Ooh, how happy I am that you decided to simplify the eyes rather than stuff them with sparkles and crap like that :D With close-up walls, I think 80% would do that, and I'm happy you didn't kill this wall by doing so yourself ^^ And I'm always jealous of your lines, no matter how much I try I can't get that uneven effect (all my lines turn out boring D:) Do you use a tablet?
Only thing I'd have to gripe about is the difference in coloring in her hair, I kind of feel like the shadows are too strong and the base too light (maybe if you made the base color darker? It might be just my monitor settings but it looks almost white to me).
And you can ignore the "edit" part of my comment on your post, I hadn't seen you had already updated this ^^"
Edit: oh, you can vexel, believe me. It's just going apeshit with shape layers until you get that messy-yet-good look.
Last edited by sweetdevil at 4:18:29 AM CDT on May 27, 2011.
Oh no.... what I expected is that you're gonna make an effect that is super awesome than the original.... Kinda like rainbows? And super awesome fireworks in her eye? LOL... my imagination.
Its not that bad. I much prefer the new revision... :D So you don't have to touch it again.
Addicted to Sweets (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/26/11 | Reply
Wow!~ This wallpaper is super AWESOME!~ * w *
I loved it soooo much!> 3 < Perfect!~ *_*
The colors in her eyes are pretty!~ [With gradient effect is great too!>///< So beautiful!> w <] She's cute and adorable!~
You're and amazing artist,Kelsey-chan!XD
Keep up the lovely work!> w <
I'm sorry if I'm not that great. .__. I have no idea what unexpected is because you and many others were saying to make the eyes like the original lol...so I did...and then it isn't good enough? XD I just don't know anymore!
It doesn't matter. It's done, and I'm not touching it again!
I just thought that you're gonna do the unexpected... LOL. But it seems you really like it to be as close to the original... Which is really not that bad... You're too awesome so I'm thinking of awesome stuffs.... Hahaha.... Excuse me if I'm so thinking like this...
Hmm? What do you mean? O: I tried to make it look like the original...more like it anyways lol. I just rasterized the colors in the eyes and them smudged them manually (no gradients or anything)....it was hard...and like I said, I didn't know how to go about it otherwise lol. Thanks...I guess? ^^;
I like the new revision. Although the gradient effect on the eyes was not something I expected! XD LOL... Please ignore that... You did say you didn't have an idea on how to do that. But after trying, I'm pretty sure you learned something tricky... *evil grin*
Thanks. <3 And as I just said to josephine, I revised it (the eyes)...and I'll link to the new versions in the description since I don't feel like reuploading here.
Last edited by Angel Zakuro at 6:05:17 PM CDT on May 25, 2011.
I just edited it...well, I submitted the new revisions on AP, so you can just go there and look. :) I'll just link to them on here...too lazy to reupload lol. But nah, it's ok. I totally understand. I think I might like this new version more anyway! XD
Are you mentioning the ones on AP? Oh yes, I quite agree with them... I did not comment on the WIP because it was still a preview. I wasn't sure if you were going to make changes... I guess theO and AP people don't quite think the same. LOL.
Don't worry, its just my opinion... Its not a mortal sin! So please don't take comments too seriously... Its fine just the way it is.
Thanks, that's fine. I think I just am sensitive about her eyes cause I wasn't going to keep them how they are...but when I showed WIP's to you guys on theO, I got lots of people saying how awesome they were like that. And now that I'm done, I'm getting more comments saying to change them. :/ I still like them. But maybe I will try and do a revision with them more like the original (my problem was that I wasn't sure how to lol...) Thanks! <3
I like this wall! I like the idea of having her in colored eyes... Although honestly, its much better if the eye style on the original screenshot is what you did. Her eye colors in shapes somehow didn't attracted me. It would be much better if it was on a gradient effect like the original.
But other than that, the whole vector is nice and clean. Adding this to my faves! :D
Yay! You're very welcome!! :) *hugs* I'm glad you like it!! I saw you commented on AP, too (but no fave??). Thank you! It took some time, but yeah. Glad I could do it for ya.
sweetdevil
Embracing Insanity (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/27/11 | Reply
Ooh, how happy I am that you decided to simplify the eyes rather than stuff them with sparkles and crap like that :D With close-up walls, I think 80% would do that, and I'm happy you didn't kill this wall by doing so yourself ^^ And I'm always jealous of your lines, no matter how much I try I can't get that uneven effect (all my lines turn out boring D:) Do you use a tablet?
Only thing I'd have to gripe about is the difference in coloring in her hair, I kind of feel like the shadows are too strong and the base too light (maybe if you made the base color darker? It might be just my monitor settings but it looks almost white to me).
And you can ignore the "edit" part of my comment on your post, I hadn't seen you had already updated this ^^"
Edit: oh, you can vexel, believe me. It's just going apeshit with shape layers until you get that messy-yet-good look.
Last edited by sweetdevil at 4:18:29 AM CDT on May 27, 2011.
josephine12cute
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/26/11 | Reply
@Angel Zakuro:
Oh no.... what I expected is that you're gonna make an effect that is super awesome than the original.... Kinda like rainbows? And super awesome fireworks in her eye? LOL... my imagination.
Its not that bad. I much prefer the new revision... :D So you don't have to touch it again.
Hanaro Souhi
Addicted to Sweets (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/26/11 | Reply
Wow!~ This wallpaper is super AWESOME!~ * w *
I loved it soooo much!> 3 < Perfect!~ *_*
The colors in her eyes are pretty!~ [With gradient effect is great too!>///< So beautiful!> w <] She's cute and adorable!~
You're and amazing artist,Kelsey-chan!XD
Keep up the lovely work!> w <
*Fav.+Hugs*
Angel Zakuro
bird nerd. (Otaku Angel) | Posted 05/26/11 | Reply
@josephine12cute:
I'm sorry if I'm not that great. .__. I have no idea what unexpected is because you and many others were saying to make the eyes like the original lol...so I did...and then it isn't good enough? XD I just don't know anymore!
It doesn't matter. It's done, and I'm not touching it again!
josephine12cute
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/26/11 | Reply
@Angel Zakuro:
I just thought that you're gonna do the unexpected... LOL. But it seems you really like it to be as close to the original... Which is really not that bad... You're too awesome so I'm thinking of awesome stuffs.... Hahaha.... Excuse me if I'm so thinking like this...
Angel Zakuro
bird nerd. (Otaku Angel) | Posted 05/26/11 | Reply
@josephine12cute:
Hmm? What do you mean? O: I tried to make it look like the original...more like it anyways lol. I just rasterized the colors in the eyes and them smudged them manually (no gradients or anything)....it was hard...and like I said, I didn't know how to go about it otherwise lol. Thanks...I guess? ^^;
josephine12cute
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/26/11 | Reply
@Angel Zakuro:
I like the new revision.
Although the gradient effect on the eyes was not something I expected!XD LOL... Please ignore that... You did say you didn't have an idea on how to do that. But after trying, I'm pretty sure you learned something tricky... *evil grin*But its fine... and its much better! :D
Angel Zakuro
bird nerd. (Otaku Angel) | Posted 05/25/11 | Reply
@Blue Latte:
Thanks. <3 And as I just said to josephine, I revised it (the eyes)...and I'll link to the new versions in the description since I don't feel like reuploading here.
Last edited by Angel Zakuro at 6:05:17 PM CDT on May 25, 2011.
Angel Zakuro
bird nerd. (Otaku Angel) | Posted 05/25/11 | Reply
@josephine12cute:
I just edited it...well, I submitted the new revisions on AP, so you can just go there and look. :) I'll just link to them on here...too lazy to reupload lol. But nah, it's ok. I totally understand. I think I might like this new version more anyway! XD
Blue Latte
Curious Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/25/11 | Reply
Her eyes are so beautiful. But like Sephine said, I think it would be prettier if you used gradient effect for the eyes. Anyway, awesome vector <3
Don't have AP account, I'll just fave here.
I believe that happy girls are the prettiest girls <3
josephine12cute
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/25/11 | Reply
@Angel Zakuro:
Are you mentioning the ones on AP? Oh yes, I quite agree with them... I did not comment on the WIP because it was still a preview. I wasn't sure if you were going to make changes... I guess theO and AP people don't quite think the same. LOL.
Don't worry, its just my opinion... Its not a mortal sin! So please don't take comments too seriously... Its fine just the way it is.
Angel Zakuro
bird nerd. (Otaku Angel) | Posted 05/25/11 | Reply
@josephine12cute:
Thanks, that's fine. I think I just am sensitive about her eyes cause I wasn't going to keep them how they are...but when I showed WIP's to you guys on theO, I got lots of people saying how awesome they were like that. And now that I'm done, I'm getting more comments saying to change them. :/ I still like them. But maybe I will try and do a revision with them more like the original (my problem was that I wasn't sure how to lol...) Thanks! <3
ichitaka05
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/25/11 | Reply
@Angel Zakuro:
What? I didn't fav it over there? I gonna do it asap!
josephine12cute
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/25/11 | Reply
(Copy paste from AP...)
I like this wall! I like the idea of having her in colored eyes... Although honestly, its much better if the eye style on the original screenshot is what you did. Her eye colors in shapes somehow didn't attracted me. It would be much better if it was on a gradient effect like the original.
But other than that, the whole vector is nice and clean. Adding this to my faves! :D
Angel Zakuro
bird nerd. (Otaku Angel) | Posted 05/24/11 | Reply
@ichitaka05:
Yay! You're very welcome!! :) *hugs* I'm glad you like it!! I saw you commented on AP, too (but no fave??). Thank you! It took some time, but yeah. Glad I could do it for ya.
ichitaka05
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/24/11 | Reply
YAY~~~~~!!!!!! I'M SO HAPPY!!!!!!! I'M TOTALLY GONNA PUT THIS AS MY DESKTOP ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks again!!!!