hahaha... its really alright... I guess I figured out that you made this wallpaper in a hurry... Its just that I can't figure out how you did things due to lack of description...
Many people had said that I observe things quite well. I can't even believe that my useless rants are that helpful... Among your works, this one is actually your best one yet (the way I see it)...
I'm sorry if I ever became offensive on the comments... I don't mind giving critique but my critiques are just a bunch of sh*tty rants. I'm happy if you find them positively (?) haha...
Just PM me if you want me to comment on a wallpaper of yours. Not all your submissions really need my good-for-nothing words.
Last edited by josephine12cute at 10:34:13 AM CST on December 3, 2010.
Well, Honestly, I really did this wallpaper in rush and hurry, so it may look bad.. > <
Waaa.. I don't mean to do that..
But anyway,, Thanks for the critique.. ^^
This really help me much to improve my skills.. Hehe.. ^^
because everyone is still learning to make something really good..
It seems like you are a person who is able to assess the overall condition appropriately. It's great .. XD
Sorry to disappoint you, but I will try again in the next contest ..
hahaha
For explanation, really sorry, I did not open the internet again, because a set of replications gather around me, and as an effect I wasn't Able to online .. > <
By the way, Among my wallpapers, the which of them you like the best ..?
I just want to know whether people like, Because I'm trying to make wallpaper like most people .. X)
Next time, when I make another wallpaper, would you mind give me some of your critiques(if it's any)?
~Because you seems like really well at pbserving something..
thank you for entering my challenge! I'm sorry if I responded late since I'm too busy with school. I'll now be judging this wallpaper... here goes... I hope I won't be harsh
AnimePaper mood! The (strict) judging part:
Its quite hard for me to decipher on how should I judge this since I can't find any other things from your description. I really don't know but I'll still judge this based from appearance. Correct me if I'm wrong then.
The thumbnail is pleasing and appealing but when I looked in the full resolution, my eyes are a bit hurt because I see a lot of things.
The main image is a bit blurry. Did you resize this from the wallpaper you made on the monochromatic challenge? I see a lot of things such as a planet and stars, and silhouettes of trees. I can't tell since you didn't link to the sources. The textures (the way I see it) are messy and unorganized. But it depends on what you used, I really can't tell.
I like the effect of the wallpaper giving spotlight to the characters and it directs the viewers to the main focus already. The light effect's brightness is refreshing for the eyes. But the overall appearance (they way things are positioned) gives the wallpaper a bit of unbalance at the left and right sides. Everything's on the center itself. But its not really good to leave the right and left side. It becomes balanced at the bottom part because of the text.
For the text. I suggest that you put away the watermark on the main image. I know you're doing this to avoid getting this wall ripped, but even watermarks and signatures are given consideration when it comes to positioning. The Japanese text title is good. But your own signature is much more noticeable than the title itself. By the way, your signature "mint dash" is too big and the font doesn't suit the charming faces of the main image. Its good that you used a long (and big) signature detail. But you should not put credits of Deviant Art and Google there. That's why we have descriptions, for the creator to mention the credits.
Overall, this is very pleasing and charming wallpaper. I'm not really sure if you made this one exclusively for my challenge. I saw a lot of other versions of this wallpaper and they're not bad. But of course, its still a disappointing feeling for me if you submitted a "revision" and not the "original version" of the wallpaper.
Still thanks for entering. i really appreciate what you did.
BREAK A LEG!!!
:))
Last edited by josephine12cute at 9:04:18 AM CDT on November 5, 2010.
josephine12cute
Otaku Legend | Posted 12/02/10 | Reply
@Mint Dash:
hahaha... its really alright... I guess I figured out that you made this wallpaper in a hurry... Its just that I can't figure out how you did things due to lack of description...
Many people had said that I observe things quite well. I can't even believe that my useless rants are that helpful... Among your works, this one is actually your best one yet (the way I see it)...
I'm sorry if I ever became offensive on the comments... I don't mind giving critique but my critiques are just a bunch of sh*tty rants. I'm happy if you find them positively (?) haha...
Just PM me if you want me to comment on a wallpaper of yours. Not all your submissions really need my good-for-nothing words.
Last edited by josephine12cute at 10:34:13 AM CST on December 3, 2010.
Mint Dash
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/02/10 | Reply
@josephine12cute:
Well, Honestly, I really did this wallpaper in rush and hurry, so it may look bad.. > <
Waaa.. I don't mean to do that..
But anyway,, Thanks for the critique.. ^^
This really help me much to improve my skills.. Hehe.. ^^
because everyone is still learning to make something really good..
It seems like you are a person who is able to assess the overall condition appropriately. It's great .. XD
Sorry to disappoint you, but I will try again in the next contest ..
hahaha
For explanation, really sorry, I did not open the internet again, because a set of replications gather around me, and as an effect I wasn't Able to online .. > <
By the way, Among my wallpapers, the which of them you like the best ..?
I just want to know whether people like, Because I'm trying to make wallpaper like most people .. X)
Next time, when I make another wallpaper, would you mind give me some of your critiques(if it's any)?
~Because you seems like really well at pbserving something..
Mint Dash
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/02/10 | Reply
@:
Ahaha.. Yeah.. ^^
Thank you.. :)
I'm glad you like it..
josephine12cute
Otaku Legend | Posted 11/05/10 | Reply
thank you for entering my challenge! I'm sorry if I responded late since I'm too busy with school. I'll now be judging this wallpaper... here goes... I hope I won't be harsh
AnimePaper mood! The (strict) judging part:
Its quite hard for me to decipher on how should I judge this since I can't find any other things from your description. I really don't know but I'll still judge this based from appearance. Correct me if I'm wrong then.
The thumbnail is pleasing and appealing but when I looked in the full resolution, my eyes are a bit hurt because I see a lot of things.
The main image is a bit blurry. Did you resize this from the wallpaper you made on the monochromatic challenge? I see a lot of things such as a planet and stars, and silhouettes of trees. I can't tell since you didn't link to the sources. The textures (the way I see it) are messy and unorganized. But it depends on what you used, I really can't tell.
I like the effect of the wallpaper giving spotlight to the characters and it directs the viewers to the main focus already. The light effect's brightness is refreshing for the eyes. But the overall appearance (they way things are positioned) gives the wallpaper a bit of unbalance at the left and right sides. Everything's on the center itself. But its not really good to leave the right and left side. It becomes balanced at the bottom part because of the text.
For the text. I suggest that you put away the watermark on the main image. I know you're doing this to avoid getting this wall ripped, but even watermarks and signatures are given consideration when it comes to positioning. The Japanese text title is good. But your own signature is much more noticeable than the title itself. By the way, your signature "mint dash" is too big and the font doesn't suit the charming faces of the main image. Its good that you used a long (and big) signature detail. But you should not put credits of Deviant Art and Google there. That's why we have descriptions, for the creator to mention the credits.
Overall, this is very pleasing and charming wallpaper. I'm not really sure if you made this one exclusively for my challenge. I saw a lot of other versions of this wallpaper and they're not bad. But of course, its still a disappointing feeling for me if you submitted a "revision" and not the "original version" of the wallpaper.
Still thanks for entering. i really appreciate what you did.
BREAK A LEG!!!
:))
Last edited by josephine12cute at 9:04:18 AM CDT on November 5, 2010.