The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/11/09 | Reply
Beautiful poem! I really like the phrase, "eating pieces of nature's tower". It gives a very vivid image of a wildfire curling around the tall trees of a forest. The way you showed both parts of the fire, wild and tame (fireplace) was a neat idea, too. Keeper!
Yuri16
Grand Otaku | Posted 11/12/09 | Reply
@Karmira:
lol thanks
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/11/09 | Reply
Beautiful poem! I really like the phrase, "eating pieces of nature's tower". It gives a very vivid image of a wildfire curling around the tall trees of a forest. The way you showed both parts of the fire, wild and tame (fireplace) was a neat idea, too. Keeper!