at least they're honest^_^

first of all, nice pic, you do the kingdom justice, the poem wuz good 2, everything doesn't have to be like the original...

Hey, I like the kind of haziness on the picture, but next time don't put "..." at the end of the phrases. It's not there on the credits or the actual poem, so you don't have to add them. Also, "Now I will step forward to realize this wish" is grouped with the first two sentences. I'm being kind of nitpicky, so sorry about that, but that IS how the poem goes. The picture is good, though.