Hey, that is a great story Bubby! Its great you two have each other. You two make wonderful friends for each other. Yeah its sad the pasts you two have are not wonderful for either of you, but you can always have a bright and happy future to look forward to together. You two have each other and thatll always keep you going knowing you have at least each other!
^_^ actually, the story was half-based on something that actually happened. Last year, angelo told me everything. His real mom died right after he was born, then his dad remarried. Then, his parents broke up and now he's with his step-mom and her daughter (his sister). So... yeah, it's based on a half-truth.
It was a really touching time for us. I'd been doing my best to organize a surprise party for him, I even invited his friends that didn't like me. So, yeah.
No, there was no alcohol there, although he is of age to have it without consent. ^_^ I'm not, however. :P
This was very sweet and incredibly painful. I really admire your writing skills.
Though, as Keome said, I am wondering if this is 100% fiction or if it is at least partially based on reality. No need to say, of course. I'm just wondering.
You had quite a bit of lovely diction as well as imagery in there. Very well done.
I liked this bit XD "Yosei questioned the puddle, as it was yellowish in color, but excused it as alcohol and not the other possibility that had swam through his head" hahaha. Especially the 'swam through his head' part.
prettykitty319
Otakuite | Posted 09/19/09 | Reply
Hey, that is a great story Bubby! Its great you two have each other. You two make wonderful friends for each other. Yeah its sad the pasts you two have are not wonderful for either of you, but you can always have a bright and happy future to look forward to together. You two have each other and thatll always keep you going knowing you have at least each other!
~Meira~
ShikamaruRocks
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/19/09 | Reply
@TheDarkAngel:
It's great that you two are so close :3 Though, his situation does seem to bite pretty bad...
At least he's got you, right? ^^
TheDarkAngel
Pathetic Diabetic (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/19/09 | Reply
@ShikamaruRocks:
^_^ actually, the story was half-based on something that actually happened. Last year, angelo told me everything. His real mom died right after he was born, then his dad remarried. Then, his parents broke up and now he's with his step-mom and her daughter (his sister). So... yeah, it's based on a half-truth.
It was a really touching time for us. I'd been doing my best to organize a surprise party for him, I even invited his friends that didn't like me. So, yeah.
No, there was no alcohol there, although he is of age to have it without consent. ^_^ I'm not, however. :P
~Yosei~
Thanks for reading! ^_______^
And, then... I met you.
ShikamaruRocks
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/18/09 | Reply
This was very sweet and incredibly painful. I really admire your writing skills.
Though, as Keome said, I am wondering if this is 100% fiction or if it is at least partially based on reality. No need to say, of course. I'm just wondering.
You had quite a bit of lovely diction as well as imagery in there. Very well done.
Keome
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/18/09 | Reply
Awww! Is this a true story!? Good work if it's not and Happy Birthday Angelo! If it's not. Your such a great friend Yosei-chan
Keome-chan
My thoughts create my world
Kaerlyn
Tea pixie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/18/09 | Reply
Awwwwwww.... Just plain Awwwww! ^^
I liked this bit XD "Yosei questioned the puddle, as it was yellowish in color, but excused it as alcohol and not the other possibility that had swam through his head" hahaha. Especially the 'swam through his head' part.