I appreciate the critique, I admit the jagged edges are a result of my laziness but the white logo? Well, what do you think should I have made it a darker color or not have the logo there at all?
Full of intestines (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/08/09 | Reply
Nice concept. But the edges of the characters are REALLY jagged and could use a lot of cleaning up. And the big white box slapped in the middle looks way out of place.
It's very well done! I like how you used the city scene in the background!
I've never used the black bars with my own wallies...that's a good idea though! lol! With my one Gackt wallpaper I just brought everything closer together to make it "full screen" since I started it as a Widescreen for my own lappy.
*laugh* I like your reason for dedicating to me!! XD Thanks!! And you're welcome, hahaha. Black bars of death, lol. Yup, I really don't like using them, but if you start on widescreen, then it's really better to do that and not cut anything out. :/ I usually don't use them...if the wall I'm making doesn't really have major stuff that'll be cut off when going to standard.
Very nice! I love the bg. That's a lovely photo. *__* And all the pics you used come together nicely! The extraction on the center Michel could use some refining (around the hair it's really jagged), but aside from that, this is perfect. :) I love it! *hugs* Thanks so much for the dedication, too~ Good luck in the challenge!
xaos
Burning Spirit (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/08/09 | Reply
@NinjaGirlSango:
Ah, I get it now, thanks a lot!
NinjaGirlSango
Full of intestines (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/08/09 | Reply
@xaos:
If you cut the letters out and got ride of the white it'd look 100 times better, or just given the letters a white outline.
~NGS
xaos
Burning Spirit (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/08/09 | Reply
@NinjaGirlSango:
I appreciate the critique, I admit the jagged edges are a result of my laziness but the white logo? Well, what do you think should I have made it a darker color or not have the logo there at all?
NinjaGirlSango
Full of intestines (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/08/09 | Reply
Nice concept. But the edges of the characters are REALLY jagged and could use a lot of cleaning up. And the big white box slapped in the middle looks way out of place.
~NGS
bonitachika792
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/08/09 | Reply
Hey you entered! SEE IT doesn't look bad! It looks good! Thanks for entering.
C ko
Otakuite+ | Posted 05/07/09 | Reply
Now I really like this one son!
ElvesAteMyRamen
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/07/09 | Reply
It's very well done! I like how you used the city scene in the background!
I've never used the black bars with my own wallies...that's a good idea though! lol! With my one Gackt wallpaper I just brought everything closer together to make it "full screen" since I started it as a Widescreen for my own lappy.
Great job and good luck in the contest!!
~*Elves
red kie
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/07/09 | Reply
wow this walpaper looks realy cool!
i love the background and your placement of the charecters ^^
)Oo~ Black rabit ~oO(
Angel Zakuro
bird nerd. (Otaku Angel) | Posted 05/07/09 | Reply
*laugh* I like your reason for dedicating to me!! XD Thanks!! And you're welcome, hahaha. Black bars of death, lol. Yup, I really don't like using them, but if you start on widescreen, then it's really better to do that and not cut anything out. :/ I usually don't use them...if the wall I'm making doesn't really have major stuff that'll be cut off when going to standard.
Very nice! I love the bg. That's a lovely photo. *__* And all the pics you used come together nicely! The extraction on the center Michel could use some refining (around the hair it's really jagged), but aside from that, this is perfect. :) I love it! *hugs* Thanks so much for the dedication, too~ Good luck in the challenge!