Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/07/09 | Reply
I love this story; it's interesting Hug + favorite
Transient Rain (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/02/09 | Reply
I really like your use of repetition… It adds a really interesting air of it all happening before and the last line is like the final blow. Great job! ^^ (and congrats) ~Tsu
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/15/09 | Reply
Oooh, that's really great! Yeah, defeat makes people think a lot... I'm entering the challenge soon, it won't be easy to beat it! Good work!
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 06/11/09 | Reply
So sad...! But a good read. Great job.
Full of intestines (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/11/09 | Reply
Thank you for entering and meeting all the criteria~!
~NGS
killua2512
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/07/09 | Reply
I love this story; it's interesting
Hug + favorite
tsubasachro
Transient Rain (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/02/09 | Reply
I really like your use of repetition…
It adds a really interesting air of it all happening before and the last line is like the final blow.
Great job! ^^
(and congrats)
~Tsu
Sole Storyteller
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/15/09 | Reply
Oooh, that's really great! Yeah, defeat makes people think a lot...
I'm entering the challenge soon, it won't be easy to beat it! Good work!
cherrichan13
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 06/11/09 | Reply
So sad...! But a good read. Great job.
NinjaGirlSango
Full of intestines (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/11/09 | Reply
Thank you for entering and meeting all the criteria~!
~NGS