Ah, I can see what you're saying now, some of the detail on the top of her head did get lost a little there. I can probably darken that area and hopefully reduce some of the blur. It's probably from one of the color layers that's on lighten and is doing something funky to her head XD Haha, and polite and calm is the only way to go~ I'm not going to blow up at you because you noticed something I didn't~ ;D Thanks a bunch, I'll go fix it as soon as I can.
[Edit] Aaand fixed~ The perpetrator was indeed a color layer that was doing something weird. An update and a layer mask later and it should be fixed, let me know what you think~
Last edited by Dark Flame 3479 at 1:21:20 PM CDT on June 18, 2011.
"Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead."
I was referring to her bangs area, mostly, the blur you used looks like Smart Blur. I've seen it around in wallpapers that the creators want to "disguise" as vectors (not saying you did, just stating the context), since it's a relatively quick way to make a scan look simplified/of better quality; unfortunately, this usually backfires and makes the image look blocky instead - again, only her face area looks like this, the rest of the scan (curtains, dress etc.) looks alright. I thought you used that filter, hence my comment, thank you for being polite and calm about discussing this :]
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/16/11 | Reply
Wow, you really did a wonderful job making this scan come to life. I love the colors and I especially love the soft look overall. The contrast and blues and oranges is fabulous and adds depth to the wind passing through her long beautiful hair. This radiates innocence and sunshine, even magic. Your words fit perfectly, for the wallpaper, and a tribute to CLAMP.
Honestly. Great job. i love it.One of the greatest Wallpapers I've seen from the challenge. I'll look at the rest of your work. If I like it enough. I'll subscribe you. This piece in particular. Is amazing. :]
Not quite sure where you're seeing the blur, there's only a 0.3 Gaussian blur on the lowest layer to soften the image since the original scan was very rough, maybe I'm just misunderstanding your description. I'm extremely interested in constructive feedback since no one ever leaves any, so if you could explain in a different way/more detail in another comment or PM, I'd really appreciate it~ ;D
[Edit] Perhaps your looking for something more like this. [Link]
Last edited by Dark Flame 3479 at 3:39:04 PM CDT on June 15, 2011.
"Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead."
I think what I like most about this are the colors, you did a good job of enhancing them. The text in the background makes for a pretty good subtle detail, too. However, I think you overdid it with the blurring, one thing that looks good about CLAMP scans are the textures and I think you should have kept that look. Overall, it's a good wallpaper, just slightly overfiltered ^_~ Good luck in the challenge, by the way!
Dark Flame 3479
Infiltrator (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/18/11 | Reply
@sweetdevil:
Ah, I can see what you're saying now, some of the detail on the top of her head did get lost a little there. I can probably darken that area and hopefully reduce some of the blur. It's probably from one of the color layers that's on lighten and is doing something funky to her head XD Haha, and polite and calm is the only way to go~ I'm not going to blow up at you because you noticed something I didn't~ ;D Thanks a bunch, I'll go fix it as soon as I can.
[Edit] Aaand fixed~ The perpetrator was indeed a color layer that was doing something weird. An update and a layer mask later and it should be fixed, let me know what you think~
Last edited by Dark Flame 3479 at 1:21:20 PM CDT on June 18, 2011.
"Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead."
sweetdevil
Embracing Insanity (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/18/11 | Reply
@Dark Flame 3479:
I was referring to her bangs area, mostly, the blur you used looks like Smart Blur. I've seen it around in wallpapers that the creators want to "disguise" as vectors (not saying you did, just stating the context), since it's a relatively quick way to make a scan look simplified/of better quality; unfortunately, this usually backfires and makes the image look blocky instead - again, only her face area looks like this, the rest of the scan (curtains, dress etc.) looks alright. I thought you used that filter, hence my comment, thank you for being polite and calm about discussing this :]
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/17/11 | Reply
@Dark Flame 3479:
You are very welcome ^^ Good luck in the contest![](http://www.theotaku.com/global/images/icons/female-smile.gif)
Dark Flame 3479
Infiltrator (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/17/11 | Reply
@Karmira:
Wow~ What a wonderful comment~ I'm glad you think so highly of it, thank you very much~ ;D
"Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead."
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/16/11 | Reply
Wow, you really did a wonderful job making this scan come to life. I love the colors and I especially love the soft look overall. The contrast and blues and oranges is fabulous and adds depth to the wind passing through her long beautiful hair. This radiates innocence and sunshine, even magic. Your words fit perfectly, for the wallpaper, and a tribute to CLAMP.
TwinkLes
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/16/11 | Reply
the colors in this are amazing! Nice job and thanks for entering!
LuniKat
Otakuite+ | Posted 06/16/11 | Reply
Honestly. Great job. i love it.One of the greatest Wallpapers I've seen from the challenge. I'll look at the rest of your work. If I like it enough. I'll subscribe you. This piece in particular. Is amazing. :]
Dark Flame 3479
Infiltrator (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/15/11 | Reply
@sweetdevil:
Not quite sure where you're seeing the blur, there's only a 0.3 Gaussian blur on the lowest layer to soften the image since the original scan was very rough, maybe I'm just misunderstanding your description. I'm extremely interested in constructive feedback since no one ever leaves any, so if you could explain in a different way/more detail in another comment or PM, I'd really appreciate it~ ;D
[Edit] Perhaps your looking for something more like this. [Link]
Last edited by Dark Flame 3479 at 3:39:04 PM CDT on June 15, 2011.
"Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead."
sweetdevil
Embracing Insanity (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/15/11 | Reply
I think what I like most about this are the colors, you did a good job of enhancing them. The text in the background makes for a pretty good subtle detail, too. However, I think you overdid it with the blurring, one thing that looks good about CLAMP scans are the textures and I think you should have kept that look. Overall, it's a good wallpaper, just slightly overfiltered ^_~ Good luck in the challenge, by the way!
DistantStar
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/15/11 | Reply
Oohhhh so pretty! :)
PinkishLemonade
Otakuite | Posted 06/15/11 | Reply
Very nice colors![](http://www.theotaku.com/global/images/icons/female-smile.gif)