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    Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/11/11 | Reply

    @Morbid Dollie:

    As always, you are MOST WELCOME!x3

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    Strawberry (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/10/11 | Reply

    @josephine12cute:

    Not a freak at all xD
    I understand what you mean~~


    -those with the biggest hearts hurt the most

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    Strawberry (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/10/11 | Reply

    @SaxGirl:

    Wow, thank you! Means SO MUCH X3


    -those with the biggest hearts hurt the most

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    Otaku Legend | Posted 05/10/11 | Reply

    @Morbid Dollie:

    Now this is much better.... although you can brighten the bokeh a little... ahahaha.... I'm such a freak, ain't I?

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    Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/10/11 | Reply

    Personally, I think this is one of your best walls! What you wanted to portray in this is really clear!^^ I rather like the bokeh 'overload', too, because it gives a kind of misty/cloudy/dreamy-ish effect:3 (So you see, it's all a matter of opinion!xD) *hugs & faves*

    ~S.G~

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    Strawberry (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/10/11 | Reply

    @josephine12cute:

    Well, I can always go back and fix it a bit. I have an version that isn't merged, in case I need to fix things......I'll go change the opacity of the bokeh a bit, and when I have more time, I'll probably redo the texture all together! Thanks for the advice x3


    -those with the biggest hearts hurt the most

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    Otaku Legend | Posted 05/10/11 | Reply

    I like the "departure" thing you're trying to portray...

    There are things that bothered me though. It seems there's too much bokeh-overload in the wall 9which can be good or bad) and I'm getting distracted by the bokeh and not the whole wall.

    Your bokeh is a little blurry. It shows when you view in full size. The bokeh you used is 800 x 800 which is quite small for this 1600 x 1200 resolution. The "screen" blending mode somehow made up for the edges of the bokeh although using it too much will have your wall a super bright one with blinding bokeh...

    Typo could have been different....

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    BUT! Definitely, I'm sure to say you have improved a lot in this wall!!!! I'll count this as one of your best works so far :D Keep it up! ;)