Hehehehe, I'm typically not a fan of this kind, but I went with it. Um actually I just made them up as I wrote it. I literally had no idea what I was doing until it happened. And I don't even know their names (and I kept them nameless intentionally to see if I could achieve an acceptable level of character development without naming them--an idea which I shamelessly stole from Invisible Man) But omg thank you.
DARN THE CLICK. Autocorrect was seriously cramping my style. It doesn't know how to write. >.< BUT I KNOW OMG. I had to steal wifi from the back porch of the condo, and I wrote the majority of this story whilst being mercilessly burned by the sun on the beach (until I covered my entire body with two towels and instead boiled beneath them). But yeah. Never. Again.
Oh my gosh, way to be a buzz-killer, spoiler bar. D:
I'll admit it. I'm a sucker for stories like this. Or just a sucker for stories in general. Are these two characters you've been sitting on for a while, or were they just made up for the prompt? They seem very well thought out. Color me impressed!
And the only error I found was "click" instead of "clock." So, no biggie and props for writing this on NOTEPAD on your PHONE *shudders in horror at the thought*
WyvernWings
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/03/13 | Reply
@MashMadness:
xD It got too sappy for me omg. XDDD
Hehehehe, I'm typically not a fan of this kind, but I went with it. Um actually I just made them up as I wrote it. I literally had no idea what I was doing until it happened. And I don't even know their names (and I kept them nameless intentionally to see if I could achieve an acceptable level of character development without naming them--an idea which I shamelessly stole from Invisible Man) But omg thank you.
DARN THE CLICK. Autocorrect was seriously cramping my style. It doesn't know how to write. >.< BUT I KNOW OMG. I had to steal wifi from the back porch of the condo, and I wrote the majority of this story whilst being mercilessly burned by the sun on the beach (until I covered my entire body with two towels and instead boiled beneath them). But yeah. Never. Again.
WyvernWings
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/03/13 | Reply
@Kazamas-Keyblade:
(Me either xD but thank you so much)
Awww thank you <3
MashMadness
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/02/13 | Reply
Oh my gosh, way to be a buzz-killer, spoiler bar. D:
I'll admit it. I'm a sucker for stories like this. Or just a sucker for stories in general. Are these two characters you've been sitting on for a while, or were they just made up for the prompt? They seem very well thought out. Color me impressed!
And the only error I found was "click" instead of "clock." So, no biggie and props for writing this on NOTEPAD on your PHONE *shudders in horror at the thought*
Kazamas-Keyblade
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/02/13 | Reply
Stories like these aren't my type, but I enjoyed this.
Eloquently written.