444
Please update it! This story is soooo cool! Y does Mia like Jasper so much, of course he's awsome, but still... And where does she come from? Too many questions! Please continue!
This is amazing, would you please write more seeing as I am a twilight freak, I would really love to read more, it really gives it an interesting twist seeing as it's not Bella.
Yes! Continue this. It's a great start to a fanfic that I think will turn out great. Your writing style is very good and kinda similar to Stephanie Meyer's!!!
Neko Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/17/09 | Reply
This is very good! I love it. You're a great writer. I wonder what your main character's name is and what happened to her??? Why can't she remember anything? Please tell more.
Great beginning! And very expertly written- I enjoyed every sentence :)
I wonder who the main character is, where her real family is and everything else, so I hope to read more soon :)
bookworm4444
Senior Otaku | Posted 05/07/09 | Reply
your welcome ^-^
Haru 93
Otakuite++ | Posted 05/07/09 | Reply
@bookworm4444:
Thank you very much (: And thanks for reading it :D
bookworm4444
Senior Otaku | Posted 05/06/09 | Reply
WOW! It's AMAZING! I absolutely love it and it explains so much more! It actually helps you figure out some of the book too! You did an amazing job!
~bookworm444
littlemissharriet
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/04/09 | Reply
the vampirization process sounds really painful but at least you get to be immortal ... lol... kidding aside, i love the piece.. it is nicely written
bookworm4444
Senior Otaku | Posted 05/03/09 | Reply
it more than answered my questions! Thanks!!!! ^-^
RIAHPAGE
Otakuite | Posted 05/02/09 | Reply
@Haru 93:
nicely written, loved it (Y)
Riah
Haru 93
Otakuite++ | Posted 05/02/09 | Reply
@bookworm4444:
Thank you for reading it ^.^
I hope that answered your questions alright?
bookworm4444
Senior Otaku | Posted 05/02/09 | Reply
That was absolutely awsome! But it's so sad about her life as a human and what happened.... Thanks for writing more ^-^
Haru 93
Otakuite++ | Posted 05/02/09 | Reply
Okay! Just updated again ^.^
The next update will be the last; I've already written it, it's just undergoing a little tweaking right now. (:
Haru 93
Otakuite++ | Posted 04/28/09 | Reply
@Lloyd Irving4:
Oh dear, I'm sorry! That so was not my intention :S
Although I would definitely be a vampire if I could
Haru 93
Otakuite++ | Posted 04/28/09 | Reply
@bookworm4444:
I'm gunna look at both of those things in the next part ^.^ But thanks (:
Lloyd Irving4
Otakuite+ | Posted 04/27/09 | Reply
This makes me sad to be part of the human race...
bookworm4444
Senior Otaku | Posted 04/27/09 | Reply
Please update it! This story is soooo cool! Y does Mia like Jasper so much, of course he's awsome, but still... And where does she come from? Too many questions! Please continue!
Haru 93
Otakuite++ | Posted 04/27/09 | Reply
FINALLY got round to updating :) I've also started on the next part, too, so I hope you still like it ^.^
Haru 93
Otakuite++ | Posted 04/16/09 | Reply
Um, thanks everyone :)
I've started to carry on with it
But it's going to be pretty slow, I have a ton of exams coming up :S
Hmph. >:|
SilentCreek
Otakuite | Posted 04/14/09 | Reply
I loved it you should write more.
xoMiharuChanxo
Senior Otaku | Posted 04/10/09 | Reply
Please continue! It's great! :O
Diamondeyes2010
Otakuite | Posted 04/09/09 | Reply
This is amazing, would you please write more seeing as I am a twilight freak, I would really love to read more, it really gives it an interesting twist seeing as it's not Bella.
Elix3r
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/26/09 | Reply
Very good! Yet it leaves me wanting more
VanitySwoone
Otakuite | Posted 01/22/09 | Reply
Very very well written please continue
Aurora Borealis
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/19/09 | Reply
@Haru 93:
Y-E-S! dont leave me hanging! Just update little by little when you can :)
MewChero
Neko Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/18/09 | Reply
@Haru 93:
Yes! Continue this. It's a great start to a fanfic that I think will turn out great. Your writing style is very good and kinda similar to Stephanie Meyer's!!!
Haru 93
Otakuite++ | Posted 01/18/09 | Reply
@MewChero:
Thanks :) I was toying with the idea of carrying on...do you think I should?
Haru 93
Otakuite++ | Posted 01/18/09 | Reply
@Aurora Borealis:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :)
...Do you think I oughta carry on then? I wasn't gunna, but if you reckon it's a good idea...
MewChero
Neko Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/17/09 | Reply
This is very good! I love it. You're a great writer. I wonder what your main character's name is and what happened to her??? Why can't she remember anything? Please tell more.
Aurora Borealis
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/17/09 | Reply
Great beginning! And very expertly written- I enjoyed every sentence :)
I wonder who the main character is, where her real family is and everything else, so I hope to read more soon :)