Thank you^^ Of course I take constructive criticism well, they're the one for me who can make us improve^^
Actually, for this wallpaper, I didn't want the character to be the main and neither the flower. It's just a touch of magic on it but kinda discreet. The main important thing on it is more the sky which is almost everywhere on it. So... There's no main, for this one, I wanted to have everything at the same level, if I can say things like that. Nothing more important than the others... For what you're saying, I guess I succeeded after all XDD
Your advices came in time, anyway. I have to work on my next wallpaper today or tomorrow~~♪ So I'll do my best to follow your advices ^_~
Last edited by Felcie at 4:52:04 AM CDT on September 12, 2010.
You take constructive criticism well; that is a compliment to your person.
The only reason I said what I did about the flower and gradient of colors is the following: I felt that you were more interested in a hodgepodge of fancy-looking things/effects rather than focusing on a theme for the wallpaper and using that as your base and muse. As it is, there’s no real focus on a main entity. The flower isn’t your main, the character (who I’m not familiar with, unfortunately) also isn’t the main. Even the background, for all its wonderfulness, isn’t main. Instead, you have two, maybe three, depending on the viewer, images acting for dominance where none truly wins. Aside from this, as hinted at, there’s not much of a connecting theme.
I would like to see you visualize a theme (abstract as they sometimes are) and follow that for your next wallpaper. Warp it around a main entity (viz. vector of a character/object/etc.). Of course the character need not be center, you know this. But, well, take my comment with a grain of salt, I suppose. ‘Tis free advice/commentary, so it’s only worth so much as it is.
I guess that's also a question of point of view... For me, the main problem of my wall is the scan of Akira (the character).
Till I'm kind of proud of it, I'll lie if I say to you that I'm gonna changed it. For the flower, because I like it that way and it's for me a nice effect with those little angels out of it, I can't agree with you.
I'm not sure that it'll be obnoxious for all of us but, if you don't like brightness, I guess so, yeah^^; Even if... except the yellow/orange at the bottom, I don't feel it like bright at all.
Anyway, thanks for your comment and for giving your point of view ! That's nice of you and we all need honesty^^ If I had doubts about what you said, be sure it would be helpful but, well, I'm prouder of my BG than my so-so extraction of the scan^^;
Thanks also for thinking that I'm talented, that's really appreciate !
I'll look forward for your next comments because I need to improve anyway and I'm sure your comments will help me too~~♪
I clicked on this because in the thumbnail it looked enchanting, but up close it's too bright and the colors don't compliment one another very well. They might if, maybe, the yellow/orange wasn't so unimportant in the overall image. However, those colors, and also the flower image, feel out of place and thoughtless.
You're clearly talented, at least I think so from this image, but this is still too bright and would be a bit obnoxious as a background on a webpage or desktop.
nice combination of those two beautiful scans! that is so............................................................................................................
Felcie
Unicorn Lover (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/12/10 | Reply
@Wayward Warrior:
Thank you^^ Of course I take constructive criticism well, they're the one for me who can make us improve^^
Actually, for this wallpaper, I didn't want the character to be the main and neither the flower. It's just a touch of magic on it but kinda discreet. The main important thing on it is more the sky which is almost everywhere on it. So... There's no main, for this one, I wanted to have everything at the same level, if I can say things like that. Nothing more important than the others... For what you're saying, I guess I succeeded after all XDD
Your advices came in time, anyway. I have to work on my next wallpaper today or tomorrow~~♪ So I'll do my best to follow your advices ^_~
Last edited by Felcie at 4:52:04 AM CDT on September 12, 2010.
Wayward Warrior
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/11/10 | Reply
@Felcie:
Felcie
Unicorn Lover (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/11/10 | Reply
@Izukorai:
Thank youuuu >__<
I'm glad you like it~~♪
Felcie
Unicorn Lover (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/11/10 | Reply
@Wayward Warrior:
I guess that's also a question of point of view... For me, the main problem of my wall is the scan of Akira (the character).
Till I'm kind of proud of it, I'll lie if I say to you that I'm gonna changed it. For the flower, because I like it that way and it's for me a nice effect with those little angels out of it, I can't agree with you.
I'm not sure that it'll be obnoxious for all of us but, if you don't like brightness, I guess so, yeah^^; Even if... except the yellow/orange at the bottom, I don't feel it like bright at all.
Anyway, thanks for your comment and for giving your point of view ! That's nice of you and we all need honesty^^ If I had doubts about what you said, be sure it would be helpful but, well, I'm prouder of my BG than my so-so extraction of the scan^^;
Thanks also for thinking that I'm talented, that's really appreciate !
I'll look forward for your next comments because I need to improve anyway and I'm sure your comments will help me too~~♪
Felcie
Unicorn Lover (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/11/10 | Reply
@TamaDoodles24:
Thanks I'm really glad you like it ^__^
Felcie
Unicorn Lover (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/11/10 | Reply
@NedzumiNya:
Thank you ^__^
Izukorai
Otakuite++ | Posted 09/10/10 | Reply
soo pretty!! i love the flowers XD
Wayward Warrior
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/10/10 | Reply
TamaDoodles24
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/10/10 | Reply
The colors!!! ....THE COLORS!!! This is SOOOOOOO beautiful!!!!
NedzumiNya
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/10/10 | Reply
Nice work, I love the colours! Good luck in the challenge ~_^
Felcie
Unicorn Lover (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/10/10 | Reply
@Death Nut:
Thank youuuuu >__<
I'm glad you like it~~♪
Death Nut
Grand Otaku | Posted 09/10/10 | Reply
Woow.. great combination!!
It's glowing somehow, really bright and beautiful <33
thanks for your entry
Felcie
Unicorn Lover (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/09/10 | Reply
@josephine12cute:
XDDD
Thank youuuu X3
josephine12cute
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/09/10 | Reply
nice combination of those two beautiful scans! that is so............................................................................................................
yeah! :P