Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/22/09 | Reply
*tackle hugs you* Kyahhh!! One of my fave wallpaper makers ever is BACK!! And with an amazing submission, no less!!<3333 ^^
I REALLY love this image, they all look so mysterious(not to mention cool =P)~ the color scheme is fantastic~ it's not often that you see a blend of yellow/bronze tones with blacks. And man, you should write hand-written things more often because your writing is gorgeous!!<333
I noticed the yellow edges around the characters, and perhaps that caused a bit of a rift with the actual illustration and the background? I don't know since wallpaper making isn't my forte xDD You'd know waaay better than me LOL but I just noticed that the yellow edges seemed a bit..er...rough? I hope that's the right word xD perhaps make it a bit smoother to blend in more~
But aside from that, this is beautiful Driff-kun<3 it's always such a pleasure to see your work!! ^^ Keep it up my amazing friend!
Uwaaa~ Thank you so much for those tips! *::*hugs*::* I knew there was some things that I wasn't getting right, because it didn't looked at all how I wanted it to do. I'm glad it wasn't all bad, though. x3
Ooh, sexy sexy! Nice to see a wall from you again, anya! *hugs* I think it's cool, though I agree some things might be off. I love the bg and the colors, but I think that the texture is a bit too strong. I think that is causing some of the lines to look jaggedy...and just too sharp. So maybe try lightening the opacity of the texture? Also, the edges of the png must've been jaggedy from the beginning (not your fault). Try blurring their edges so that maybe the yellow stroke around them will be softer, too.
I like your handwritten stuff~~
But overall, this is cool! I love the colors and the guys and the bg. *__* I just gave you some suggestions on maybe what's wrong. Feel free to dismiss my words, lol. Nice job~
aragorn1014
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/22/09 | Reply
*tackle hugs you* Kyahhh!! One of my fave wallpaper makers ever is BACK!! And with an amazing submission, no less!!<3333 ^^
I REALLY love this image, they all look so mysterious(not to mention cool =P)~ the color scheme is fantastic~ it's not often that you see a blend of yellow/bronze tones with blacks. And man, you should write hand-written things more often because your writing is gorgeous!!<333
I noticed the yellow edges around the characters, and perhaps that caused a bit of a rift with the actual illustration and the background? I don't know since wallpaper making isn't my forte xDD You'd know waaay better than me LOL but I just noticed that the yellow edges seemed a bit..er...rough? I hope that's the right word xD perhaps make it a bit smoother to blend in more~
But aside from that, this is beautiful Driff-kun<3 it's always such a pleasure to see your work!! ^^ Keep it up my amazing friend!
Driffter
Absentminded One (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/21/09 | Reply
@Angel Zakuro:
Uwaaa~ Thank you so much for those tips! *::*hugs*::* I knew there was some things that I wasn't getting right, because it didn't looked at all how I wanted it to do. I'm glad it wasn't all bad, though. x3
noirassasin
Compulsive Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/21/09 | Reply
very cool and neat wallpaper. i love the stock you used. i always have a hard time using something like that. ^^
nice to see a submission from you.
:noir:
Angel Zakuro
bird nerd. (Otaku Angel) | Posted 07/21/09 | Reply
Ooh, sexy sexy! Nice to see a wall from you again, anya! *hugs* I think it's cool, though I agree some things might be off. I love the bg and the colors, but I think that the texture is a bit too strong. I think that is causing some of the lines to look jaggedy...and just too sharp. So maybe try lightening the opacity of the texture? Also, the edges of the png must've been jaggedy from the beginning (not your fault). Try blurring their edges so that maybe the yellow stroke around them will be softer, too.
I like your handwritten stuff~~
But overall, this is cool! I love the colors and the guys and the bg. *__* I just gave you some suggestions on maybe what's wrong. Feel free to dismiss my words, lol. Nice job~