Tveiter Tot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/23/09 | Reply
@:
I wanted the ending to be really good so he didn't have a 100% terrible birthday :P I cant be TOO mean to Adam after all.
I can never decide how much detail I want to add either. I could probably add a bit more than I do.
thanks for the comment WWW! It means a lot, I appreciate it! :D
Hahaha.. this was a good read. I like the concept of integrating the real world and the O in the story. I was expecting a prank though... XD But that would have been too mean. :P
--edit--
Didn't notice a typo there before... I wonder how it got there? Umm... a wizard did it?
> >
Last edited by jomz at 9:05:57 PM EDT on June 7, 2009.
Haha, thanks so much, I really appreciate it! I will try to write something again soon! I've got a summary for a novel I wanted to try and write, but I gave up on it. I might try to pick up on it again. The summary is here if you want to check it out. Thanks again for the comment!
Thanks so much
Adam told me he enjoyed it, im glad he did, and im glad everyone else is enjoying it as well.
Thanks for reading and thanks for the comment!
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/25/09 | Reply
LOL This is great!XD
I can't wait to see Adam's reaction when he reads this, I'll be sure to check again lol. I really like your style, it's very pleasant to read indeed^_^ *hugs*
~SaxGirl~
Last edited by SaxGirl at 11:34:50 AM EDT on May 25, 2009.
Thanks so much! I appreciate what you said (and Adam said) about becoming a good author, it means a lot. I'm glad that it is easy to read and understand! Thats always a good thing :P
Yeah, I had to make the ending good, I couldnt make Adam have a completely 100% terrible b-day :P Like it says at the top of the 1st page, thanks to the people who helped me come up with the ending, i was really stuck and they helped me out
AnimeArchAngel
Tveiter Tot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/19/09 | Reply
@Felcie:
Thanks so much, I really appreciate it ^_^
Felcie
Unicorn Lover (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/17/09 | Reply
Poor Adam... I really like your story, the chat part is a very nice idea!! And it's nice written^^
AnimeArchAngel
Tveiter Tot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/23/09 | Reply
@:
I wanted the ending to be really good so he didn't have a 100% terrible birthday :P I cant be TOO mean to Adam after all.
I can never decide how much detail I want to add either. I could probably add a bit more than I do.
thanks for the comment WWW! It means a lot, I appreciate it! :D
AnimeArchAngel
Tveiter Tot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/07/09 | Reply
@jomz:
Yeah, haha, I didnt want to be too mean to Adam :P
Thanks for the comment! i appreciate it!
jomz
Otaku Summoner (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/06/09 | Reply
Hahaha.. this was a good read. I like the concept of integrating the real world and the O in the story. I was expecting a prank though... XD But that would have been too mean. :P
--edit--
Didn't notice a typo there before... I wonder how it got there? Umm... a wizard did it?
> >
Last edited by jomz at 9:05:57 PM EDT on June 7, 2009.
shizuka101
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/31/09 | Reply
@AnimeArchAngel:
No problem!!!=3
AnimeArchAngel
Tveiter Tot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/30/09 | Reply
@gaaragirl911:
I've heard a few of her songs, I'm trying to get into her music
Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it!
gaaragirl911
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/30/09 | Reply
Great job!!! I love Hikaru Utada!! (owns all her albums)
Very kawaii too!! ^_~
Same as always,
gaaragirl911
Surprise me ;]
AnimeArchAngel
Tveiter Tot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/29/09 | Reply
@shizuka101:
Thanks so much, I really appreciate it!
shizuka101
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/29/09 | Reply
That was well written and pretty interesting.
AnimeArchAngel
Tveiter Tot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/26/09 | Reply
@tachikoma123:
Haha, thanks so much, I really appreciate it! I will try to write something again soon! I've got a summary for a novel I wanted to try and write, but I gave up on it. I might try to pick up on it again. The summary is here if you want to check it out. Thanks again for the comment!
tachikoma123
Otakuite+ | Posted 05/26/09 | Reply
Wicked as story! Your writing style is GENIUS! Hope to read more of your work later ;)
Tachi
AnimeArchAngel
Tveiter Tot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/25/09 | Reply
@ShadowLight:
Thanks so much, I really appreciate it
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/25/09 | Reply
Very cute story! I bet Adam will love this. ^____^
Good job!
The crazy bubbly shadow
AnimeArchAngel
Tveiter Tot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/25/09 | Reply
@SaxGirl:
Thanks so much
Adam told me he enjoyed it, im glad he did, and im glad everyone else is enjoying it as well.
Thanks for reading and thanks for the comment!
SaxGirl
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/25/09 | Reply
LOL This is great!XD
I can't wait to see Adam's reaction when he reads this, I'll be sure to check again lol. I really like your style, it's very pleasant to read indeed^_^ *hugs*
~SaxGirl~
Last edited by SaxGirl at 11:34:50 AM EDT on May 25, 2009.
AnimeArchAngel
Tveiter Tot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/25/09 | Reply
@Clyne Lacus:
Thanks so much! I appreciate what you said (and Adam said) about becoming a good author, it means a lot. I'm glad that it is easy to read and understand! Thats always a good thing :P
Yeah, I had to make the ending good, I couldnt make Adam have a completely 100% terrible b-day :P Like it says at the top of the 1st page, thanks to the people who helped me come up with the ending, i was really stuck and they helped me out
Thanks for the comment!
Clyne Lacus
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/25/09 | Reply
Awwww niceee story~!! ^^
Adam was right, you may become a good author someday =D I like your writing style... It's like flowing ^^ this is well-written XDD
I'm still LOL @ the Bossman, but I'm glad it has good ending :D
Best wishes,
♥~Clyne~♥
AnimeArchAngel
Tveiter Tot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/24/09 | Reply
@:
Keep on singing Boo, keep on singing! ROCK ON!
Thanks for reading
AnimeArchAngel
Tveiter Tot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/24/09 | Reply
@SomeGuy:
It's fine
Thank you SO much! I worked really hard on it. I can't wait to see what Adam says
Thanks so much for publishing it! I really do appreciate it.
SomeGuy
Canadian Liaison (Team) | Posted 05/24/09 | Reply
Sorry this took forever to publish.
But this was cute as all hell. I imagine Adam'll probably drop some bricks when he sees it.