Alright now the things you did to the wall makes more sense. Its a great wall, nothing is really wrong with it but at first glance I looks like a little more could have been done. But now I see.
I do hope you take my feedback into consideration in the future, if not its fine. :3
I didnt use Purple for my text color, because the BG is purple and black so i didnt want it to be unnoticeable and the fact that Dark has purple hair, i didnt want to much of the color. So i went with the white to match hes pants and jacket, plus theres a little white in the BG so i wanted the white to pop out. but thank you
I wanted this to be a little simple, so i didnt wanna add too much to the BG. but thank you
The reason why i have the quote i used on this is because: if you look on the BG it looks like black hole is forming. Thats why i used that quote.
Ok, I know you made it out of boredom but i'm gonna give my two cents since this is your latest wall. I'm giving my feedback a test run since I don't do it often. c:
I'm loving the typography and the way you used the render(Dark is awesome) but I think you could blend the text with the BG a bit more or give it a purple color. Though it does match the white that Dark has on.
I'm not to fond of the BG(this is my opinion). I think you could add more to it to spice it up. Its a bit plain to me even though it has a nice texture. You could maybe layer an image over it or add a texture to give it more texture or add some effect brushes(Like I do). Though since you don't use brushes or textures I'd say just layer a few more images to give more effect. The reason i'm not fond of the BG is cause it doesn't really go along with the themr of "soaring" and "flying" much. It just matches and its there to me. I think it'd be nice for the BG to match the quote a bit more if you know what I mean.
I know you're not fond of "busy" things but you don't have to make it busy just add a bit more to it. More could have been done.
Other than that great wall. I love your use of typography and your choice of BG and how you placed the render.
Sorry if my feedback is too blunt. Its just how I think it could be made better. :3
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/09/11 | Reply
@HelloKatty:
yeah, its sometimes good to hear the reasons behind things. but i understand why you said what ya did
i will keep it in mind
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars
HelloKatty
Protos Heis (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/09/11 | Reply
@xNotUnderstood:
Alright now the things you did to the wall makes more sense. Its a great wall, nothing is really wrong with it but at first glance I looks like a little more could have been done. But now I see.
I do hope you take my feedback into consideration in the future, if not its fine. :3
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/09/11 | Reply
@HelloKatty:
its well liked to have feedback
I didnt use Purple for my text color, because the BG is purple and black so i didnt want it to be unnoticeable and the fact that Dark has purple hair, i didnt want to much of the color. So i went with the white to match hes pants and jacket, plus theres a little white in the BG so i wanted the white to pop out. but thank you
I wanted this to be a little simple, so i didnt wanna add too much to the BG. but thank you
The reason why i have the quote i used on this is because: if you look on the BG it looks like black hole is forming. Thats why i used that quote.
But thank you very much ^^
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars
HelloKatty
Protos Heis (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/09/11 | Reply
Ok, I know you made it out of boredom but i'm gonna give my two cents since this is your latest wall. I'm giving my feedback a test run since I don't do it often. c:
I'm loving the typography and the way you used the render(Dark is awesome) but I think you could blend the text with the BG a bit more or give it a purple color. Though it does match the white that Dark has on.
I'm not to fond of the BG(this is my opinion). I think you could add more to it to spice it up. Its a bit plain to me even though it has a nice texture. You could maybe layer an image over it or add a texture to give it more texture or add some effect brushes(Like I do). Though since you don't use brushes or textures I'd say just layer a few more images to give more effect. The reason i'm not fond of the BG is cause it doesn't really go along with the themr of "soaring" and "flying" much. It just matches and its there to me. I think it'd be nice for the BG to match the quote a bit more if you know what I mean.
I know you're not fond of "busy" things but you don't have to make it busy just add a bit more to it. More could have been done.
Other than that great wall. I love your use of typography and your choice of BG and how you placed the render.
Sorry if my feedback is too blunt. Its just how I think it could be made better. :3
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/09/11 | Reply
@Hanako Sho:
thank you :D
same here =w=
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars
Hanako Sho
Grand Otaku | Posted 07/09/11 | Reply
Wah! Awesome job :D
I like Dark